Humsafar - A Thahaan story - Chapter 4 on Page 19 30/05 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: oceanbubble

Kowsi...😭😭😭 It was painful to read...especially since i had to read it from the very start to make the flow...

It is hurting me...really...to see them both like this...the pain of a heartbreak...it is unimaginable for me...but still i feel like shutting myself up in a room & crying loudly...💔
So finally after 2 months one week & three (or maybe 4) days...they meet...& all that pain & longing for each other...🥺
I had said before...writing separation is the most difficult thing IMO...& most ppl can't do that properly...but you manage to do that...
This was a job well done...👏
& did I mention that you r EVIL...😆 Why did u give that precap...😭😭 Just to keep us on the edge...😭 Waiting...you r a sadist...🤣🤣
now i am getting anxious to know what happens next...now you have to update the next part quickly...otherwise...otherwise...uhh...who am i kidding...i can actually do nothing but wait...😆😆
Pls Kowsi...pls put the next part a bit quicker...you know this much gap actually breaks the entire flow...
If u delay...i will have to read the WHOLE thing again to build up the flow...& i am sure to get dehydrated with all the buckets that I will cry while doing that...😆


Ohh that much? Here 🤗 for you Sakshi!! I love writing the separation tracks because I believe that you can't reach a happy ending without troubles and struggle, but don't ask me to write after a happy ending becasue I will just screw up the thing!!😆

For the precap it's a real surprise! i wanted to write more in the chapter but some, and you too, are always guessing my plans so that's why I cut it there and put this precap! Now just wait and see

And for the gap, I know and I am sorry! I was too caught up with things to update soon butnow the wait won't me too long I hope!

Thanks a lot yaar for such a heart warming comment😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess2791

so sad and emotional update. i am crying here. their pain makeing me cry. and vasu i always hate her when it comes to thahaaan. beautiful and wonderful update. please update soon next part. waiting.


Awww Thank you!! Yeah Vasu is evil but my story revolves mostly arund Thahaan and the others are mere side characters!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rtms

wonderful!👍🏼 finally u hv updated it.love this kind of intensity on a story❤️.i can feel their pain,loneliness,love,yearnings but all this is worth of a beautiful unforgettable reunion.am curious hw the story-teller in u is going to bring it.update as soon as possible.kowsi🤗.

aditi calling bihaan jiju was something special😎.so she knows her di and her emotions and the person behind it.😉
precap is stunningupdate,update...


Thank you Rt!! I am actually so much excited about what I am planning for the whole story and I hope you will all love my take on this!

Adithi calling Bihaan Jiju was something I always wanted to do! She accepted him in the family and it's her way of showing it and yes she knows her Di so well and shewill be a good help here😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mimiii22

Finally u updated...I thought maybe you've forgot almost...😭

An awesome update...this was so heart wrenching as well as too beautiful...i think I'm not worthy enough to praise your writing...👍🏼
And the precap is

Plz update soon dear please...😒


Thank you Mouli!! I would never forget this one nor abandon this!! This story is like my child 😃

And please do tell me your view, a writer is nothing without the readers!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju15k

phew, finally i read it without being emotional...i almost forget what was the story , so have to read it from the start...and what to say about you and your writings..i am so poor with words..hope you recall my comment i posted earlier in one of your masterpiece😉


Thank you Sanju!! And yes I remember your words! That comment was so heart touching I was so happy after reading it!! 😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JennyD

Awesome.. No words to describe your writing 👏👏.

The way you explain every emotion is really really superrr..
Loved all the parts.. N waiting for the next.. 😊😊..


P.S-sorry, I didn't comment on previous update..


Thank you and welcome!! 😃Don't worry about not commenting earlier, better late than never!! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Neett

Kowsi. . Its wonderful piece of writing. . Mujhse dono ki pain sahi nhi ja rhi.. kitna tarap rhe.. wish cvs show this pain in the show also.

Plz update soon.


Thank you Neet!! I will try to update soon!! Somehow I am my hopes are starting to drop a bit for Thahaan love story! I am sure we will have one but not with that much romance that I am expecting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishu_07

Its attach me too much😭.. Plz update faster Kowsi.. its not fair u make us waiting like tiz😭..


Thank you😃! I know it's not fair but my exams are taking a toll on me
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kowsi


Thank you Neet!! I will try to update soon!! Somehow I am my hopes are starting to drop a bit for Thahaan love story! I am sure we will have one but not with that much romance that I am expecting


Kowsi you used to be so positive if your hopes are dwindling...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fun4ever89

Awww Kowsi...it's Amazing!!!

I read all the three parts in one go...just loved the way they truly embraced each other in the first part...felt so sorry for Bihaan when Thapki left him...😭😭😭

Loving the way both are feeling incomplete without each other...and their meeting at the bank which left both of them wanting each other more.


And do update soon...the precap has left me wanting for more...😊



Thank you Rabi! 😃
Don't worry you are not the only one sad with Thahaan's situation!! It makes me cry too but don't worry they will get their happy ending😉

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