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dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: fun4ever89
Whoa!!!...this part gave me vibes of an Ekta Kapoor serial!!!
From the memory loss, to the misunderstanding , to the not listening to others point of view and most importantly the final proclamation of not wanting to see that person's face again...the only thing missing was the Bgm...😆

Jokes apart superb update...the story is shaping up nicely...kudos to your writing skills...can't wait for the next update!!!...👍🏼

WOOOHOOO!!

Love her or hate her have to admit this woman is epic. Ekta is ruling every house in India, Bangladesh, Pakistan etc etc since forever with her bakwas/awesome serials...she has a way of presenting bakhwas story in such a way one will be spell bound. for example naagin..I watched it all...while watching it i used to laugh at myself ,why the hell am I watching this crap then next episode I used to watch it again...

So saying my chappie gave you Ekta vibes...I likkeee ittt...me gusta.❤️

Thanks Rabia for liking my story...this memory loss track has been used and overused sooo many times in Ekta serials I have lost count...so when I wanted to write it I was a bit skeptic about it...I asked dakkzy whether it will be too clichee and maybe I should shelf the idea she gave me courage to proceed...and here I am presenting old wine in new bottle 😆😆😆

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Nijhum19

Pls Di update soon warna OK kaise rahungi 😭

Rou maat Nijhum Rou maat...kuch ansu next chapter k liye bhi bacha k rakho...😛😛

I will try to write an update tomorrow night inshallah...don't cry any more 😃😃

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Nijhum19

@Nijhum19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: dushturain

Rou maat Nijhum Rou maat...kuch ansu next chapter k liye bhi bacha k rakho...😛😛

I will try to write an update tomorrow night inshallah...don't cry any more 😃😃

Di aap vulo maat ma pichle update ma kuch streamy passionate scene manga tha yaad hai 😉😳 😆 ma integer kar rahi hu...issber ansu k saath saath kuch aur vi dena pls ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I AM WAITING 😆

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Nijhum19

Di aap vulo maat ma pichle update ma kuch streamy passionate scene manga tha yaad hai 😉😳 😆 ma integer kar rahi hu...issber ansu k saath saath kuch aur vi dena pls ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I AM WAITING 😆

Tathastu Balike,

samjho wish granted...

i definitely need some steam and temperature for my next chapter...😉

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Nijhum19

@Nijhum19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: dushturain

Tathastu Balike,

samjho wish granted...

i definitely need some steam and temperature for my next chapter...😉

Kitni Besharam hu ma 🤣 🤣

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: Nijhum19

Kitni Besharam hu ma 🤣 🤣

nehi Nijhum we all are the same...we all want the same thing from ThaHaan😆

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Nijhum19

@Nijhum19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: dushturain

nehi Nijhum we all are the same...we all want the same thing from ThaHaan😆

Pls di jaldi update kar dena khushi aur excitement ki karan mera pet faat raha hai 🤣

Good nyt and sweet Dreams ❤️

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Darakshan Sartaj

@DakZz

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Em alsoo waiting for the next part Rainnn...

Here ur Jabra Fan asking u to update...pleeejjj...pleejj...pleejjj❤️☺️

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: DakZz
Em alsoo waiting for the next part Rainnn...
Here ur Jabra Fan asking u to update...pleeejjj...pleejj...pleejjj❤️☺️

WHAT THE...LOL

Dakkzyyy 😆😆😆

You know...😆😆

LOL

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Carry

@Doc.love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#320

Ashu,

🤗🤗

My goodness it was more than 3,500 words... its 2 chapters in one 😲😲😲 you were bound to get bored...but you didn't and I love you for that 🤗🤗

I think this was the end of Imli..I dont think we will see her again( well maybe once ..i think )...she is really a chot khayee hui naagin...😆

lets see what happens next...I can't believe no one was cursing Bihaan for being so nasty to Thapki...albeit in his panic attack...

how can he say Thapki was the one who must have trapped him?? one can't clap in one hand...so he should have taken it into consideration he was equally to be blamed if indeed Thapki was Dhruv's wife and they had an affair behind Dhruv's back...he kept on assassinating Thapki's character horribly...I will punish Bihaan so bad for this just you see...😈😈😈

Hahaha... Rain do whatever you want to do with your Bihaan... i wont mind. For me everything is justified trust me... 😃 if Bihaan had raped thapki in his panic attack too...or sort of like started to rape but at the end stopped( i read in a novel by Judith McNaught).. that would have been justified too keeping in mind the current state of mind of our Bihaan. And he was not blaming thapki only... for him his "death" was his punishment for his sordid "affair" with her... and that was why he was soo broken that his mind and body again let thapki take over his life. For him shes the ultimate manipulative bitch...so in his current situation, its understandable.

Our thapki like always tried to hide things from him...resulting in this disaster now. So i really really hope she proves her innocence very smartly now.. 🤔 i m waiting to see how you bring all that out! 😉

All the best for the next chapter. Make it long please... ⭐️

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