[NOCOPY] A Tryst with Destiny - OS

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hey Guys....I don't know if I can call this an OS..it's more like a preview of sorts... This is my first attempt and would like to know your thoughts on the same and if I should continue or not with an actual story.


A Tryst with Destiny


His jet-black eyes met her light amber-colored pair. While she uncovered a melancholic mystery in his, he glimpsed freedom and passion in hers. Though in rage, Sahiba's curious eyes tried to probe into the unknown that his eyes held...but alas it was as if he had built a wall around them. Angad on the other hand was looking into the endless depth in her eyes.

In this battle, only one emotion allied with both of them - fury. They stood there looking into each other's eyes, for what felt like an eternity. Yes, they were furious! Did they want to go for each other's throats? Yes. Did they despise each other already? Oh boy, they definitely did.

But...but.... through all this rage and commotion, they found a familiar magnetic power drawing their eyes into each other. They both found a door that led them to 2 different worlds....while one was always open, the other was shut tight...but if you looked close..you'd see a small crevice in the latter. Though the former remained open, if you looked closer you'd see a sea so feisty and soothing at the same time. Is it safe to say they got lost in each other's eyes? Nah. The onlookers said otherwise. "They stared into each other's soul" was the popular opinion.

However, the Creator had a rather unpopular thought..no theory...no..no..wait ...he was the one behind all this. So he KNEW- that their eyes spoke to each other...both souls yearned to build a home in the other ..of course, unbeknownst to their owners - for the brain had confused all this with rage....no wrath ...that's what the Creator would hear Sahiba tell her sister later. As for Angad...? Nah. He shared it with none except the Creator himself. You could see the Creator laugh and scorn as his abode boomed with the Sardar's furious complaints for making them meet!

Little did they know (Sahan) what they just had was a tryst with destiny.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This was wonderful! The detailed writing allowed me to paint a picture in my mind of what was actually taking place. Beautifully done! I can’t wait to read more! 🫶🏾

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishwarrior

This was wonderful! The detailed writing allowed me to paint a picture in my mind of what was actually taking place. Beautifully done! I can’t wait to read more! 🫶🏾


Hey...thank you for the encouraging words...means a lot!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is too good.😍 I have always felt that Angad and Sahiba speak with their eyes and actually it looks like they are looking into each others souls even when they are angry with each other ..waiting for you to continue

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow fantabulous the way you made their eyes do that talking…. They say that eyes are the windows to one’s soul ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika_r

This is too good.😍 I have always felt that Angad and Sahiba speak with their eyes and actually it looks like they are looking into each others souls even when they are angry with each other ..waiting for you to continue


Yes.. I have felt the same too.. That theirs is a passionate kinda romance and it all started with eyes.. VJs and Himanshis eyes compliment this concept... And thanks a lot ... I shall definitely continue.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reader17

Wow fantabulous the way you made their eyes do that talking…. They say that eyes are the windows to one’s soul ❤️

Thanks a lot for your kind words!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Nice one 😍👍wants to read more😍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Theepa

Nice one 😍👍wants to read more😍

Thank you 😊😊... Will continue

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It’s so explicit! I could imagine all of this in such detail.. well written. Would love to read more. ❤️

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