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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: DakZz
Rain Rain Rainnn... 🤗
Em getting greedy with every passing day or say hour..or minute or second...hehehe...☺️
The Real Vamp entered with a bang...
It finished so quickly...😒
Buttt its awesome...
Well i loved Bihaan n his Panic Attack too...❤️
U r a gem... do consider writing as ur carrier...⭐️

My goodness, it finished quickly??? it is forever long...😲😲

Yes finally the real Vamp entered 😈...and everyone was worried about Imli.😆😆...she has no value...LOL

Thanks darling...you are so good to me ❤️❤️

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Jiyabutt
Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai such main ...😛Awesome 👏
Very nicely written ... Waiting waiting for next part . I must say mujhe to lat lag gai Teri fan fiction ki...🥳i hope in next part all misunderstanding will finish ...

Aww thanks Jiya...😃

yes offcourse, once bihaan calms down he will feel wretched for the way he behaved...and I dont believe in stretching misunderstandings...so inshallah all will be well by next chapter.

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Aisha

@Kar_Nan

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: dushturain

LOL Ayesha you didn't hv faith on Thapki...you said she was hving an extramarital affair LOL..😆😆😆

you believed Thapki got married with Dhruv. ha ha ha...

I am a true ThaHaanian by heart, i can never do something like that...😛😛😛

I had full faith in u but some times even I like to tease people who try to tease me 😛

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Upasna

@Toulup

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#284

WOW!!👏

Love your writing. You are a really good writer.👍🏼

Waiting for next update

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Dushu what a chapter!! Mindblowing!

Loved Bihaan's outburst! Sapola is too chalaak, he's not near them yet he's creating a havoc in their lives. !@#$/*!

Poor Thapki. Bihaan believing the newspaper is obvious. The guy doesn't remember anything about his past life, whatever is told to him, he believes. He's bound to be hurt!

Loved the long chapter! Amazing!

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Annisa

@XingStar

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#286

wow RAIN !!!! its amazing dear...i waited long for the update and u gave a long update for our patience...thank u soo much RAIN for this wonderfull SS... 😛

i'm happy that thapki isn't married to dhruv...yesss..
but what will happen now and what will thapki do????

eagerly waiting for the next part ...please post it as soon as possible!!! 😃

wonderful...!!!!! 👏

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shivani_85

@shivani_85

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#287

wow👏👏👏...after waiting for long time u have given such a long and awesome part...thanks for the marvelous part👍🏼..waiting for next part dear...❤️❤️

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shorts

@shorts

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#288

First of all its well written no doubt. Secondly, we were eagerly waiting for this update . Thanks to you that you are here for entertaining us with your awesome updates. How can you think that we get bored because it's long. No ways. It's perfect in all sense.

I have full faith in you and I tell you that because I read your love cherish me many times specially the Epilogue. Can't tell you it's a addiction for me and the last part from taking out to the box to twins it's magical for me.ahhh love it...

In this FF your charm is still working...bihaan dialogue " biwi hai meri" I read again and again and bihaan nuzzling in his soft and warm pillow".so I just want to tell you that I am in love with your talent and mesmerizing writing.

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#289

Beautiful as always! MashaAllah...

I read your note after i read the chapter 8. I dont know why you are soo apprehensive that we will get bored! 😕 i mean for me if it was more longer, i would have been much happier!! Seriously i just cant get enough of it! 😊 and thats the beauty of your writing, your story telling skill... mashaAllah..

Coming to Bihan's panic attack... well it was executed perfectly. Original Bihan Pandey loses his ability of logic and thinking when hes angry too...so i found this behaviour very natural and completely in sync with your story's Bihan... 😊

I loved Imli's intervention... shes a chot khayee hui naagin... 😃 Durga is by far the sweetest daku i have read about...

Thapki has to be really smart now to prove her innocence. I have full faith in you that something wonderful will happen soon... 😊

Last... Bring it on woman! We all are eagerly waiting...

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: dushturain

Chorry it became soo long...it was supposed to be short/average length but I kept adding parts to it while I was waiting to post it. Usually I finish writing a chapter, revise it once and post it here within 5 minutes. I had whole night to revise it yesterday...

yes take your time Dips. and let me know how it was after wards.

I love you for this long chapter Bristy.. It helped me to satiate the thirst for Thahaan. It was incredibly well written. And I didn't cringe reading Bihaan's words or his behaviour. A lost man, deceived every time and now latched withImli's venom is expected to behave like this. Hope the issue will be resolved soon.

Update soon

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