Lost And Found- FF Chap 1 on Pg 4

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Prolouge

The intensity of the silence was killing her. The place reverberated the gloom which was slowly settling in her heart. As she walked down the dimly lit corridor she noticed the stained walls. The floor was covered with dirt and other filth, origins of which she forbade herself to think of. The lights flickered off adding to her dread.

"This way Ma'am."

The sound of her companion startled her. She had completely forgotten about him, preoccupied with the emotions the place invoked in her. The old man moved forward to open the door. She smelled the room before she saw it. The stench pierced her nose and seeped into her being bringing a fresh bout of terror. The stench was so familiar to her, so very dreadfully familiar, the stench of the dead. She closed her eyes once before taking in the sight in front of her.

Hundreds of bodies lay before her underneath white sheets, laid out perfectly, every one of them in a timeless sleep. Her hands shook as she followed her companion across the sea of bodies trying to train her eyes away from them. She hugged herself as she reached the person who had called her. The man, in his forties perhaps, stood hunched over a dead body. He was wearing a uniform, a police officer her mind registered.

"S-s-sir..." her whisper echoed across the room. The man looked up and she felt his piercing gaze on her. She looked on as the man gave her a contemplating look. The suspense of the affairs has driven her close to panic. What was she doing here? Why did he call her? The man hesitantly took out a plastic sample bag from his pocket and indecisively held it towards her. She reached out and took it in her hands. The bag contained a mobile phone covered in blood. The dim light was enough for her to see the blood stained elegantly calligraphic B on the custom made cover. The bag slipped of her hand and fell on to the floor with a clatter.

"...hit and run...Unrecognized vehicle ...there was nothing to do." The policeman fumbled startled by her state. She barely heard the man's words as she moved towards the covered body besides the officer. Her hands shook as she tugged at the side of the sheet. The sheet fell to the floor revealing the body.

"NO.." Her scream reverberated across the room.



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Author's Note

Hey guys,

Its me Lachu back with a story and this time it's special. I confess that I don't promise anything about this story. I honestly don't know if I can complete this either. But I will try my best. I have the whole plot but just need to write it down and post it regularly, which is really hard considering my circumstances. I would like to say a few things about this story.

Firstly, this story is entirely AU. Which means the story takes place in an alternate universe. Please don't approach my characters as you would view the show's characters because they have completely different stories

Secondly, the characterization of each character is not entirely like the shows. You might find outrageously contrasting features to characters but intrinsically they do resemble the show's characters. I hope you like my characters as well.

Thirdly the setting is not exactly like the shows and I cannot exactly tell you which genre this story is. But I do hope you guys will like it. This story is independent and I hope and Pray that I would be able to complete the story.

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Chapter-1

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Lachu!! Just saw it! It's brilliant..let me read leisurely and then will comment agai
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Lachu! Oh my god! 😭 The starting is brilliant, I can imagine your words in pictures! You have to complete this!
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Lachu .. its too good yr.. prolouge bht achha pr thoda painful hai.. mujhe thoda dar lag rha fr B.. brilliant start.
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Finally read this and my knees are still jerking in anticiaption. This may be the first work on Thahaan in an AU..just loved the idea
Do continue soon!
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Nice yar plz update next part soon..
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Lachu when do u plan to update. the suspense is killing!
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The prologue is too good! I usually stay of AU's in serial fanfictions but it looks really promising!! Update as you can and we will readit!
I hope it's not what I am thinking: that Bihaan is dead because 😭

Keep it up Lachu!

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