COLLAB MANYA FF ALWAYS for YOU sneak peak of next ch pg 53 1/4 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: saransh09

Very nice, especially loved the part where amaya twisted sumitra's hand 😆


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Originally posted by: moon14

when are you going to update.really exited you promised it today . do update soon



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part 4

Amaya: i come here to make a deal with you all

Sumitra and other ladies laugh at Amaya audacity.

Sumitra: do you think you are in position to deal with us, that too with your terms. You're being caught up till neck dear. It's done or dies situation. So get it clear in your thick head that if you not fulfill our 3 terms I will tell everyone about Rachita truth.

Amaya: ok go tell. And if you need any help of me let me know

All ladies look shockingly on getting Amaya opposite reaction what expected. An Amaya smirk, what she plans it is going in right way. She sits on nearby bench with hands under her chin. Waiting

Amaya: what happened you all still here.do I stop taxi to drop you. Ahhh I get it you must not having money right, don't worry I will give you if I can give my house to you so I can manage this taxi fare.

Amaya stand and go to call taxi for them when sumitra hold her hand and turn her to face sumitra.

Sumitra: what is cooking in your head? You think you are very smart to fool us. You don't know who we are.

Amaya look angrily to place where sumitra is holding her, and get away her hand from her hold.

Amaya: first thing don't touch me. And where it is the matter about to know you all I know you all very well now. Should I tell you how cheap, down-market, and senseless women's you are. No right. You will not feel good. (Ok let me clear I never will like to abuse an elder than me like this but only if the women are like them I will not mind. Sorry if anyone got hurt)

And second thing I am not acting smart because I am that.

Ab paris se padh kar aayi hu thodi akalmandi toh hogi hi,par aap log toh I am sure kisi village ke school men bhi nahi padhe hoge tabhi aisa ghate ka sauda kar rahe hai.

(Common I have done my studies from Paris so I will be little smart and clever. But I wish I could have said same for you all, because I am sure you have not even saw face of village school, the proof is the deal you are doing which has only your loss)

Sumitra: what you mean

Amaya: see you will go and shout in front of 4 person, Rachita is not mathur's blood and everyone will believe it, and that too without any proof, the thing is what dear all are not so fool like you, I actually pity on your condition from some source you get to know that Rachita is not mathur blood and you planned such big plan. First at least you should have confirmed it or try to get some proof. So now no one will believe you and your plan will backfire. Now when your son will know that you are trying to defame his Rachitaji then he will hate you. And marry my di. I agree my di will be upset with revelation but she will understand with time and our love will give her strength to fight from the truth. Now about bad talks in society for our family I not give a single penny to it. Today they will curse us and tomorrow when they will get some other gossips then they will start talking about that.

And in all that you all we get what nothing.

If you really want to be in profit then my offer is still valid.

I will give you my house paper and nanaji position in your son's name. But in return you have to promise me to break this marriage and return to your home quietly without telling anything about Rachita di truth.

Sumitra get in thought listening amaya. She has point but how can my plan be left in mid. What if news is true?

Sumitra: how I believe you the news is not true. I have seen fear of revelation in your nana eyes.

Amaya compose her rising anger. standing here talking to women who had hurt her family so much in too much for her sanity and now my taking her nana name with her bad tongue she had done a huge mistake, but if she lose patience now then her plan will not get success, she closed her eyes and remember how mantu said to control her emotion and not listen what world says. she just need to do her part rest all will be handled by themselves

Amaya: I am saying it on your face aunty that whatever you know is truth, my Rachita di id not related to us by blood but we are together with love. And you dare to put a single blot in her character then see what I will do to you. If you want to scream truth out do it but first bring any proof against it. Or else agree to my deal and fast I don't have whole life to stand here and do circus with you. and don't think you will make me on my foot like you done with my nanaji because sadly he is respect hunger I am not. don't consider my relation and happiness so cheap to get sell my your worthless respect. my father did suicide if that time we can fall and rise listen to everyone then there is nothing that now we can't face.

All 4 ladies face was totally blank they never thought there so called plan will trap them like this. A sense of relief washed Amaya face when she observed that her plan is succeeding.

Bauji: sister in law amaya is not wrong we not have any proof if we will tell also who will believe us. Its laxmi goodness blessing that we are getting house and position or else this too will go form us hand you say yes quickly.

Masi and nani too agree for it.

Sumitra: no I can't it is not just property. I have to take revenge for my son behalf too, he was beaten too badly in front of whole society, and his respect was totally demolished by this mathur's. I will not leave them so easily and if we stop marriage what we will say.

Amaya: I will give you reasons I will give you chance to defame us. You want to take revenge from us then do but not Rachita di but me. And in anyway you want just revenge them what matter.

So do you agree? Amaya question sumitra and getting on option sumitra agrees.

Amaya did said that she will give sumitra reason to break the marriage but now what she will do. Nothing was coming in her mind, she was pacing from one end to other when suddenly its strikes to her mind that she has to meet mantu at temple, deciding to think something on way she start for temple.

Amaya was on her way when someone stops her.

Uma: Amaya

She turn to find Uma there, Amaya curse in her breath and tell mahadev that today save Uma to tell anything garbage because today her tolerance lever is very low and she will do anything to her.

Amaya thought it better to avoid her. She walks past her not giving ears to her calls. But then Uma come in her way and stop her.

Uma: how are you Amaya going somewhere?

Amaya: will you mind your own business

Uma: I am doing that only I am just taking care of my opponent who had badly lost from me.

Amaya: what you are saying

Uma: great you forget I mean that 30 days challenge which has over today. And as mantu had not confessed that he loves you so that means I win and you lose

Amaya feels to laugh at her stupidity she never recognize strength of true love. Because for her mantu is like some trophy that she wants to win for lifetime, she not love him it just infatuations, poor girl when she will understand that love need no words no symbol no means to be conveyed. It is said eyes. And that only made mantu says her that he love her and today she too will confess him her love.

Uma: where you lost. I know it's hard to lose your first love but don't worry you will surely get someone in your life

Amaya: thanks Uma for your wishes by the way congrats finally mantu told that he loves you. By the way when is your marriage? You will not call me.

Uma face turns white, how she tells her that mantu will never marry her because he loves her.

Uma: it is happen soon. I will definitely invite you. You don't worry. Now I have to leave I have many works.

And she leaves from there. Amaya give her hopeless look and start heading towards temple. When she overhears Uma and her friends talk which due to Uma loud voice is clearly audible to her.

Uma's friend: she was telling right when mantu not love you how he will marry you.

Uma : don't worry mantu is my best friend and I will make sure I will make such condition that he will left with no other option but to marry me. He will be unhappy in start but then will begin loving me with time. I know his masi very well and also convince her to come next week mantu never say no to his masi and once masi will force him to marry me. He will be left with no option.

Uma and he friends laugh. While Amaya get shocked listening to it. Certainly Uma is big player than what she seems. She neither deserves mantu friendship nor him. Amaya walk away angrily. Knowing what she has to do now.

Mantu rest her head on bed and just thought how the day took change. He was so happy till morning knowing well that Amaya answer would be yes and they will start their new life from today. But then gajanand ji got heart attack and they took him to hospital. Amaya was so broken seeing her nana like this. It was difficult for him to see he like this but he has to be strong to take care of his love. And before that she is his best friends. He somehow makes Amaya understand. Them Amaya leave form hospital saying him to meet at temple.

Mantu was eagerly waiting for Amaya at mandir, he saw she was very worried about something and that fact is making him go uneasy. He just want to know she is well, he wants to take all pain of her, console he, hide her in his protective arms safely. But where is she? And then she saw her coming, he thanked mahadev to keep her safe. Amaya come close to him.

Mantu: Amaya tum kaha reh gayi thi. Mein tumhare liye kitna pareshan tha.whaa tumhare nanaji ki tabiyat bigad gayi hai aur yaha tum nahi mil rahi thi. Tum thik toh ho na.

(Amaya where were you. I was so worried. In hospital your grandfather health is worsening and here you were missing. Are you ok)

He burst out all his worries in one go without letting her to say anything.

Amaya: mantu tumhe yaad hai na tumne mujse ek promise kiya tha. Jab meine tumhe tumhare dad ki watch wapas lautayi thi, ki mein tums eek koi bhi ccheez maang sakti hu.

Mantu holds her hands.

Mantu: ha Amaya hume yaad hai par iss waqt tumhe aisa kya chaiye joh hum de sakte hai.

(Yes Amaya I know but what I can give you at this time)

Amaya: mujse shadi karlo mantu abhi issi waqt.

(Marry me mantu now at this very moment)

She saw mantu hands leaving her. She felt lump in heart. His steps were making her weak. No she can't let her loose herself now she has to be strong to bear his hatred she can't tell him the truth but she is right and also helpless. She just not wants to lose the two precious if her life. Rachita and mantu.

Mantu: amaya tum hosh mein toh ho kya bol rahi hu tum. Shadi abhi iss tarah sabse chupke. Nahi hum yeh nahi kar sakte, ye galat hai aur hum tumhara saath nahi dege isme kabhi bhi nahi.

(Amaya are you in your sense, what rubbish you talking, to marry you know and like this without anyone knowledge. No I will not do that this is wrong and I will never give my consent in it.)

Amaya: galat aur sahi faisla karna tumhare haath mein nahi hai, tum bas apna promise pura karna hai.

(Wrong or right it is not your overlook. You just have to complete your promise to me)

Mantu: Amaya your grandfather is in hospital fighting from life and death and today is your sister marriage. In place of concerning about them you are here asking me to marry you , no this is not girl who I love. She is not selfish like you. I know there is something big that you not telling me pleas tell me I will help you in right way please.

Amaya: there is nothing like that. It is as clear as crystal. You gave me promise and I am demanding for this fulfilment.

Mantu: OK then leave with your wishes because I will not fulfil any your wrong demand.

Amaya got tense she was knowing that convincing mantu was not easy but she can't ell him truth now, first she need to talk to sneha and if she tell Rachita truth to him then what explanation she will give of this marriage she has no proof against Uma. No she has no option left them this.


Amaya: sorry mantu par mujhe yeh karna hoga, I know ek na ek din tum bhi shamjh jaoge ki meine joh kiya voh sahi tha

(I am sorry mantu I have to do this; I know one day you will understand whatever I done it was not wrong)

Mantu angrily start his bike, he not know what happened to Amaya suddenly. Why she is talking like this but he can't marry her and no tin this way, it will be wrong. He was about to go when he heard people screaming.

People: see that girl will burn her hand what madness she is doing someone stop her please.

Hearing of it the first thought came in mind was of Amaya, he know her this mad side and witness in Amar Jodi competition, without wasting a single second he rush back to temple.

Amaya was standing in front of lord mahadev idol with her eyes waiting for mantu and in her both hands it was burning camphor. Her hands was almost burned with it but she was determined that mantu will come.

Mantu: Amaya

Mantu shout out of fear seeing her life in danger. He runs to her to get off the fire. But Amaya stopped her.

Amaya: no mantu stay away from me. Or else I will do something bad to my self

Mantu: Amaya stop this madness even if you hurt yourself I will never agree to your demand

Amaya: ok then go from here because I will never let this fire go down till you marry me. Now you decide what you have to do.

Mantu tried hard to get close to Amaya but every time she threaten her to add more camphor to fire. Firse was slowing swallowing her skin. And if this will continue it will burn her.

Mantu: thike yehi zid hai na tumhari toh lo

(Ok if this is your wish then I take it)

And then he step forward and taking a pinch of vermillion in his hand which was kept there for prayer fill Amaya's partition. And then throw the burning camphor from her hands at corner. Amaya loses her conscious and fall down but mantu holds her in time.

Mantu: Amaya your hand is being burned badly come let's go to hospital first.

Amaya: nahi mein thik hu, aap mujse shadi karege na.

(No I am alright. you will marry me)

Mantu not answer her anything. But tell priest to make preparation for marriage.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2sZUgcPN2I[/YOUTUBE]

Meanwhile mantu bandage Amaya wound.


Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan
Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
( Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )... (2)
Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila


Amaya sees mantu. Mantu revert back her in his anger. But keep continue her dressing, she can't deny how slowly and carefully he is curing her wound as if she is like a feather and will get broken by little pressure. She keeps on adoring him. Mantu apply ointment on her burned. Which make her hiss in pain?

Amaya: ahhh

He got alert listening her cry and immediately take her hand in his and started blowing air to lessen the wound.

Mantu: I am sorry bahut dard ho raha hai.

(Is it paining a lot?)

Amaya just smile the pain is felt was forgotten long back now she only remember his concern his love and his touch, mantu resume his act but this time being extra careful. Dressing got over. Someone form temple come to inform them that altar for marriage is ready.

Mantu and Amaya look at each other. Amaya stand to move from there but got hold back my mantu.

Mantu: I promise Amaya I will always with you. I will support you but once tell me why you doing it.

Amaya: you love me

Mantu nod

Amaya: then trust me what i am doing is right and has to be like this always. Now it is up to either you marry me out of trust in your love or out of your promise but I can't let you back off from this.

Anger again overshadow mantu face, he leave Amaya hand with force this time not caring of her pain.

Mantu: you have marry me right then come, let's get married

He holds Amaya burned hand no worrying about the cry and pain and drags her to marriage place In front of holy fire.

Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka
Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka
Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein
Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein
Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai
Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai
( Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )... (2)

The mantra start and manya marriage began. Amaya look at mantu who was looking straight devoid of any feeling or happiness, he was hurt and that part was tearing her heart from inside.

But its destiny written they have to meet like that only. At least when truth will be out mantu will of her. Mantu tie the black beaded necklace in Amaya neck and filled her partition again then priest tell them to stand but Amaya leg stumble due to weakness and she loose her balance. Before she can fall mantu lift her in his arms and takes the 7 nuptial rounds, Amaya holds his collar and keep looking at angel that her lord had bless her now forever. Her mahadev and she will be now better half of him. She will be his forever. He will has only right on her, and no one will separate them and when they are together this bad time too will get over soon. And that day she will confess him how much she love him.

Flashbacks end.

Mantu go to Amaya room to check her and found her sleeping on door and shivering from cold, even her bandaged had open. He feels helpless and vulnerable to not help her. he know she is in some trouble he only wish that to be so close to her that she would share her pain with him. To be trusted by her so that she could reveal her dark secrets of life to him. He only wishes she also loved him and said once those words that he want to hear form her since the time he understood what the love is.

Tooti Footi Sab Farmaaishein
Kahin Shak Hain Kahin Nafrat Ki Deewaar Hai
Kahin Jeet Mein Bhi Shamil Palpal Haar Hain
Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar
Ho O O Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Ho O O O Ho O O O
Na Poocho Dard Bandon Se
Hansi Kaisi Khushi Kaisi
Musibat Sar Pe Rehati Hain
Kabhi Kaisi Kabhi Kaisi
Ho O O O... Rabba, Rabba Ho O O Ho
Rabba Ho O O, Ho O Ho Rabba

He carries Amaya in his arms and makes her sleep on bed properly. And then slowly remove the heavy jewelry that was troubling her. And then cover her from blanket. Mantu was about to live when he felt some hold. He looks back and found Amaya securely holding his hand close to heart. He was elated seeing it, be in unconscious state at least he hold some importance to her. But then remembering what she done today how she hurt him, her family also his friends rama emotion he tries to take out his hand that disturb her sleep he stop seeing that and finally defeating he slid by her side on same bed. He knows how much he hates her but her heart will never let him go far from her. He knows knowing everything ending in front of his eyes his hope will never dies. He will love her. No matter, she will ever care about his love or not. He look at her glowing face with the red vermillion that speak that this beauty is now his and that give him hope that one day Amaya will tell him truth and will never let this go this hope easily. He cannot stop himself from touching her. He caresses her face and then locks her hairs falling on her face beside his ears. He kept looking her till his eyes give away.

hi this is one of the biggest update i written i hope i receive one comment and like for this



Edited by manyarsh - 9 years ago
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very nice... I loved it... bichari uma 😆... when will she come to know about manya's marriage? ?? ... humari phooti kismat we didn't get to see all this in tsm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey what a awesome update.But the teaser you uploaded earlier wasn't in this part. Nice by the way .Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Superb dr..
Thanks for the long update. .
I love the songs that u have used during their marriage. .
I miss mantu badly. .
Thanks agn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update dear..all the best for ur exams prepare well..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u very much for continuing this nice work...😊

and just forgot to say :-

best of luck for ur exams 🤓
Edited by imAbhishek - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wrizaa

very nice... I loved it... bichari uma 😆... when will she come to know about manya's marriage? ?? ... humari phooti kismat we didn't get to see all this in tsm...


no problem i will try that your all wishes come true here

i know i am about to write that scene uma knowing about maya😆 with amu and uma confrontation

if you want anything to be written in this ff

tell feely i always ask my reader whatever they want i try to accommodate my story like that
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