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Posted: 2 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Hey! This is fun. Absolutely brilliant!!! You brought out so many nuanced emotions through OS! This easily topped the Zara zara touch me OS.

And Ashviniv rightly pointed out, this is hillarious. Hanraj and Prabhjyot are so fun to read in your OS.

Actually, most of the side characters in your OS are a treat to read.👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️


sadly they don’t leverage the side characters well in the show… Hansraj has a real good comic timing as does Garry and Santosh!!!


Thank you for the love towards my writings! ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Hahahaha hilarious...I loved this naughty angad. The way he teased her during the podcast was fun.

OMG, the pool romance is here, the pool romance is here!!!


What a scene AV, sahiba taking inspiration from 50 shades was a masterstroke, angad ke to hosh hi udd Gaye.


Good sahiba is taking initiative. Loved the gradual build of confidence. The phirni played an important part and I won't look at phirni the same way again.


In India the whole intimacy is tabboo and women are generally programmed to think only men should take initiative and pleasure out of the act. To initiate things, woman needs confidence and trust in her husband that he would appreciate it. And that actually shows the supportive husband in 1 way. Good that sahiba has got that confidence


Hunsraj is so funny. Angad kare to phirni Leela and hum kaare to character dheela line cracked me up like anything


Loved it❤️

Seeing how observant Sahiba is of Angad’s likes/ dislikes, I’m sure she’ll surprise with more than just phirni!!!


seeing Angad being bold, gave her the nudge that he wouldn’t mind as long it’s just them, and no else there…The support he gave her for her education speaks paramount of her respect for him. No one has done such a thing for her. It was unexpected but it slowly made Sahiba all his!!!


who knows, maybe Angad will buy a very famous Vatsanyan book and do some couple reading with his wife! He’ll want to gauge her reactions to things she doesn’t know yet!

can you guess my fav line line in this OS? I think I feel it’s my most beautiful line upto date.


Hint: not at pool

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Posted: 2 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: mirai07

First comment! I'll read and come back again!


Me back! Now, this had me blushing red.😳😳 The poolside romance....hayee! 😍😍😍

Angad and Sahiba's comfort was so evident in the entire scene and not to mention the Sandhu's.....😂😂 You had me laughing at the end. The twist was fun.

Bechare Phuphaji 😂😂😂 aur do bacche chahiye inhe 😜😜 😜

Phuphar ji khud kya kama rahe joh unhein fikar pade kitne bacche aur chahiye! Lol 😂 Woh toh Prabhjyot apni figure kharab nahin hone dena chahti! 😆

I wished to see some sort of comfort between SahAn onscreen, but such a long way! Yea, here SahAn have become comfortable and trust one another. They focused on their relationship.


The Sandhus are a good comic team. They should be used for snooping on Jassi and Garry!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583

Seeing how observant Sahiba is of Angad’s likes/ dislikes, I’m sure she’ll surprise with more than just phirni!!!


seeing Angad being bold, gave her the nudge that he wouldn’t mind as long it’s just them, and no else there…The support he gave her for her education speaks paramount of her respect for him. No one has done such a thing for her. It was unexpected but it slowly made Sahiba all his!!!


who knows, maybe Angad will buy a very famous Vatsanyan book and do some couple reading with his wife! He’ll want to gauge her reactions to things she doesn’t know yet!

can you guess my fav line line in this OS? I think I feel it’s my most beautiful line upto date.


Hint: not at pool


i think it might be sahiba's answer on how to make marriage work. I am guessing here :)


Sahiba spoke calmly, “ See Ranveer, in any marriage, love or arranged, two individuals come together. They need to work on the marriage to make it work. They need to come with an open mind and take a leap of trust. This leap of trust I must admit is not easy, but if you’ve already taken your pheras, then that’s a leap of trust in front of society and God almighty. Once that’s established, the understanding will slowly build.”

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Posted: 2 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Ashviniv


i think it might be sahiba's answer on how to make marriage work. I am guessing here :)


Sahiba spoke calmly, “ See Ranveer, in any marriage, love or arranged, two individuals come together. They need to work on the marriage to make it work. They need to come with an open mind and take a leap of trust. This leap of trust I must admit is not easy, but if you’ve already taken your pheras, then that’s a leap of trust in front of society and God almighty. Once that’s established, the understanding will slowly build.”

Good try, but no! Try again?

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Posted: 2 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: averma4583


sadly they don’t leverage the side characters well in the show… Hansraj has a real good comic timing as does Garry and Santosh!!!


Thank you for the love towards my writings! ❤️

Agreed. But then again, they are under utilizing every single 'lead' actor toh baakiyon ka kya hi bolein!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: averma4583

Good try, but no! Try again?


ok i give up :P


here are few sentences i liked


yah se pehle humari har ek mulaqat dhamaakedaar hi rahi hai!


Yeh mujhe gusse se unhi khoobsoorat aankhon se ghoor rahi thi, jinhein main besharmon ki tarah taar raha tha!”


Ladkiyan dilfeink aashiqon ko bhaav jo nahi deti!


“ There’s only one way I can get her to be quiet”


‘Two heads are better than one!’”


Either she will get annoyed and become Maano billi giving me tit for tat or she’ll be an adh khila gulab due to her shyness!”


Angad kare to phirni leela, aur main karoon toh character dheela”. - this one was the highlight of the OS though 🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashviniv


ok i give up :P


here are few sentences i liked


yah se pehle humari har ek mulaqat dhamaakedaar hi rahi hai!


Yeh mujhe gusse se unhi khoobsoorat aankhon se ghoor rahi thi, jinhein main besharmon ki tarah taar raha tha!”


Ladkiyan dilfeink aashiqon ko bhaav jo nahi deti!


“ There’s only one way I can get her to be quiet”


‘Two heads are better than one!’”


Either she will get annoyed and become Maano billi giving me tit for tat or she’ll be an adh khila gulab due to her shyness!”


Angad kare to phirni leela, aur main karoon toh character dheela”. - this one was the highlight of the OS though 🤣


it is number two on the list. Somehow it shows a lazy nineties romantic feeling:


Yeh mujhe gusse se unhi khoobsoorat aankhon se ghoor rahi thi, jinhein main besharmon ki tarah taar raha tha!”

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Posted: 2 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Agreed. But then again, they are under utilizing every single 'lead' actor toh baakiyon ka kya hi bolein!

So true!!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: averma4583


it is number two on the list. Somehow it shows a lazy nineties romantic feeling:


Yeh mujhe gusse se unhi khoobsoorat aankhon se ghoor rahi thi, jinhein main besharmon ki tarah taar raha tha!”


that scene was so good. i wished Makers have used that to show how angad was unconsciously attracted to those eyes from start

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