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@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Hahaha... Dushturain... follow your heart and tell us the story that you want to tell.. 😊 I am sure your beautiful mind will give us something beautiful to read.😊

Just a very little suggestion keeping in mind that more people are in favour of Raja being the virgin here only... so maybe you can just have imli make raja believe that they did "it" sometime back and make Raja feel more unworthy of thapki...but later on make them realize that its not the case.. 😛

P.s its just a humble suggestion... Rest its your story and should be the way you want it to be.. 😊😊

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Nijhum19
aur ha sorry dustu ma sayed kuch jaada hi possessive ho rahi ye tumhari SS iske kahani kaise unfold karna hai ye srif tum pe depend karta hai ...But I love ur writing skill yr u r just too good 👏 ❤️

aww Nijhum baby, dont worry tumhari haq banta hai possessive hona LOL...and thank you so much dear...

Also that thing about Bihaan being incomparable, 100% sachchi baat..Bihaan is Bihaan...he is sooo different to other heroes...maybe thats why we love him sooo much...

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Rabia

@fun4ever89

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Was a bit busy so read parts 2 to 5 in one go

Part 2 was very good and it also provided comic relief as well...😆

Loved when Thapki started to vomit...Bihaan or should I say Raja showed concern for her.

And the graphic description of Dhruv beating Bihaan made me so angry...how can Dhruv do that?..😡...and yeah Imli the ever present third angle to spice things up...😈

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Ayaan78
rain thanks for not ruining my sunday you have literally saved my sunday Otherwise I was soo bored..
Loved it.. caring bihaan oh sorry Raja.. stubborn thapki..
aise childish thapki serial mai bhi hoti tou kitna maza aata serial mai toh har waqt sab ki maa bani hoti hai :/
Hey seriously I have no problem in what you are saying about raja and imli because I know the end would be thahaan so go for it.. :)

Yeaa my 2nd yes!! 😃😃

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Hahaha... Dushturain... follow your heart and tell us the story that you want to tell.. 😊 I am sure your beautiful mind will give us something beautiful to read.😊
Just a very little suggestion keeping in mind that more people are in favour of Raja being the virgin here only... so maybe you can just have imli make raja believe that they did "it" sometime back and make Raja feel more unworthy of thapki...but later on make them realize that its not the case.. 😛
P.s its just a humble suggestion... Rest its your story and should be the way you want it to be.. 😊😊

OMG Ash,brilliant idea...i have sth similar in my mind, doesn't matter Raja-Imli did it or not...what matters is what Thapki believes...(the other way around 😉).

Actually what happened, first my story was supposed to end in 3 to 4 chapters...now its already 5th part and I havn't even come to half of it yet...havn't even entered the main villain of the story...

Imli's part in the story is actually very small..she comes creates and problem goes...if I want Raja to be guilty and feel unworthy for thinking he slept with her I need to give Imli more screen space which I dont want...

Actually Raja do have a soft corner for Imli, because she was the one who nursed Raja back to health...so Raja will always be beholden to her...and Imli is a bitch true but not really an ultimate one...like her dad Durga (have you noticed Durga is the Daku sardar but he was quite fair and softy some how!)

my characters are weird...

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Rabia

@fun4ever89

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Part 3 and 4 were equally enteratining.

Bihaan's inner struggle to accept or reject Thapki shows that he still has a soft corner for her even after losing his memory..😉...his sleeping and waking up in Thapki's arms was downright amusing.

Good that Thapki is not relenting and giving 100% to her mission of getting Bihaan's memory back...!!!

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: fun4ever89
Part 3 and 4 were equally enteratining.

Bihaan's inner struggle to accept or reject Thapki shows that he still has a soft corner for her even after losing his memory..😉...his sleeping and waking up in Thapki's arms was downright amusing.

Good that Thapki is not relenting and giving 100% to her mission of getting Bihaan's memory back...!!!

LOL Rabi you are so sweet, you are reading part by part and giving consequent replies...🤗

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Hmmm... you cant even show that Imli and Raja got betrothed because then Durga wouldnt have allowed Raja to take thapki along! 😕

What if you show Imli and Raja getting in the act of doing it but then Raja losing his interest in Imli as now he has conflicting feelings for Thapki too... which makes Imli furious and doing vile things for RajaTh! 😛 anyway i think Imli will get some screen space no matter how bad you want her at bay only! 😃

I dont want you to end it quickly... Please take all the time but write a bara sa ff. I love reading and re-reading "Love-cherish me" abhi tak!!! 😊

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Rabia

@fun4ever89

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Laluji seems like a pretty integral character. He is acting like a cupid because he keeps taking Thapki back to Bihaan...😆

I was so smiling when Thapki fooled Bihaan that she was about to drown and Bihaan frantically started searching for her...he can never ever stop caring for Thapki...with or without memory loss...😆

And Now that Imli has entered I expect the drama to multiply two fold...waiting for the next one.