My idea of how this track could end.

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My idea of how this track could end. It is just a funny story, don't take it seriously.

Someone named Bablu comes in the show. He was a scientist but due to some experiments going wrong, he is not allowed to continue doing research. He is a funny guy and likes to talk in French sometimes.

The track:

Taking her shawl, she covered her head and made her way out of the house. About some minutes of walking, she finally spotted Bablu, the scientist.

Bablu: Bonsoir. Comment a va? (Hello. How are you?)

Shraddha( Not understanding what he said): Why did you called me at this time? If someone else had picked up the phone...

Bablu( interrupting her): I have called you for my payments for my potions.

Shraddha: Ha! Very funny! I have already paid you. Don't you remember? Invent some pills to have a better memory.

Bablu: My memory is not weak. The prices of my products have risen. I now have another client who is willing to pay me whatever price I demand. She is very pleased with my potions. She has already taken a potion of halucination, one for making eyes bleed and one to get you zoned out completely.

Shraddha: You never told me you have invented these.

Bablu: These are my new products. I hadn't even tested them but according to her they are working properly. So, you will have to pay me more so that I sell my products to you and do not reveal your truth.

Shraddha: Oye! I'm not interested in your products. I have already got what I wanted and don't you dare to say anything to anyone, else you will find yourself in jail soon. Goodbye. You have wasted enough of my time.

Saying this she started to leave. She noticed Bablu did not move an inch.

Bablu : Don't worry madam I'm waiting for my new client. Here she is coming. Hide behind this tree if you don't want her to know your truth even if you don't know her.

On seeing the client, Shraddha's eyes grew wide. She immediately remembered Thapki's naagin dance and understood why Thapki behaved so strangely.

Shraddha( thinking): Looks like Neha did not like her new bhabhi. Good, now Thapki will not be able to support her sister as she is not herself.

Soon Neha left.

Bablu: Shraddha madam, you can come out she went. Brillant lady. She fooled her partner by saying this water is from some magical pond. This world is full of foolish person.

Shraddha: Enough of your blabber! I have to return home before someone wakes up.

Shraddha(thinking): And after Neha is asleep.

Bablu: Au revoir.(Goodbye)

Shraddha once again ignored him.

After half an hour

Shraddha enters her room and faces the mirror, grinning.

Shraddha: How can I use this information for my benefit? I can try to find this Neha's entire truth and blackmail her to leave this house with Kabir. Dhruv will be obliged to take care of me and accept me as his wife. Tomorrow I will try to find her partner. A foolish person. Who can that be? Shankar?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Toulup

My idea of how this track could end.

Someone named Bablu comes in the show. He was a scientist but due to some experiments going wrong, he is not allowed to continue doing research. He is a funny guy and likes to talk in French sometimes.

The track:

Taking her shawl, she covered her head and made her way out of the house. About some minutes of walking, she finally spotted Bablu, the scientist.

Bablu: Bonsoir. Comment a va? (Hello. How are you?)

Shraddha( Not understanding what he said): Why did you called me at this time? If someone else had picked up the phone...

Bablu( interrupting her): I have called you for my payments for my potions.

Shraddha: Ha! Very funny! I have already paid you. Don't you remember? Invent some pills to have a better memory.

Bablu: My memory is not weak. The prices of my products have risen. I now have another client who is willing to pay me whatever price I demand. She is very pleased with my potions. She has already taken a potion of halucination, one for making eyes bleed and one to get you zoned out completely.

Shraddha: You never told me you have invented these.

Bablu: These are my new products. I hadn't even tested them but according to her they are working properly. So, you will have to pay me more so that I sell my products to you and do not reveal your truth.

Shraddha: Oye! I'm not interested in your products. I have already got what I wanted and don't you dare to say anything to anyone, else you will find yourself in jail soon. Goodbye. You have wasted enough of my time.

Saying this she started to leave. She noticed Bablu did not move an inch.

Bablu : Don't worry madam I'm waiting for my new client. Here she is coming. Hide behind this tree if you don't want her to know your truth even if you don't know her.

On seeing the client, Shraddha's eyes grew wide. She immediately remembered Thapki's naagin dance and understood why Thapki behaved so strangely.

Shraddha( thinking): Looks like Neha did not like her new bhabhi. Good, now Thapki will not be able to support her sister as she is not herself.

Soon Neha left.

Bablu: Shraddha madam, you can come out she went. Brillant lady. She fooled her partner by saying this water is from some magical pond. This world is full of foolish person.

Shraddha: Enough of your blabber! I have to return home before someone wakes up.

Shraddha(thinking): And after Neha is asleep.

Bablu: Au revoir.(Goodbye)

Shraddha once again ignored him.

After half an hour

Shraddha enters her room and faces the mirror, grinning.

Shraddha: How can I use this information for my benefit? I can try to find this Neha's entire truth and blackmail her to leave this house with Kabir. Dhruv will be obliged to take care of me and accept me as his wife. Tomorrow I will try to find her partner. A foolish person. Who can that be? Shankar?

🤣di what an idea😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is too good 👏 waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You wrote it atleast it has logic that a scientist will bring out new chemicals... but who will explain to cvs.. Fabulous... please do continue dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was not planning to complete the story but I will do it if I get time.
Till now everything Thapki did could be justified but now she is floating in the air. Mr Goldfish is too cool.
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Originally posted by: Toulup

I was not planning to complete the story but I will do it if I get time.
Till now everything Thapki did could be justified but now she is floating in the air. Mr Goldfish is too cool.

today she will float in air... I wish she goes to heaven forever and don't come back to disturb bihaan 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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While reading assume that Thapki did not fly. She just hallucinated that she did. It is the 2nd day of the competition. Bihaan managed to answer the questions based on his past experiences and remembering what he used to read to Bauji. (newspaper)The competition is not like KBC. There are several competitors playing at the same time.

The competiotion was about to start and yet Thapki was not here. Bihaan kept glancing at the clock nervously.

Vasu( Sensing Bihaan nervousness): Don't worry beta! I'm sure today also you will to answer every question correctly.

Bihaan: Today, we will know whether I'm worth of winning or not. If I don't win, we will lose our home because of me.

Vasu: No. Our home is where we live. Pandey Nivas will be only a house not our home. Moreover we have more time to obtain the money even if you don't win. I trust you.

Announcement: All participants, please come on stage.

After half an hour at break time

Suman: Wow Bihaan devarji, you gave all correct answers.

Preeti: We did not know you were so intelligent.

Bihaan gave a weak smile and moved away from there to take some fresh air. His phone started to ring.

Bihaan: Hello. Who is this?

Muffled voiced: Bihaan. Come fast... Home...

The call suddenly ended.

Bihaan(in a low voice): Thapki...

Wasting no time, he rushed to his motorcycle and left the venue.

Thapki( in auto rickshaw):I'm so late. Firstly, I found myself in the forest. Then Shankar was trying to keep me at home. Why was she preventing me from going to the game's venue? Even Neha was forcing me to drink water and have my breakfast. What has happened to them?

Suddenly, she sees Bihaan riding his motorcycle on the opposite lane in the opposite direction, heading home.

Thapki: Please, follow that motorcycle which just passed.

After 1-2 minutes, Bihaan saw the rickshaw following him and stopped.

Thapki(After paying the driver): Bihaan, what are you doing here? What happened to the competition?

Bihaan( realising how foolish it was to leave the competition): Did you called me?( Showing Thapki the number at the same time)

Thapki: No. Let me check if I have saved this number on my phone.

Thapki(shocked) It is Neha's number.

Bihaan: Let's head home she must be in danger.

Thapki: I just came from home she is alright. I'll go and check. Return to the competition.

Bihaan: But, I need you there.

Thapki: I'll call at home and ask some servant to check on her. Meanwhile go. After the call, I'll take the rickshaw.

At the competition's venue

Suman: Where is Bihaan devarji? Only 5 mins is left for the break to end.

Just then Bihaan comes and he is ushered to his place by Vasu.

After 2 mins Thapki arrives there and go to talk to Bihaan.

Thapki: She is alright. Perhaps, she was playing a prank on you. Concentrate on the game. Good luck.

Seeing this Kabir comes there.

Kabir: Thapki, you came here to watch your husband host this event?

Thapki: I came to support my husband so that he wins. Don't forget Kabir, our marriage was a fake one.

Bihaan smiled. He recalls that yesterday Thapki told him the truth about their marriage. Later that night, Bihaan talked to a lawyer who clarified his doubts when he said Thapki, that is Vaani Bihaan Pandey did not use her official signature and so they are not divorced. Legally, Thapki and him were still husband and wife.

Present.

This thought boosted up Bihaan's confidence. He did not need to win. He had Thapki and his family on his side and this matters the most.

After some hours

Bihaan and his family returned home with the trophy. Even if he did not win the first prize but the silver trophy was the proof of his competence. Once everyone was gathered, Bihaan told them that Thapki was still his wife and the remaining truth he knew. Hearing this Shankar couldn't keep herself calm and faced Bihaan.

Shankar: All those things I did for us. You just have forgotten everything. I had to face Kosi ma to prove Thapki was mad. I had to befriend this Neha, so that I can obtain your love. We have made her drink the magical water, so that she stays far from us.

Shraddha: It was not magical water but some potions Neha bought. By the way where is she and her brother? Bihaan has already earned 4 crores today. Kabir can get part of his payment today itself.

Bihaan: Did you know about what they were feeding Thapki? Yet, you did not say anything.

Shraddha: Would you have believed me if I said all these? No. Instaed of questioning me call the police and get them arrested.

After 15 mins.

The police came and arrested Shankar. Kabir begged them to save her sister as she is unwell. They agreed. Bihaan forced Kabir to take his 4 crores and promised him to repay all the debts soon, before the 1 month ends.


The end.

Edited by Toulup - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb, awesome, brilliant...i loved it to the core 😃
easily my favourite part was:

Thapki: I came to support my husband so that he wins. Don't forget Kabir, our marriage was a fake one.

Bihaan smiled. He recalls that yesterday Thapki told him the truth about their marriage. Later that night, Bihaan talked to a lawyer who clarified his doubts when he said Thapki, that is Vaani Bihaan Pandey did not use her official signature and so they are not divorced. Legally, Thapki and him were still husband and wife. 🥳

How badly i want this to happen in the show 😒

anyways do write more 😊

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