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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Oh.. It's finished??? Why??? It was wonderful reading it. Please start another one

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fan.matsh

@fan.matsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

wow! but alas its over!
it was wonderful. ab epilogue jaldi dedena aur start a new one pls.

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

😭itna accha! Khatam kyu ho gya! Jaldi se epilogue bhi de do, 7-8 baccho ke sath😆 that was so awesome I loved it😳

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Puppy05

@Puppy05

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Bahuth bahuth acha lagha lachu...awesomewala update dhiya thumne...u have exactly captured their feelings right from the beginning... Superb yaar...

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rtms

@rtms

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

lovely update.the way u hv weaved the scenes r mindblowing.wt stands out is the perfect use of words.brilliant👏

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Neha99

@Neha99

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

👏lachu as always zabardast

i loved the part where bihaan completes the song "mujhe pyar karo"😳

and it ended😭 plz do come up with another one soon when u feel like it

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Deepu T D

@..dtd...

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Wow wow oh god wt an amazing. Ma heart felt fall for ur writing skill no words at all👏... u r the best really hw express ma happines each sentence will feels up to the bottom of the heart

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Neet

@Neett

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Khatam?? Ab isse miss karungi.. beautiful part.. written vry well.. excellent work.. thanks lachu fr giving us a beautiful story.👏

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

@-Ila-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: piyali99
Lachu!!!!! Ye tune kyaa kiaa!!! Meraa dil gya!!!
OMG yaar...it was beautifully wonderful update.👏👏i really felt the words of the entire part! Kyaa likhaa haii.. kasam se..this is wonderful yaar.. loved it to the core!
Pls wrote more! With happy endings😆

😃...Thanku pialu...glad u loved it...and I will write more ...needs to improve na lol...but cant promise u happy endings😆...sucker for tragedies