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Posted: 14 years ago
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Location: Hotel's parking lot.
(It rained heavily)
(Akhil and Shaina are interrogating a waiter)
Shaina: Table pehley sey hi reserved tha?
Waiter: Haan,madam.Wooh anniversary mana rahey they.
Akhil: Akeley? Koi dost? Koi nahi tha?
Waiter: Akeley hi the,sir.
(Ayan is standing at the parking lot with the rest of the team)
Ayan: Kya pata chala?
Akhil: Sir, victims husband and wife they.
Shaina: Anniversary celebrate karney yahaan aye.
Anurag: (Points towards the guy) Ye hai victim 1,iska naam Vivek Parag hai,iska naam iskey credit card sey pata chala.(Points towards the girl) Ye hai victim 2,Shreya Parag,iska naam cake pe likha tha.
Ayan: Okay. Suha and Taani,tum log blood aur fluid samples le lo.
Suha: Haan.
Ayan: The rest of you, evidence ki liye dekho and interrogate the witnesses.
(Meanwhile,Karan clicks pictures of the dead bodies)
Ayan: Car park kar rahey they ya jaa rahey they?
Security guard: Nikal rahey they,sir.
(Shaina walks towards them)
Shaina: We have an interesting witness.
Ayan: Acha? Call him for interrogation.
Location: Taskforce
Present: The whole team.
Akhil(whispers into Anurag's ear): Why are we here now?
Anurag(whispers): Case synopsis!
Ayan: Baarish hui.Sab kuch dhul gaya.
Shaina: Haan,issey achey raat aur kausey ho sakti hai killer ki liye.
Anurag: Baarish kab suru hui?
Taani: Eaxctly at 10:38.
Ayan: Uss hotel mey valet parking hai?
Akhil: Valet parking toh hai,lekin waha ka guard ney kaha ki woh log gaadi khud hi park kiye they.
Ayan: Akhil,brief the case.
Akhil: Yes,sir.
Akhil: Ek couple,Shreya aur Vivek apney anniversary celebrate karey ek hotel mey jatey hai.Khana khaney ki baad jaisey hi wooh loog bahar nikaltey hai aur parking lot ki taraf badtey hai,un pey war hota hai.
Shaina: Gaadi kausi thi?
Akhil: There's no car.No key.
Karan: Matlab motive choori hai.
Taani: Really? (laughs)
Anurag: Chor ek gaadi ki liye doo logoon ko marega?
Ayan: Karan,understand this,hum yahaa pe forensic pe tie up kiye bina conclusions pe jump nahi kar saktey.
Shaina: Further,koi khooni gaadi choori karkey apney sar pe aur musibat nahi leta.
Suha: Both the bodies were wet.Matlab sari evidences dhul gaye.
Taani: Aur hair key traces bhi.
Akhil: Matlab DNA is out.
Ayan: Aur ghav kaisey they?
Suha: Aurat pe ek hi bar war hua.Gaaley ki right side sey nichey tak carotid artery cut gaye,so nichey girney sey pehley mar gaye hogi.
Akhil: Kaisey wooh chiki nahi? Aur mard ka ghav?
Taani: Ek bar pechey peet par,5 bar samney sey.
Anurag: Matlab doo killer they?
Taani: Analysis toh tum loog hi karogey. Hum toh sirf forensics kar saktey hai.

Location: Taskforce interrogation room.
Present: Shaina,Taani
Shaina: Aap ka naam?
Witness: Pooja.
Shaian: Aap waha kya kar rahey they?
Pooja: Main hotel sey guzar rahi thi..and just then one car almost ran into me,aagey jakey dekha, doo log road pe latey they. Main ney us mard ko chua,uski madat karney,but he died.
Shaina: Gaadi kausi thi?
Pooja: Shayad tata safari thi.
Shaina: Gaadi utney tezey sey aapkey taraf aya..aur phir bhi aap ney pehchan li?
Pooja: Nahi wooh,Tara safari jasey lagi mujhe.
Shaina: Uskey kapdey le lo.
Pooja: Lekin kyu? Mujhe usey choona nahi chahiye tha.
Taani: Kapdey de do.Tumarey shirt pe khoon ka daag hai.Ye hamarey liye forensic evidence hai.
Shaina: Shirt de dejiye. Hum aapke liye kuch aur intezam kartey hai.
Location: Forensic lab
Suha: Ayan,ladkhi key reports normal hai.Ghav clean hai .
Ayan:Okay.Aur ladka ka?
Taani: Ladka ka ghav bahut gehra hai. Aur kaafi messy hai.
Ayan: Matlab saaf hai.Do khooni hai.
Akhil: Kis type key weapons use kiya hai?
Suha: Koi blunt instrument sey kiya gaya hai.
Ayan: Akhil,ye Pooja ka kya?
Akhil: Ye Pooja..yes,her story holds.
Anurag: Aaj toh forensic waloon ki band bajney waali hai.Badi overaction kartey rehtey hai.
Taani: Anurag,tum investigation ka kam karo.
Anurag: Haan haan.
Ayan: Akhil,ye Shreya ki gaadi trace hua kya?
Akhil:Abhi tak toh nahi,sir.I am trying.
Ayan:Ok.

Precap:
(Taani and Anurag are on the bike)
Anurag: Kya boring film tha!
Taani: Shut up! Bahut acha tha.
Anurag: Chi! Issey achha toh main aitraz dekhta.Kareena ka.
Taani: Stop the bike.
Anurag:Arey kya hua?(Anu stops)
Taani: Agar tumhey aitraz dekhna hai toh mujhe koi aitraz nahi hai.Jao. 😆

Edited by pravschills - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sharmeeli

🤗Loved the update dear!!!!🤗 plzzzzz update ASAP😳 and thank you for the PM dear😳


Thanks 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Thanks 😊
Edited by pravschills - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow...fab part
now post nxt part asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
nicee uptd... lovee it...
i think tumse ek mistake ho gayee hai, jab akhil enter hota hai to uske dialogs tumne Ayan ko hi dediye,,, 😕 hope u don't mind... maine sirf inform kar rahi thi....

cont soon n pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

wow...fab part

now post nxt part asap


Thanks.I ll post today 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: amira_saeed

nicee uptd... lovee it...
i think tumse ek mistake ho gayee hai, jab akhil enter hota hai to uske dialogs tumne Ayan ko hi dediye,,, 😕 hope u don't mind... maine sirf inform kar rahi thi....

cont soon n pm me


Thanks 😃.Yeah,one I messed up 1 dialogue.I edited it.Thanks for reading and pointing out the mistake and I obviously don't mind.Thanks again.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
awsum 1....vry nice......plzz post d oder ch soon actually i m gettin vry curious
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshiya_rox

awsum 1....vry nice......plzz post d oder ch soon actually i m gettin vry curious


awwwww 😊 i ll post tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pravschills


awwwww 😊 i ll post tomorrow 😊
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thnku....vry excited for ur next ch😃

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