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Posted: 9 years ago
Superbbb. Mind blowing ...kya writing skills hai yrr tere pass ...keep writing new ffs
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: oceanbubble

Awesome...Perfect ending...Seriously no words to describe...

& the best part was the last...there is no happily ever after in life...It is one struggle after another...👏

The fact that they both acknowledge the challenges ahead, instead of dreaming of a rosy life is applauseworthy...I am very happy...


Thank you oceanbubble 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dplee

Too good! I wish you can write some more.

Thank you.. Presently am upset with the track especially thapki and her feelings. If we get a good track will start a new one
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kowsi

Perfect ending Taru!!

I love their confrontation in the room and then the confession at the lake!! You said you can't do romantic but I loved this!! And they are cute! also the ending when you mentioned that all was not well but they had each others

Tq kowsi.. Yeah they were cute.. I can't write intense scenes. I like your work in that category 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harneet.kahlon

Superbbb. Mind blowing ...kya writing skills hai yrr tere pass ...keep writing new ffs


Thank you.. Will try new if the track is interesting 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TS23

Tq kowsi.. Yeah they were cute.. I can write intense scenes. I like your work in that category 😉


Yeah I am the besharam of the group I know!! 😳😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kowsi


Yeah I am the besharam of the group I know!! 😳😉


🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!beautiful👍🏼loved it.it was dramatic n romantic.temple scene was heart warming.loved the lake scene.highlight of the update was in its realistic touch.u must write more on thahaan.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey tara🤗
perfect end dear😆👏

"Life is a dream for the wise,
a game for fool,
a comedy for the rich,
a tragedy for the poor"

our thahaan is so poor
they have to face tragedy in their life twice and twice


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rtms

wow!beautiful👍🏼loved it.it was dramatic n romantic.temple scene was heart warming.loved the lake scene.highlight of the update was in its realistic touch.u must write more on thahaan.


Thanks dear😊

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