COLLAB MANYA FF ALWAYS for YOU sneak peak of next ch pg 53 1/4 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
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group hug
ahh i miss matur's hug 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
finally got some time to write an update
it will be updated early morning

till then dream manya guys

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Princicute

Here u go girl ...I mean bravo. ...such beautiful moments. ...Thank you so much dear ...I am reliving our manya. ...love u


Originally posted by: wrizaa

very nice... I loved it... bichari uma 😆... when will she come to know about manya's marriage? ?? ... humari phooti kismat we didn't get to see all this in tsm...


Originally posted by: moon14

Hey what a awesome update.But the teaser you uploaded earlier wasn't in this part. Nice by the way .Update soon


Originally posted by: AartShefa

Superb dr..

Thanks for the long update. .
I love the songs that u have used during their marriage. .
I miss mantu badly. .
Thanks agn


Originally posted by: mantuamu

nice update dear..all the best for ur exams prepare well..


Originally posted by: tarun1234567

Beautiful soni...awesome work


Originally posted by: imAbhishek


thank u very much for continuing this nice work...😊

and just forgot to say :-

best of luck for ur exams 🤓


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thanks all
replied you all😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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He carries Amaya in his arms and makes her sleep on bed properly. And then slowly remove the heavy jewellery that was troubling her. And then cover her from blanket. Mantu was about to live when he felt some hold. He looks back and found Amaya securely holding his hand close to heart. He was elated seeing it, be in unconscious state at least he hold some importance to her. But then remembering what she done today how she hurt him, her family also his friends rama emotion anger resurface his heart again, he tries to take out his hand but that result in disturbance in her sleep. She move a bit left and right and then go back to her slumber with pulling more mantu's hand much closer to her. Her pull make Mantu fall half on bed with a force. Seeing on way out he finally defeat himself and slid by her side on same bed.

Mantu keep staring the innocent face of the girl sleeping peacefully in his arms. Who can say seeing her now that she can be so bad to take his promise advantage in wrong way, to get her life in danger due to her stubbornness, and break marriage of her sister?

No his heart not believe, he know his Amaya his pure heart girl, if she want then too she never can hurt anyone, he has always seen how responsible and calculative Amaya is while taking her decision, but he also know that Amaya is very determined girl she will not speak till she want, and he will wait for that time. When she can trust her enough to tell everything, and justify her action. And now he has to get used of her wife tantrum as she is now Amaya Abhishek Shrivastav. Their marriage might be sign of mahadev, that they are bound to be together. Today mahadev gave him chance to be with the person whom he loves for full life, to see him get old. To live life's each small moment, every moment of happiness with her. And be her support in her problems. He will never let her go far from him. He will love her. No matter, she will ever care about his love or not. He look at her glowing face with the red vermilion that speak that this beauty is now his and that give him hope that one day Amaya will tell him truth and will never let this go this hope easily. He cannot stop himself from touching her. He caresses her face and then locks her hairs teasing her face and shush them behind her ears. He kept looking her till his eyes give away.

Finally the sun kindles proudly dominating the dark and wicked night. The sound of bells and chanting name of lord of Banaras mingle with soft fluffy scent of wet soil. Birds came out of there house calling it a morning. Flower shone standing with smiling face to light. Chaos on small streets is started. Chirping of morning news while taking sips of tea can be heard. Small kids are seemed waving their hands happily out and welcoming school time. But cut off from this routine, morning light is more interested in peeping shamelessly in window to look to two souls that are sleeping in each other arms in solace. Unintentionally a fainted sunlight slink through windows and bridged over Amaya face smacking itself on its stupidity. Creasing her face see immediately covers it from her hand to stop light to disturb her sleep. And turn side, facing her back towards window. When she realized she is not on mattress, it not feels cushioned and soft as it should be no she is over someone. She lazily open her eyes only get mesmerized in her own mistake that look so perfect to her now. She not gets to know when Mantu make her sleep here and when she shifts her head over mantu's chest and her hand holding his hand. Everything feels so right, so blissful as if it always had to be like this only. She rises a little on her elbow to get clear view of his handsome husband. He looks like a kid while sleeping. Quiet, cute and mushy a bit, but he can also burn whole world when he is as an aggressive annihilator. Like mahadev who is quiet like flowing water but same time they can destroy whole world in their anger like a high tide of ocean. Mantu is an angle send by her mahadev only. He has always helped her from the day they came here is Banaras. She can never agree on part of their existence possible in Banaras without Mantu. She hugs back him and rested her head on his chest. Whatever happened last night had hurt her lot but she never thought that this dark will come with a grey lining of light and gift her the biggest happiness of her life, Mantu. He was everything that a girl wanted. He has a Sturdy and charming persona, a Pure and bald heart. Positivity in his talks, all love him. And most importantly he loves her. In same way his superman does. Her dad will be so happy on her decision. And now he is all her. She knows he is angry on her, like an arrogant no so cool hot husband but she will find way to make up with him. After all she is Amaya mathur .ooups correction "Mrs. Amaya shrivastav". How much far Mr. Shrivastav will run from her. A naught smile crept on her face.

Mantu love is much stronger than his anger; he understands her and trusts her. And his love and trust will now become her support to fight against those who are standing between happiness of her love and her family. She cannot let herself go weak now, she has to fight to prove herself right, to make everything correct, to win her love and to reveal true faces of someone's. He will get hurt but it is for his good only, and she will there to take care of him. She cannot fill the empty place of his friend that is of Uma and will always be. But she will try to build a new place of her in his heart. Not as a lover or wife but as a friend.

She reluctantly woke up from bed and giving a quick look to Mantu again, walk out of bed assuring that his sleep not get disturb. Some work need to be done urgently before anyone sees her.

"Why did you call me here?"

Asked, sumitra in a displeased way

"Really I think you forgot that's you who calling me since night Mrs. Gupta" said Amaya

"I just want my paper of house that we dealt about"

"You have to wait for it it's not a one rupee toffee of your shop that you will ask and get in a second in your hand, they are property transfer paper that the take there on time to form. Its legal processing you have to understand that." She explains.

"She girl if you thinking to cheat me then I tell you I am not such kind of women who can be easily be fooled off. You will have to pay high on thinking too about it."

"Seriously. if I backstab you then. If I deny giving you property what will you do. Case against me or will tell Rachita di truth to all. In both case you are at lost. Because in case against me you have no proof of our deal and legally there in no claim of your on our house and if you tell Rachita di about her truth then who will believe it. So give rest to running horses of your mind and wait for one or 2 days as soon as paper will get ready I will inform you"

Sumitra leave from there fuming. Have no choice left. Amaya give victory look to her.

"Not so easily Mrs. Gupta you have to done a grave mistake messing with my family. Now you have to bear its consequences. Haveli will be never yours. But I have to keep you under my control because you are important medium to me to tell me the source from where you get to know truth of Rachita. I know you are not worth of get to know that truth on your own, you are surely being used, the master mind behind this is someone else. I just need to find that person, once I grab him you are of my no use."

Amaya call sinha their lawyer in Mumbai.

"Yes uncle are paper ready."

Sinha: papers are ready but are you sure, that by naming the property on name of Mr. Ramashrey gupta is safe. What if he gives came out like his mother"

Amaya: no uncle Rama is not bad heart person. He is in spell of her mother fake love and concern. Once that spell will broke everything will be clearly visible to him.

Sinha: as you say I will mail you the paper today evening, and if you need any more help call me ok

Amaya: thanks a lot sinha uncle

Mantu extend her hand to get same warmth that was few moment ago. Amaya. But not finding it he open his eyes and look at other side, the bed was empty , he get him up and move his eyes here and there to find her but she seems nowhere. he checks the washroom and kitchen but there were no trace of her.

He got worried for her. Where she can leaves so early in morning, she was so tense yesterday and also her hand was burned badly, she should take rest, but mahadev only knows what make her go out of house. And now why she is not picking up the phone he thought grabbing the phone angrily. He quickly wore his slippers and grabs her bike keys. He can't sit here and wait for her return, he has to go and find her, as soon as he open the found her there itself. He breathes a relief.

Trying to be calm and polite he questioned her about his whereabouts

"Can't you sit quietly, is it necessary to make me run all time after you. And can I know where you were gone so early in morning"

Amaya: I gone to see nanaji. Sorry I disturbed your sleep and get you in tension. Don't worry I am alright.

Mantu: I was not worried for you. Not dream high ok.

Amaya nod quietly not in mood to argue with him. And what when his eyes gone on dress she is wearing that was same that she wore on that reception night.

Precap :

Ishqaana dil raaton din..

Tera naam dohraaye re.

Ratey jaye re..

Aa dohraaye re..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
finally gave a update
i am not sure how it is because frankly speaking i just wrote it whatever kept coming on my mind, i am too tired to imagine put emotion and shape a lovely , full powered packed update, my exam going to start i full day just study so nothing came in mind except this, hope you all will like this

so comment and like guys next update i will try to soon bear with me till 16 Nov after that i promised to give you a good lengthy and full manya update..

till then enjoy laugh and goodnight , bye.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice... I loved ManYa's scene... OMG!! Amaya on Mantu
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... nice... try to add some hot manya scene if possible. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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no one liked the update😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Really nice... I loved ManYa's scene... OMG!! Amaya on Mantu

Continue soon 😊


thanks😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: wrizaa

wow... nice... try to add some hot manya scene if possible. ..



thanks it is coming in next update😳

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