FF - SHATTERED - (Angad* Sahiba) - Aurhors note imp -9/4/23 - Page 15

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Amazing update! Everything came out, nothing was left unsaid, no one was spared 👏👏👌👌

Jasleen being left all alone was the best punishment 👍👍👍

Seerat breaking out all her truths was impressive❤️

Sahiba still walked away with her self respect is awesome🥰🥰🥰

Thank you so very much jiiiiii🤗 so glad you enjoyed reading this updateee❤️

Originally posted by: arshisimple

So before I say anything the most awesome part of this chapter was Sahiba even after acknowledging Manbeer’s apology, she didn’t behave like a Saint which they normally showed in ITV 👏👏

And regarding this chapter awe 🫢 I loved it so much! Positivity, truth, kindness are so important and good always wins against bad that’s what it was all about! We all live in a life where too many things are going wrong and negativity overshadows everything but you showed that world is still a better and beautiful with kind people!

There is no right or wrong but bad choices and people are not bad inherently but their choices are and that’s how you portray Gary and Kiara ! You were right about the Grey shades of people not black or white 💕 I truly feel that Gary and Kiara have some hope but Jasleen I am not sure 🤔

Beautiful chapter and wonderful writing 👌💕

Thank you so very muchhhh jiiii for your wonderful wonderful feedback that has me grinning from ear to ear...😃🤗 I am super stoked that you loved reading this part yaar...I truly wanted to get this exact bit across and I am glad that came across to you all as readers ...through my words/ scene depicted❤️

Thans once again a gazillion tons for your precious support🤗

Helloooo everyone...

Making a note here to let you all know my slight puzzlement..

So yes I have written about 4.5k words of the next update okay? Was earlier thinking of making it a longer update because of the events I have planned but when I finished writing till a particular scene I thought okay let me post this much tonight...but now before posting I am thinking...ohh you all will beat me up for the cliffhanger re...😉

So in that case - I am thinking maybe I should post a longer rollercoaster update only by tomm night??? What say?

I have a lot to do tomm given that am travelling on tuesday- there's a event at kids school tomm..then work..packing...but somehow I will manage...I promise I will post tomm night surely.....for I do want to get the story to a particular point..before my mini travel between 4-8 april...

So yup apologies on missing out on the tenth back to back update streak ya guys...butnwill make it up tomm with a longer one...for sure...

Thanks much loveee

Prachi

Hey was eagerly waiting for your update

Originally posted by: TheFluffyCactus

OH MY GOD! I just love the way you have strategized the details and brought out the mysterious part so well. The revelations were extremely well planned and executed. I can totally understand the challenge of deciding what to focus on the most, especially when there are so many earth shattering revelations one after the other in the same moments. To give justice to each revelation and the reactions as well as keep the smooth flow to move to the next shocking revelation. Extremely well done! Couldn't have been better. Your fanfiction stole my heart to say the least! Well written. Now that so many waves of shock have hit the family, I am really looking forward to the way you let things settle down and how things move ahead. I am assuming that now that major revelations are out of the way (including the upcoming confrontation between Mongas) , the focus would be more on Angad's redemption and the journey to being a power couple. I am also looking forward to see how Garry's redemption might take place, considering the hints and maybe Seerat and Garry can restart as well. I wouldn't normally expect this but considering your writing and track till now, I am sure, you would be able to tie it up well.

Lastly, consider this as a demand from an avid fan, please upload this story on Wattpad, it makes it easier to follow up on the story updates. PLEASE!

First things out - thank you a gazillion tons for your wonderful feedbackkkk❤️ I am totallyreading it...❤️ I am so happy that work has found a place in your heart..😃🥳

Haanji...now coming to the future bit henceforth...all I will say for now without giving much away that I do wana close up on a couple of ends...before we dive into full fledged fresh sort of things for angad× sahiba...😃 You will have the answers to this in the next update for sureee..as to why iv planned it that way😃won't make you wait long for that...longer update will come up tomorrow night surely!

Ohh yeses I know I am yet to upload this story on Wattpad yaar...ou folloeing me there already kya? Whats ur username? I surely will get around to doing that post I am back from my minintravel on 8th April.. until then...would request you to come back to reading the next update here...I will then post it there too from chapter 12 onwards ( after updating the 1 - 11 there as well)..

Thank you so very much once againnnn🤗

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Before I start typing again... I wrote a long a** review for your story and it all just went kaput because my damn phone acted due my damned actions, the whole page reloaded and it all went... now back to the review that I have vented 😵😭

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The emojis above explain my exact feelings about your story... I mean what did I just read... What did I... I'm still trying to comprehend! *Faints lightly* ☺️

I must say, this forum is a home to such talented story weavers, I am just blessed to be a part of it. You've truly poured your heart into this 🤌🏻🌟💪🏻

I read Shattered in one go until page 9 (if I'm recalling it correctly), Chapter 6... The very next day you'd asked me to. And I was kinda blown apart... I had began typing my response then and yet it couldn't reach you because I could not get to it... I believe, it had to reach you at the right time... So here it is.

I read the last three instalments in a go, yet again and you, woman are a great story teller. I loved how everything was so meticulously written... Everything made sense... Especially where Garry's truth came out and Jasleen's even more so. Where Garry and Kiara leave her alone was just chummeshwari! Not to forget the pauses and escalations in your story are just great. I must also point out Angad's emotional turmoil was so beautifully expressed... His dejection, remorse, anger and disgust with himself, his heartbreak... It was all on point. 'Kaanch tootne ki awaaz hoti hai, dil tootne ki nahi' has been so amazingly described, I'm falling short on finding words. 🤌🏻❤️‍🔥

It is great to read you, Mystical... I cannot wait for the next parts as you mentioned... It will be a treat to read as it will revolve more around SahAn now!

PS. I have recalled most of what I wrote before here, so I don't lose the essence of what I needed to express. I hope my love and warmth reaches you through my words for the wonderful story you are creating for us all to read.

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Helllllooooooooooooooooooooooooo Jiiiiii

I am sure you can make out by my excited hello how happy I am post reading your precious feedbackkkk😃❤️ like thank you thank you thank you for liketaking the effort to rewrite it to me..truly means a lotttt❤️

I am so happy that you enjoyed reading the moments, scenes , character reflections iv penned out in this tale uptil this previous update...honestly its been very close to my heart this entire writing experience and learning curve as a writer along the way...so I am so glad...its touched and brought a smile to your facee❤️

And yes ji...for sure...we will be moving towards full on sahiba× angad - super soon just ..a couple of ends...i want to put a direction to...as we head there...you will have a lot of answers in tomorrow's longer update for sure❤️

Once again please know - your love, warmth and your precious feedback has truly touched my heart and I am so happy to have your precious support on this writing journey of mineee❤️thanks a gazillion tons once againnnnn❤️

Much love

Prachi

Longer update coming soon that too a roller coaster!!! 👏👏👌👌❤️❤️❤️ Thank you🥰🥰🥰

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Hey was eagerly waiting for your update

Hello ji...I just posted a note with regards to the same...

Actually till 4.5k words ka it is ready and I was about to post it..but then stopped...thinking I will get beaten up by you all for creating cliffhanger anxiety..😉😳

Pakka se tomm will make it up with a longer update in - ONE❤️

Thank you for the patience 🤗

I was eagerly waiting for your response, Prachi

I can truly comprehend how it feels to be seen and appreciated when you pour your heart into something and you well deserve all the praises and love coming to you... By the way, I just realised... We've known each other since ArShi days, because I got your name change update on my notifications 🤯🤩

Dude, we've been friends since then... And I'm more than sure... I've followed your work on that forum too... and others... I'll have to go check all your posts to remember it all... 🤯

Earth time bhi kya cheez hai... It's like full circle... So to meeting you yet again, woman... I'm glad, I'm reading your work. ❤️🤪🤗

Originally posted by: mysticltales111

Helllllooooooooooooooooooooooooo Jiiiiii

I am sure you can make out by my excited hello how happy I am post reading your precious feedbackkkk😃❤️ like thank you thank you thank you for liketaking the effort to rewrite it to me..truly means a lotttt❤️

I am so happy that you enjoyed reading the moments, scenes , character reflections iv penned out in this tale uptil this previous update...honestly its been very close to my heart this entire writing experience and learning curve as a writer along the way...so I am so glad...its touched and brought a smile to your facee❤️

And yes ji...for sure...we will be moving towards full on sahiba× angad - super soon just ..a couple of ends...i want to put a direction to...as we head there...you will have a lot of answers in tomorrow's longer update for sure❤️

Once again please know - your love, warmth and your precious feedback has truly touched my heart and I am so happy to have your precious support on this writing journey of mineee❤️thanks a gazillion tons once againnnnn❤️

Much love

Prachi