Dil Ke Armaan - SahAn OS

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Dil ke aramaan aansuon mein bah gaye

Dil ke aramaan aansuon mein bah gaye

Hum vafaa kar ke bhi tanaha rah gaye

Dil ke aramaan aansuon mein bah gaye

CourtRoom Chandigarh:

Angad was in the courtroom with his lawyer. Inder and Santosh too have come to persuade Sahiba. Yet, Sahiba was not to be seen yet.

Soon, Sahiba and her lawyer came in, and took their seats. Sahiba could see from the periphery of her vision that Angad had even brought Santosh along. Great, so he wants to use my mom to persuade me. Not happening Angad Singh Brar. That ship has sailed.- Sahiba thought to herself.

In the courtroom:

Sahiba had requested her lawyers to not bring up Seerat, and to keep things at mutual differences to the judge. The lawyers in turn told her what to standard outcome

After hearing the pleas from both sides, the honorable judge gave the following verdict: Both parties will seek joint marriage counseling for the next six months. After that, the court will review the results and come to a decision.

Outside the courthouse:

Sahiba was sitting outside, waiting for her lawyers

Angad try to understand. You cannot have two women constantly battling for your attention. I’ve explained this to you multiple times. Seerat has feelings for you and she’s making overt advances towards you. How in the world are you expecting me to tolerate this despite my warning you, despite my trying to explain to her. I cannot do this anymore. I refuse to play second fiddle in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Inder Sir, you too wanted us to divorce. You were right. I can only guide you Angad. The decision has to be yours. Just like in Mahabharata, how Shree Krishna was a guide to Arjun but eventually the decision was solely Arjun’s. I tried to explain to you that if you cannot set boundaries with Seerat, I will refuse to be a doormat wife. So in this case, I’m setting you free. Go do whatever you want and let me live in peace as well. How would you have reacted if a man was sucking my fingers after I hurt my fingers accidentally? You went ballistic thinking that I was pregnant on that fake pregnancy report and yet you expect me to keep calm seeing Seerat going all over on you? She’s setting up candlelight dinners, meeting you at the farmhouse, buying your T-shirts, touching you, helping you put on your shirt, bringing you food every single time. And on top of all this before Gary left, he actually left accusations on both yours and Seerat’s characters that you two are having a behind-the-scenes affair and yet still, you do not heed to anything. No, I'm done. I can’t do this marriage. I can’t have a threesome marriage. I don’t deserve it and I will not go for it. We will just have to buy time for the next six months for the meditated counseling sessions, but don’t expect that I’m gonna come back to you. Far from it, if you and Seerat are going to continue the way you are, there’s no chance for us.

Santosh and Inder were horrified to hear from Sahiba the extent of Seerat’s advances towards Angad. Santosh in her wildest dreams never thought Seerat would be the fire that would burn down Sahiba’s marriage. Inder was at a loss for words understanding how callous and passive Angad had been in this entire fiasco.

Santosh tried to put in a word,” Sahiba Puttar, par zara sun toh sahi”

“Enough Mummy. How would you like it if Sudha Maasi was trying to flirt with Papa?” Sahiba asked.

“Sahiba chup, ekdam chup” Santosh became fiery.

“Mummy, you can’t even stand listening to such things, but I have witnessed and endured it. Nahin rahi woh meri behan. Yet still you ask me to adjust? What double standards are these? How do I adjust when Seerat tells Angad she loves him and he professes he loves her as well?” Sahiba countered Santosh.

Sahiba’s lawyers gave her a tap on the shoulders indicating it was time for her to go. Sahiba addressed at the trio standing in front of her, “ I need to go.”

Inder broke the silence, “I cannot believe everything that I just heard. Angad why didn’t you come to me or even speak with Santosh ji. You could have brought Sahiba along too. At least then she would have known that you were trying to save your marriage. And you like Seerat? Why did Sahiba say you professed to Seerat? I mean we’ve all seen how crazy you went when Sahiba was declared dead.”

“Dad, I don’t know. I don't understand what she’s saying. I told her how I felt. Or so I thought I did.” Finally, Angad’s CEO brains started to work on thinking what Sahiba had just said. Because it seemed to be the vital crux of the whole matter.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Fantastic AV. Finally you are back. I was waiting for this OS for such a long time. Great how u included current storyline too.


I cannot believe how dumb they have shown angad in the serial. Matlab kuch brains hi nahi hai. How did he do business is a serious doubt in my head


I want such fiery Sahiba. Who does not hold back when giving it good. Loved it.loved her response to Santosh too. She definitely needed to hear that


I know the story is not much inspiring for any FF writer but you still did write so thank you so muchsmiley27smiley27smiley27

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Finally something to look forward to. smiley27 Thank you.. It was a very nice read. Dil ko sukoon mila.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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this is so nice! Please write more.

I was really sad that all the FFs had gone away. I'm glad you are back.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinecone

this is so nice! Please write more.

I was really sad that all the FFs had gone away. I'm glad you are back.

Well this OS was pending. However, I don’t think I have the capacity to write on TMD with this crappy track which apparently fetching huge trps…..


you are more than welcome to read my writing on watt pad!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Fantastic AV. Finally you are back. I was waiting for this OS for such a long time. Great how u included current storyline too.


I cannot believe how dumb they have shown angad in the serial. Matlab kuch brains hi nahi hai. How did he do business is a serious doubt in my head


I want such fiery Sahiba. Who does not hold back when giving it good. Loved it.loved her response to Santosh too. She definitely needed to hear that


I know the story is not much inspiring for any FF writer but you still did write so thank you so muchsmiley27smiley27smiley27

I finished it just for you Ash!

Ema, stalker stuff don’t interest me. Read my latest on Wattpad :)

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Athz

Finally something to look forward to. smiley27 Thank you.. It was a very nice read. Dil ko sukoon mila.

Thank you for the compliments!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583

I finished it just for you Ash!

Ema, stalker stuff don’t interest me. Read my latest on Wattpad :)


Yes I just saw notification that u added a one shot. Will read that after dinner.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583

Well this OS was pending. However, I don’t think I have the capacity to write on TMD with this crappy track which apparently fetching huge trps…..


you are more than welcome to read my writing on watt pad!

track sucks which is why we need FFs to read what we would have liked to see on the show. Its so good to see a sensible FF like this. I have read your other stuff on IF too several times.

Are there other new ones on wattpad? please share your ID on wattpad.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinecone

track sucks which is why we need FFs to read what we would have liked to see on the show. Its so good to see a sensible FF like this. I have read your other stuff on IF too several times.

Are there other new ones on wattpad? please share your ID on wattpad.


well after the crappy EMA track, I saw a clip of TSMSP (Tu Sooraj Main Saanjh Piyaji). It’s an older show, which has no EMA. So I’m writing on that because I loved that show though it faltered later on due to TRP pressure. Search Wattpad based on averma4583.

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