FF:DESTINY IT IS(Updated)PART 7 PAGE 19(26/09/2017) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Toulup

Awesome update. Waiting for the next one.

Thanks for the pm.😃

thanks dear😊
You are most welcome😃
Will update soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
I like it so much.thankz alot dii Eagerly waiting for the secret to be revealed...keep writing dii...lagtha he mein late padi he..so sorry dii...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Bihaan_love

varun...mujhe start me laga tha k tpk cvs will show varun pair with bihaan sis kiran bt cvs ne vo bhi jodi banane nhi thi ...😡

Same here.. Maine v yahi socha tha.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Ow - in such a short time so many posts to and fro...😃
First of all, dear Pooja, congrats to you : you have joined the awesome list of Fab IF FF writers 👏

The story reads very nicely, but I was wondering: how come Thapki would call her PILs 'Mom' and 'Dad'? 😆... and then be wearing a sari?? 😆😆
You understand, na? The first indicates a mod girl (who'd wear either ThaHaan era or Bani type of clothes), the second would show her a CVs type 40+woman 😆😆😆

This is reminiscent of IF ways of looking at a ThaHaan track, na 😉

But, please, please, keep rolling on as you are - looking forward to the updates - asap.




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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Second, dear Rinku: this is a great suggestion - to write for the Forum like this, and stretching its life ... possibly till Kingdom Comes 😆

Honoured you mention me in the line of could-be FabIFFF listees but, regrettably, for the immediate moment I am swamped with some document research work. But I shall keep on following all you folks (e)FF(orts) with great interest and eagerness 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz

I urge others to also give writing a try.. Granny, Sania, Aisha di etc. they can also try their hands at writing something for thahaan or manyasa.. Other members too..



I am thinking abt writing some ffs. All I m worried abt is how will I finish if the forum gets closed. can some one confirm that for how long will this forum be open after the show ends???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
A very nice start.. I loved it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Part 2 also very interesting n romantic n lovely... Plz make updates a bit longer n more conversation n romance between thahaan. ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: pooja2109

After kissing his wife as she wanted bihaan raised his head and looked at thapki as thapki was also looking at her husband when suddenly her eyes fell on the clock which was indicating that its 8: a.m


Thapki: Bihaan get up its late and you are also getting late by saying so she kissed his cheeks and got to take her clothes from the wardrobe and giving bihaan a glance she went into the bathroom to take bath.After that bihaan took his mobile and again called the person with whom he was talking previously.His expressions changed and indicared something serious.He said ok and cut the call closing his eyes shut as if he is in deep thoughts.


After 10 minutes thapki came out after bath wearing a baby pink saree with a golden blouse and hairs all wet and saw bihaan there sitting with closed eyes.She sighed and sat on dressing table chair and started combing her hair and afterwards wore mangalsutra and applied sindoor and turned towards bihaan and called him

Thapki:Bihaan

Bihaan: hmm

Thapki:Go and get ready you are getting late
On this bihaan got up took his clothes and went to freshen up.

Thapki too left to prepare breakfast.
After sometime Rhapki came to their room where bihaan was getting ready.Thapki came from behind and made him wear his coat.
After that Bihaan turned and thapki tied the tie around his neck while bihaan was looking at his wife all the time.

Bihaan and Thapki came downstairs where everyone was already seated.ThaHaan came to dining space and greeted everyone

Bihaan:Good Morning Dad

Balvinder:Good Morning Bihaan

Bihaan:Good Morning mom

Vasundhara:Good Morning my prince(sweetly).

On this Bihaan chuckled and smiled and sat down to do his breakfast.

Thapki: Good Morning Dad and Mom.

Balvinder and Vasundhara: Good Morning Princess both smiling.

After greeting all all the daughter in laws started serving their husbands.

After sometime Balvinder said to Bihaan

Balvinder:Bihaan you know na today's day us important.

Bihaan:yes and smiled

After finishing their breakfast Balvinder announced

Balvinder:I have to announce something and said all of you be ready in the evening ar sharp 7: p.m

All the ladies said yes

After that a the men got up to leave for their work
Bihaan took blessings from vasundhara and headed towards the entrance where he stopped and saw thapki approaching him.

Thapki: Mr. Pandey you are forgotting something and smiled slyly.

Bihaan: Am i and pretended to be thinking and slowly chuckled by seeing thapki's face

Bihaan: How i can forgot the most important thing and came closer to thapki and kissed her forehead while thapki closed her eyes after that bihaan left .

AFTERNOON

ThaHaan Room

Thapki was sitting on the couch and reading a magazine while she remembered what balvinder announced.

Thapki thought what may be the reason and thought what she will wear for the evening.

Suddenly her mobile rang indicating a message she quickly saw it and smiled involuntarily and opened the message that read...

Bihaan: lunch done

Thapki:yes and you

Bihaan:Nope will eat after the work is finished

Thapki:eat something as you do not have a habit of skipping lunch.

Bihaan:sure i will don't get worried.ok see you in evening

Thapki :Ok

Thapki:Wanna ask you something

Bihaan: yes

Thapki:what i will wear in the evening as dad said to be ready so

Bihaan:just check our wardrobe once and you will find it

Thapki:Ok(excitedly)

Bihaan:Love you sweetheart

Thapki: Love You too Jaan

Bihaan: Ok bye

Thapki: Bye


A/N

All the characters here are same as show
But a change here (my style)
Dhruv is a adopted son of Pandey's (*wink😆)
Furthur details you all will get later and about the suspense too😊
Tell me how was it
Feel free to express your feelings.



Wow. U r too good yaar. Loved every single word of it. Ur style of writing is v mature. Can't wait for the next update. Really loving how everyone is gathered here to read ur update. Feels so nice to c this much activity in this forum

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