COLLAB MANYA FF ALWAYS for YOU sneak peak of next ch pg 53 1/4

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hi guys
sorry for weird title my brains not getting any good one.so this a little piece i wrote with a story in mind about how tsm could have gone. if it in our favour i hope you all will like it. this story start from hospital scene of manya where they admit gc. and progress from that.please this are solely my views no bashing.and i will continue it if anyone like the concept
i hope you all will enjoy do like and comment you view



In hospital

Amaya and mantu admit gajanand ji at hospital. His treatment was going and Amaya was peeping inside the ward from a small glass window out at ICU only in a hope for a small piece of news of her nanji's welfare. She already lost her dad and know the pain of being without a dad, she not even in her wildest dream want her mother to go from same phase. At least not at cost of sneha mistake done in past. She will be totally broken. Amaya can't let that happen. And what about rachi di how will she take the news. After so much ups and down in her life is this was not enough that mahadev has again made a palisade between her sister's happiness. Everything was so much good till evening. Then she saw her nanaji, helplessly begging for his family reputation, to those cruel and evil women's. that moment is still fresh in her memories. Her blood boils thinking about it and then those 3 terms that those women kept in front of them. Their mind need a fix and she will definitely do that in no terms she is leaving them like this. But now her priority is her nanaji and her family.

What she will do now? Vulnerability and consequences of all possibility harmful to her family took toll over her mind. Suddenly she felt weak at her legs and slummed down in bench kept nearby unable to balance her.

Mantu: Amaya

Mantu quickly cover distance between him and Amaya, he just came after getting some required medicine for gajanand as called by doctor. Mantu got scared seeing Amaya in such debased state. And blame him for leaving her alone. He cases her hand in his and tries to console her.

Mantu: Amaya chinta mat karo sab thik ho jayega. Mahadev sab thik kar dege. Voh kabhi bhi aache insan ke saath kuch bura nahi karte. Aur aaj toh tumhari didi ki shadi hai dekhna sab thik ho jayega.

(Amaya don't worry everything will be fine. Mahadev will fix all. He never does injustice to bad people. And today is such an auspicious day it's your di wedding. Nothing will go wrong.)

Amaya being frustrated totally, vent out her anger on mantu.

Amaya: kuch thik nahi hoga mantu. Sab khatam ho jayega. Yeh shadi bhi nahi hogi aur mere nanji ki izat bhi mithi mein mil jayegi.aur sab jante hua bhi mein kuch nahi kar pa rahi hu.

(Nothing will be alright mantu. Everything will finished, this marriage too will not happen and my grandfather respect too will tainted, the worst part will be I can't do anything even knowing about it)

Mantu got suspicious with Amaya talks.

Mantu: Amaya tum yeh sab kya keh rahi ho.

(Amaya what are you saying all this)

Amaya: mantu mein

But she stopped abruptly, no first she can't let her get weak now, she need to be strong, and this truth first need to person who is attached to it deeply. Sneha.

Amaya stand up and walked from there to speak to her mother. But mantu held her hand and stopped her.

Mantu: Amaya kaha ja rahi ho tum. Tum thik ho .dekho koi pareshani hai toh hume batao.hum humesha tumhare saath hai. Please iss tarah chup reh kar hum dono ko saza mat do.

(Amaya where are you going, are you alright. See if there is any problem share with me. I will be always on your side. Don't punish both of us by being silent.)

Amaya heart overwhelmed listening to mantu words. Sacredness and depthness of his love, made her go proud of her. She silently promised to forever safe this jewels very caringly and lovingly in heart. Also to tell him whole truth once she get way to the present problem and once she tell it to her mother about it.

Amaya: mantu tum yehi rukhna nanaji ke pass. Aur jab mein tumhe call karugi tum waha aa jana. Tum aaoge na

(Mantu please stay here with grandfather. I will call you .then you come there. Will you come?)

Mantu smile faintly

Mantu: kar di na wohi wali baat,Amaya tum jab bhi hume bulayogi hum har waqt tumhare saath hoge.

(Amaya wherever you will need me I will be there)

Amaya smiles: thanks

And leave from there. Mantu kept looking at her fading figure. Today he felt something different in her eyes. Don't know what it is but his heart says that she too love him. But then too he will wait for her answer.

At mathurs house

Sneha: mom amu and babuji are not seen anywhere did you see them

Pushpa: I don't know. Your father even not took breakfast; he was little worried and when I ask he said it is nothing. I hope he is well

Sneha: don't worry mom I will send rudra to get know something about it. But now let's take Rachita down all are waiting at mandap for her.

The duo ladies agree and march towards Rachita room.rachita was sitting in front of mirror dressed up in wedding dress and plastering a fake smile on her face. Her cruel fate whom she love that ditch her when she needed him the most and now she had to marry rama only for her mother sake. She doubts will she ever able to love him. But now she has compromise with her fate, and will also learn to leave with it slowly. Sneha and Pushpa enter the room. Shneha gasped seeing her daughter draped in wedding attire looking beautiful and gorgeous. She always wished her all three daughter to get there happiness and what they wish and she is contented today she succeeded in it. She kisses Rachita head and hugs her. They both take Rachita down for wedding.

Rama was already in mandap and waiting for Rachita. And as soon as he saw her he got lost in her beauty. Today he will finally get his love and true companion for lifetime. He had dreamed so much for their future and today its starts to fulfill all.

The mantra start and priest told bride and groom to take 7 nuptial rounds. Rachita and Rama stand from their places and started the rounds.

Sneha looks here and there for Amaya. And finally found her she was standing little far and walking towards mandap. Sneha breathe relief and with a smile walked towards her only to get biggest shocked of her life. She drops the plate having flowers on floor. Catching everyone attention towards her.

Pushpa and jazz came running towards her. And Rachita with others got worried about her reaction.

Pushpa: sneha what happened

She finger everyone attention towards amu. Pushpa gasped seeing Amaya. And other present there too got shocked and confused for what going on.

Why Amaya was standing with veil on her head, wearing varmala, magalsutra adoring her neck and sindoor shining on her head. And why mantu was standing at her side as her husband.

Why Amaya and mantu got married?



how was it😳



part 1 2 3 below

part 4 page 9

part 5 page 12

part 6 page 14

part 7 page 17

part 8 page 20

part 9 page 29

part 10 page 36

part 11 page 40

part 12 page 45

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part 2

Sneha was shocked seeing her daughter as Amaya married, not knowing how to react? She never thought her amu will betray her like this and that too on her sister marriage. And mantu she always trust him and thought him mature and sensible person, she treated him like his son and he backstabs her goodness. She consoles herself and move to Amaya to confront her

Sneha: Amaya kya hai yeh sab, tum iss tarah yaha shadi karke ?ek baar bhi humare bare mein nahi socha .apni behen ke bare mein hi soch leti aaj shadi hai uski aur yeh gift diiya tumne usse. Chup kyun ho kuch bolo.

(Amaya what is all this. Why you married like this hiding and unknown to all. For once you not thought of us. And your sister her marriage is today and this gift you gave to her. Now why you are silent speak something)

She demanded answer from Amaya, who was standing quiet like a statue.

Amaya: mujhe kisi ko jawab nahi dene ki zarurat hai , mein mantu se pyaar karti hu and humne shadi kar li that iskya galat kara .

(I not need not to answer anyone; I loved mantu and married him. What wrong did I done in it)

(Ok I am really cut shorting this conversion I not enjoy writing it, its summary is everyone is angry on amaya and cursing her like in serial)

Rama mom: did you guys seeing, this are upbringings of chaubeyji, younger sister marry secretly on her elder sister marriage and then also not guilty on it

Sneha: mantu you always told me I am like your mom, then why you done this. I thought you a good and responsible person. But today you prove me wrong. Answer me at least you don't be quiet now.

Amaya not able to bear anyone put any allegations on mantu. mantu helplessly see to sneha with no answer of his act. What he justify knowing himself that he has done wrong. He just bent his head down.

Amaya: don't say anything to mantu, he is my husband I will not tolerate a single words for him. Whatever problem you have I am here speak to me

Buaji: now what to speak now this is height of shamelessness, but what we have to do with it, there family there matter. But boji(sister in law) don't you think this matter will affect your respect in banaras too, as you are also part of this family now. I am really sorry for you.

Naniji: it will affect when this marriage will happen. After knowing that these family girls are so characterless we will never make Rachita or house daughter in law.

Sneha gasped at nani words, rama and Rachita too looked at shocked .and mantu felt guilty of what happening.

Pushpa: what you are saying this we beg you to not do that. What is mistake of Rachita in this?

Rama mom: her mistake is she is this down market girl Amaya sister. Who has not manners, no values and

Sneha just shed tears listening to her helplessly. But that was enough for Rachita to hear. She voice out

Rachita: bas aunty,mein apni behen ko aache se janti hu,agar usne yeh sab kiya toh uske piche koi vajah hogi,aap aise kaise amu ke bare mein kuch bhi bol sakti ho.

(Enough aunty you said, I know my sister very well, if she done something major like this there must be some reason. How can you bad mouth her without reason?)

Rama: Rachita ji how can you talk to my mom like this

Rachita: but rama how can your mom say bad about my family, I am listening it lot but not now.

Rama: so you are defending your sister wrong

Rachita: no I am just asking her to be quiet till they know the right reason

Rama mom: leave it rama this city girls are like this only, come lets go home now.

Rama: but mom I love Rachita ji

Rama mom: is your love more than me.

Rama silently bends his head down and agrees with his mom. Rachita sanity was finally lost.

Rachita: rama your mom once said and you agreed to break this marriage. Wow this is your love and commitment towards us. According to you my sister is wrong then why you leaving me.

Rama: Rachita ji I still love you but I can't go against my mom.

Rachita: even if she is wrong

Rama: she is always right for me

Rachita: then please leave from here. I don't want to marry guy like you who not respect my family and moreover who not have mouth to speak. You are a spineless and dumb guy rama who never deserve me. The man who has no own thinking and who run after filing keys by other, to marry such person I rather prefer to be unmarried.

(Ok I know I am too straight but if all this happen in real Rachita character would have answered rama like this. Hope you not mind)

Rama got hurts and look at Rachita but she not paid attention to him. Other too was too shocked to react what was happening suddenly in indigestible. Sneha was completely broken and left with no strength to fight. On other hand rudra was confused and boiling with anger on why sumitra is not telling truth of Rachita.

Barat returned, now there was only chaubey and mathurs present there.

Rudra mom: babhiiji what all happened this. We were so happy about Rachita marriage but suddenly Amaya came like this and everything got destroyed. What we will do now there will so much bad talks in whole town about us.

Sneha felt her head spinning and she fell down. But luckily pushpa, jazz and Rachita hold her. Amaya got scared seeing sneha condition. She was lifeless. She moves forward to support her. But sneha show her hands to sop there only.

Sneha: leave my house mrs Amaya shrivastav.

Amaya: mom

Rachita and jazz: mom please doesn't say like this. Let her explain

Sneha: explanation is expected from whom who are ours but from now amu is not part of our family I disown her. And its better you too understand it well. And forget anyone name Amaya related to us. She not even deserves our concern or anger. She is dead for us.

Amaya: no mom aap aisa kaise keh sakti hai

(Mom you can't say like this)

Sneha: rudra throw this unwanted person out of my house now.

Rudra: ok aunty ji

Rudra drag amu out who was not ready to leave sneha like this.

Rudra: don't you listened what aunty said go from here.

But Amaya was adamant she not want to leave her mom like this. rudra hold her hand harshly to push her out but before he could throw her mantu hands stopped him. He makes rudra leave amu hand. And then himself hold Amaya hand.

Mantu: humari biwi hai hum shambhal lege. Ainda se haath lagane ki sochna bhi mat.

(she is my wife I will handle her.dont ever touch her again)

And drag amu out of mathur house. Leaving devasted mathur's behind.

Edited by manyarsh - 9 years ago
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part 3

The journey from Amaya house to mantu home was a silent one. Neither of them have converse after whatever happened. Mantu was driving his bike at full speed knowing very well that it is frightening Amaya. But his anger is not letting him to think anything. There are many questions running in his mind whose answer only she knows and that she is not ready tell. The bike bumps and Amaya holds mantu's shoulder to prevent her from falling. Feeling softness on his shoulder mantu raises his eyes to see in mirror and find little feared and uneasy Amaya holding him tight. He slows down speed. And murmur a sorry

Mantu: sorry tum thik ho.

(Sorry are you alright)

Amaya: nahi I am ok. Don't worry.

He node and then continue with his driving. But Amaya eyes were proudly admiring her hero, she always know that mantu will give his support in every step of life. Like prince for a princess. And today he proves it right. When she seek help from him during mandir.

Flashback

Mantu was eagerly waiting for Amaya at mandir, he saw she was very worried about something and that fact is making him go uneasy. He just want to know she is well, he wants to take all pain of her, console he, hide her in his protective arms safely. But where is she? And then she saw her coming, he thanked mahadev to keep her safe. Amaya come close to him.

Mantu: Amaya tum kaha reh gayi thi. Mein tumhare liye kitna pareshan tha.whaa tumhare nanaji ki tabiyat bigad gayi hai aur yaha tum nahi mil rahi thi. Tum thik toh ho na.

(Amaya where were you. I was so worried. In hospital your grandfather health is worsening and here you were missing. Are you ok)

He brust out all his worries in one go without letting her to say anything.

Amaya: mantu tumhe yaad hai na tumne mujse ek promise kiya tha. Jab meine tumhe tumhare dad ki watch wapas lautayi thi, ki mein tums eek koi bhi ccheez maang sakti hu.

Mantu holds her hands.

Mantu: ha Amaya hume yaad hai par iss waqt tumhe aisa kya chaiye joh hum de sakte hai.

(Yes Amaya I know but what I can give you at this time)

Amaya: mujse shadi karlo mantu abhi issi waqt.

(Marry me mantu now at this very moment)

Mantu stops his bike in front of his house bringing back Amaya from her own shelf. She confusedly looked at her new surrounding and it took a second to her remember what had changed now. And that now this is only her new life.

Mantu: Amaya tum yehi rukho hum aate hai

(Amaya you wait here. I just come back in a second)

Saying this mantu get inside house leaving Amaya again in her thought. How time changes so fast. Coming back to Mumbai from Paris Then her dad death, there stepping in Banaras. Adjust in new city, doing job for earning bread and butter. Get known of chaubey members. And with that many uninvited problems that always came in searching them. But in every problem, her family was with her as her strength. And today she is alone.no one who he can talk and take her pain out. He was missing her superman a lot today.She closed her eyes filling tired and defeated.

"Mahadev help me out please. Show me some light of hope in this dark and never ending black"

She finished her prayer to her favorite lord. And at same time she heard someone's foot step. She opened her eyes slowly and she saw a tall figure coming from dark towards light .due to her teary eyes she cannot see the face clearly it was fade, till that person came in front of her.

Mantu

One word escaped from her mouth. As if he was blessing in disguise, like her whole life had got meaning in it.as if he is answer to her solution, mahadev angel that had sent for her. She silently thanked her superman and then her lord to give mantu to her.

Amaya was proudly lost in adoring her newly wedded husband; when mantu call wake her up to reality.

Mantu: Amaya kya soch rahi ho,

(Amaya what are you thinking)

She nodded her head in no. then she notice a kalash in mantu hand full of rice and also a plate decorated with flower, candle and all needed stuff for pooja. She gave a questioningly look to mantu, and mantu on understanding her continue.

Mantu: yeh Banaras hai madam yaha shadi ek bahut bada aur ahem hissa hota hai zindagi ka.aur saath hi shadi se judi rasame sab bahut mayane rakhta hai Banaras mein, isliey hume yeh karna padh raha hai

(This is Banaras city madam where marriage and rituals related to it play a important and big place in everyone life)

Saying that mantu keep the kalash on house entry door and amya kicked the kalash inside the house. Marking her first steps towards their married life. Mantu Circle the pooja around Amaya.

She keeps her feet inside water braids in kukum but mistakenly loose her balance.

Amaya: mantu

amaya closes her to expect the pain but before her body hit the floor ,she felt a strong arms holding her on waist. Amaya holds on to her support in fear and after few second getting not pain she open her eyes only to find her hand holding mantu collars And a pair of worried eyes looking at her intently. Like always mantu saved her form fall. They both keep looking at each other. Forgetting every difference they have between them. After a while Amaya straighten herself.

Mantu: tum thik ho

(Are you alright)

Not letting his hold on her waist go. As if it is a normal thing between them.

Amaya: ha

(Yes)

Mantu: andar chalo.

(Come in)

Amaya: pehle mujse chodo toh sahi.

(First leave me)

Amaya said making him look at his hand where he had held her. Mantu quickly remove his hand and turn other side in embarrassment. And leave from there. Amaya come in house was seem empty and restrained than usual. That goes very well with their heart too

"Chiklu was out on his school picnic and uma had gone with her aunt to Allahabad at her father's sister home." Mantu gave out to amaya the reason of place been so quiet while keeping Amaya language in the room

Amaya simply nod before heading towards there room where she saw mantu preparing bed from her. Her thought once go to uma what storm will it come when uma will see this, when she know about her and mantu. She really not wanted ever that mantu and uma friendship break.it is family for mantu. But seems some things are not in our hands.

Mantu: Amaya tum iss kamre mai aaram kar lo hum bahar so jayege. Kuch kam ho toh keh dena.

(Amaya you rest here in room and I will be sleeping out. If you need something let me know)

And he heads out from room when Amaya called her

Amaya: mantu thanks for everything. I know ki muje tumhe inn sab ka explaination dena chaiye but

(I know I should explain you about this all but)

Mantu: Amaya raat bahut ho gayi hai , waise bhi aaj ka din bahut bada tha,ab isse khatam karna hi thik hoga tum so jao .hum kal baat karegein.

(Amaya it's got really too dark, you should sleep now, today day was too long to stretch it more. We will talk tomorrow)

As soon as mantu left the room Amaya slips down the wall cannot hold to it any more.

He left room without giving Amaya chance to say a word. His ignorance and silence perched Amaya heart. Why fate is so cruel to them? Whenever it seems it is time for them to unite it play some nasty tricks and they get separated again. She knows she has hurt him today but she was also helpless in front of conditions the time has kept in front of her. Her nanaji's health, Rama mom condition, Rachita di truth, and their family reputation everything was at stack and she has to take decision what to do.so she chooses this way the safest one. Letting her respect ruined to save her family reputation and to keep promised she done to her nanaji. She kept sitting down with wall recollecting the storm hits few hours ago.How she reached gupta niwas to give the gift to rama which is her Rachita di types so that he can impress her di. And then she heard about that brutal and heart stabbing truth. That Rachita is not mathur's but an illegitimate child of sneha. She still can't believe this to be true, how it can be when she always considers her di as important part of her. And today she came to know she is not her real sister. But it not matter it not even for a second. She believes relation is made from love not blood. Till now she was only proud of her superman but knowing about how his superman adopted another person child that too with happiness and fulfilled all condition towards her, she worships him. He never differentiate between his three daughters, he always wanted his families to one and live together, fight and smile together. And if this truth had come out today she don't know how it affected his father dedication, work and sacrifices that he had given for his family. She is glad at least Rachita di is saved from vulnerability of this truth. Her rachi di had done with her part of pain and there is no space for something more to get tears in her eyes. Her superman hates it. Rachi di was always his dad favorite and tears in her di eyes will break her superman heart and which she cannot let happen.Till now Rachita had been their strength she had fulfilled all duty of an elder daughter and now Amaya will support her so that she can cross this bad time.

When she heard Sumitra kept 3 conditions in front of her nanaji. First to make her son chief of social committee that is hold by gajanand. Second was to make mathur haveli in her rama's name. And last was she wants Amaya to be there house bride must to her dislike but she have no option as she not want girl like Rachita who is sin of don't know whom come in their house as her daughter in law and that way she can also settle her score with Amaya. Amaya was shocked listening to her demand, she was cruel she know but can stoop so low that she never know. Sh was felling disguise to been know a women like this. The women who not thought of her son love and happiness before making him a part of deal that women will never keep her Rachita di happy. It's good she came to know it before marriage only. Rama is already mute in front of her mother but her hope thing will change after marriage. But nothing will be good she can say rama family will always bad mouth Rachita for being her illegitimate and she will have no one to support even not rama. Now she will not let Rachita go in this hell nor will she agree with condition. They are no class people cannot be trusted what if they not stop here keep insulting her family, and threaten for Rachita truth. She has to do something that they come in her hands. But before she can confront them she saw her nanaji lying unconscious on ground. She ran to him. Luckily mantu come there and helped her to the way till hospital.

(as we all seen this part so i am writing quickly hope you not mind)

Seeing gajanand condition Amaya was totally broken. If it was no mantu she would have lost the strength but he consoles her, makes her realize of her responsibility and gave her support to her. Now she know she is not alone he is always with her, he trust her and she trust him. And a new confidence hit her dead soul, she believes now that she will do everything right. After how can he let her superman family breaks like this. She will fight against bad and rescue her family from this bad phase. Telling him to meet her after few hours she left from place to talk to sneha about the problem. On reaching home she saw sneha was very busy in work. Today was finally her elder daughter marriage she was so much happy ignoring all sadness and her health she was running from here to there to check all preparation. There should be no scope of mistake. Amaya make her heart hard she know the truth will hurt her mother, but she need to know she has right of it. And she can only advise her right thing. This is a big issue and she need to tell her mother her decision and consent is must. And she cannot hurt her mother more with any unexpected step. Whatever is the decision it will be lifetime and she can't take it just without consent of her. Making her mind prepare for telling truth she goes near sneha but in middle only rudra came and take her to show dinner arrangement. Like this Amaya always tries to talk to her but sneha was too busy now. Time is running out barat must be in way. She thought to talk to her at any cost when her nanaji phone rang .it was left with her from time gajajnand was admitted to hospital. It was of sumitra. She know why sumitra had call gajanand, now time to talk to sneha not left, she only has to take some harsh step. Amaya picks the phone and told sumitra to meet her in back area of their house. First she was surprised to listen Amaya voice but then agree to her request. Amaya make few calls and take out the legal paper of house and resignation letter of her grandfather to get them sign. As sneha is his elder daughter so in absence of gajanand she is president of the committee and she can sign and resign on behalf of gajanand on signing resignation letter. She stares at the paper and said

"I promise mom I will get back everything what is our soon "

She makes a call

"Hello sinha uncle i want a favour from you "

amaya reached to meet sumitra and other ladies of rama family were too present there.

sumitra: why you called us here girl

amaya: to give you this,my house property paper which are now signed by my mom and transferred to your name.also this is my nanaji designation letter where she kept your son name in list to be as next head.

sumitra and other ladies look surprisingly toward amaya. no doubt she had listened their talks with her nanaji and fallen in prey. they gave a evil smile.

buaji: you are a good player girl,you cheated your own mother only

amaya: why i cannt when you can play with your son's emotion tell him lies and use him. why i cannt use my mother for their good only.

naniji: you girl dont cross your limit. you are nothing in front of it. if we show our true colours then you will repent it.

amaya: i am repenting. i was really foolish to think you guys have little humanity. to think rama is good boy for my di . but never mind at least now i can see what is right and what is wrong.

sumitra: hey girl dont involve rama in all this

amaya: sorry aunty but rama has already got involve in it. and now i will make sure that he never get close to my rachidi. he is just a spinless,unmindful and idiot person, you know only to become tail of his mother.

sumitra got angry listening about rama from amaya, she raise her hands to slap her but amaya stop it in mid. and in turn twist it badly making her winch in pain .

amaya: yeh galti mat kara auntiji varna kya pata bete ki barat ki wajah hospital mein jana pade.

(dont do that mistake aunty aur who know in place of your son marriage you have to go at hospital)

she left sumitra hand,

amaya: i come here to make a deal with you all

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Edited by manyarsh - 9 years ago
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sorry friends not updating as promised
update had to drafted

it is not been completed

actually i have exam in November so sometimes not able to take time i will update it today anyhow

really sorry for delay

and thanks for love and support 🤗my heart had already broken for manya so feel so low to come on-line and write ff

but i will continue them and there will be more coming only if you guys like to read

anyway

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part 4
teaser


Ishqaana dil raaton din..

Tera naam dohraaye re.

Ratey jaye re..

Aa dohraaye re..

They both looked each other only to get lost in themselves. A slow and soothing air was tickling their body. Mantu not know when he held her waist more tightly pulling her more close to him, Amaya too move more close to him finding solace in his closeness.



it will be up till tonight or tommorrow😳

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Originally posted by: mantuamu

nice update...I like when amaya twisted sumitra hand..I wish if it happens. .


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waiting for part 4... tomorrow my uni will star n m nervous... plz update soon


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Hmm... Kahani main twist... Update soon 😊


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Thank you... m so madly in love with manya that i want to read more and more ff


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Very nice saloni, waiting for next part 👏


Originally posted by: Princicute

Hey soni. .Hugso sorry for not commenting earlier. ..u made me in tears ...I wish this could hv happened. ..very well written ...Do continue. .keep updating. ...am loving every part of it ...rachita has a strong voice ...and rama deserves it. ..

Well done. ...update soon. .

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: moon14

Nice update.eager to know what happens next and the truth behind manyas marriage


Originally posted by: ..Crimson..

Nice one soni🤗 ManYa marriage🥳thanks for breaking RaRa marriage agar yeh wedding hoti hi na toh kitna accha hotaa!


Originally posted by: Adeebahussain

Update soon... i loved it... kash real mein bhi aisa e hua hota aur mantu ne kaha hotA humara pyaar hai hum khud sambhal lenge


Originally posted by: wrizaa

this was nice ... but why did amu marry mantu???... the best part is mantu amaya r together... yehi kaafi hai manya fans k liye...


Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

I loved Mantu's dialogue."Humari Biwi hai hum sambhal lenge"
😳 😳 😳
It was too good... Update soon 😊



Originally posted by: wrizaa

plz update soon... I am curious to know... it was awesome...


Originally posted by: ..Crimson..

Wow. Please update soon before i completely give up on this shit(TSM) i wanna read this ManYa so that I'll only have good ManYa memories and ill just pretend that ramaya never happened for my own peace of mind.


Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

ManYa marriage 😳
Update soon...
Eagerly waiting 😊

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pleas comment and likes for motivation of me to invest time in this ff
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plz update soon... I am curious to know... it was awesome...
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Wow. Please update soon before i completely give up on this shit(TSM) i wanna read this ManYa so that I'll only have good ManYa memories and ill just pretend that ramaya never happened for my own peace of mind.

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