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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: claret112
wow RAIN !!!! its amazing dear...i waited long for the update and u gave a long update for our patience...thank u soo much RAIN for this wonderfull SS... 😛

i'm happy that thapki isn't married to dhruv...yesss..
but what will happen now and what will thapki do????

eagerly waiting for the next part ...please post it as soon as possible!!! 😃

wonderful...!!!!! 👏

Hi Annie, 🤗

thanks darling for liking the update.

It has now become a FF more than 10 chapters not a SS anymore 😛

you were quite sure Thapki was not married to Dhruv...good job 👍🏼

I will try to write next chapie soon...tomorrow I will be busy (mum's birthday)...after tomorrow I will be free till Eid inshallah..i will hopefully give back to back updates...

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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: shivani_85
wow👏👏👏...after waiting for long time u have given such a long and awesome part...thanks for the marvelous part👍🏼..waiting for next part dear...❤️❤️

Thanks Shivani for liking it...I was soo worried you guys won't like it 🤗🤗

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: shorts
First of all its well written no doubt. Secondly, we were eagerly waiting for this update . Thanks to you that you are here for entertaining us with your awesome updates. How can you think that we get bored because it's long. No ways. It's perfect in all sense.
I have full faith in you and I tell you that because I read your love cherish me many times specially the Epilogue. Can't tell you it's a addiction for me and the last part from taking out to the box to twins it's magical for me.ahhh love it...
In this FF your charm is still working...bihaan dialogue " biwi hai meri" I read again and again and bihaan nuzzling in his soft and warm pillow".so I just want to tell you that I am in love with your talent and mesmerizing writing.

aww Shorts that soo sweet..🤗🤗

And you read my Love cherish me...awww 🤗🤗 epilogue is my favorite too...see him with his kid,

the other boy is with Thapki😉 LOL

Thanks for liking my writing style...my hindi sucks soo much, english too...sometimes I have ideas for dialogues which are in hindi...but I can't express them in hindi...then I have to write them in english but then it looses its potency that way... if any other author like Kowsi, Dips or Sanya wrote this story they could have written 1 million times better and done justice to everything...I only try and make a mess of everything...but thank you for appreciating me and your comments motivates me a lot...I am a horrible self doubter since i was a child...your comments help big time 🤗🤗

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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Beautiful as always! MashaAllah...
I read your note after i read the chapter 8. I dont know why you are soo apprehensive that we will get bored! 😕 i mean for me if it was more longer, i would have been much happier!! Seriously i just cant get enough of it! 😊 and thats the beauty of your writing, your story telling skill... mashaAllah..
Coming to Bihan's panic attack... well it was executed perfectly. Original Bihan Pandey loses his ability of logic and thinking when hes angry too...so i found this behaviour very natural and completely in sync with your story's Bihan... 😊
I loved Imli's intervention... shes a chot khayee hui naagin... 😃 Durga is by far the sweetest daku i have read about...
Thapki has to be really smart now to prove her innocence. I have full faith in you that something wonderful will happen soon... 😊
Last... Bring it on woman! We all are eagerly waiting...

Ashu,

🤗🤗

My goodness it was more than 3,500 words... its 2 chapters in one 😲😲😲 you were bound to get bored...but you didn't and I love you for that 🤗🤗

I think this was the end of Imli..I dont think we will see her again( well maybe once ..i think )...she is really a chot khayee hui naagin...😆

lets see what happens next...I can't believe no one was cursing Bihaan for being so nasty to Thapki...albeit in his panic attack...

how can he say Thapki was the one who must have trapped him?? one can't clap in one hand...so he should have taken it into consideration he was equally to be blamed if indeed Thapki was Dhruv's wife and they had an affair behind Dhruv's back...he kept on assassinating Thapki's character horribly...I will punish Bihaan so bad for this just you see...😈😈😈

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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: P.D.Dutta

I love you for this long chapter Bristy.. It helped me to satiate the thirst for Thahaan. It was incredibly well written. And I didn't cringe reading Bihaan's words or his behaviour. A lost man, deceived every time and now latched withImli's venom is expected to behave like this. Hope the issue will be resolved soon.

Update soon

Dips 🤗

exactly Bihaan reacted more this way because of Imli's poisonous barbs...he is indeed very lost...he is totally broken... and he is so alone...doesn't have anyone, no memory , no family and then suddenly he got Thapki who turned out to be his brother's wife pretending to love him...its sad...

inshallah the issue will be solved soonest 😉

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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: Malika1993.06
Amazing update as always love it soo much)))

Thanks darling! ❤️

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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Nijhum19
Bristi di maine avi avi para and I can't express anything properly bcz U make me emotional 😭 😭 😭 you are very bad 😭 how can u write this so beautifully 😳 U know what Now I'm feeling the pain of both Bihaan and Thapki 🥺 💔
Tumhare liye abhi srif ye kar sakti hu 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Pls update soon warna tension k maare ma to maar hi jaungi 😭😭

Awww Nijhum thats sooo sweeet...🤗 thank you ...

Don't be too much sad and don't worry...it will be all okay soon...inshallah...

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Nijhum19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: dushturain

Awww Nijhum thats sooo sweeet...🤗 thank you ...

Don't be too much sad and don't worry...it will be all okay soon...inshallah...

Pls Di update soon warna OK kaise rahungi 😭

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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: S.Renu
Thank you baby🤗
Loved it so much❤️⭐️
Yes I knew it was all part of sapola's plan😃...this man will go to any extent to bring Thapki back...
Felt 😭 on seeing Bihaan's pain and broken heart🥺
And Thapki also😭...how much she tried to explain her truth and how she was hurt seeing Bihaan's pain

Plz can't wait...update soon

Originally posted by: S.Renu
Well concerning Bihaan's panic attack...I don't think he's to be blamed.Anyone in his place would have reacted in the same way..And also,he went thru so much😭...he don't remember anything and despite this he was starting to feel the same way For Thapki as he did as Bihaan..I couldn't sense anger thru this act of his but only pain...
And dear,sorry it's now that I just read the note...And trust me,you did a very good job⭐️ and I'm sure you'll be able to complete what you started...no matter how long it can be,for me it'll never be boring😊...Keep writing dearie and God bless you🤗

Renu Renu Renu

Thank you soo much for liking my update and not getting bored, thank you for sympathizing with my babies Thapki and Bihaan...thank you for being sooo awesome...