FF :- || Pehla Nasha || Updated ch:3,page:10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello folks,I am back with yet another fanfic.Well,I had my exams and I took a long break from IF and now,since they are done I want to start a new fanfic.I am discontinuing my previous one 'cause it's been a month or more since I updated it and I lost the hang of it.I promise to give you a good story line this time.

About the story
This story is about crime and love.It deals with truth,trust,love,care,hate,envy,relationships and past.The following characters work in taskforce as a team to solve cases and the story also deals with how they fall in love and stand by each other.

Chapter Links
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Characters

(left) Akhil Walecha - The easy-going guy.He lives with his dad who works for the Dubai airlines. Handsome,rich,independent,party animal, guitarist and maintains a decent distance from girls.He has his own NGO named WE for underprivileged children.He did his undergraduation and graduation in Scotland and meanwhile worked in a crime detection agency as he thought it was a good source of pocket money.His mom died when he was five and he shares his home with his house keeper Kameshwar(kami).

(right) Dhruv Duggal - Simple,sweet,subtle guy.His parents died in an accident when he was very little.He stayed with his uncle who passed away an year ago.He,now,lives in Mumbai.



(Top Left) Karan Tacker - The crazy maniac. He funny,smart,hard-working,playful.
(Top Right) Shaina Randhwa - The girl who hates men.Karan was her ex-boyfriend who she got engaged to and called off the marriage due to certain reasons.She is extremely rude to every man except the cheif of taskforce,Ayan Uttam.
(Below Left) Taani Banerjee - Bubbly,caring,hyper and sweet.She and Anurag maintain a strong bond of friendship and fight a lot. She lives with her parents and is extremely close to her family.
(Below right) Anurag Ganguly - He lives with his parents.He is extremely close to his mother and is a little cold towards his dad but however,he loves his family a lot.



(Left) Suha Uttam - She is the forensic chief of taskforce and is totally in love with her husband,Ayan and her little kid,Sachin,who is one and half year old.Sachin is very attached to his grandmother.

(Right) Ayan Uttam - Extremely sweet but when it comes to work he is very strict and rigid,responsible and loves his wife and son more than anything else. He is the chief of the taskforce.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luking intresting.... plzz cont soon n pm me
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ITS AWESOME YAAR I LOVE THE CONCEPT CONTINUE SOON
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love the concept... pls continue
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Originally posted by: LOVEBARBIE

ITS AWESOME YAAR I LOVE THE CONCEPT CONTINUE SOON


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Originally posted by: amira_saeed

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Location: Hospital
Receptionist: Sir,aapko logon ko doctor bula rahey hai.
Anurag,Karan: Haan.
(They enter the doctor's cabin)
Karan: Kya hua doctor?
Doctor: (towards anu)Tumharey sarey reports padhney ki baad..
Karan: tumor? 😆
Doctor: Nahi
Karan: Toh fir malaria aur filarial mix hokey dengue aya? 😆
Doctor: Nahi nahi.
Karan: Acha.TB aur thyroid mix hokey typhoid aya? 😆 BP aur sugar mix hokey heart-attack ayegi kya? 😆
Doctor: Aisa kuch nahi hai..
Anurag: Kya bakwas kar rahey ho Karan,hum kis cheez ki liye aye aur tum kya baat kar rahey ho? 😆
Doctor: Mr.Karan,aap please bahar wait kejiye.
(karan walks out)
Doctor: Humney jasia soncha,waisa hi hua. I am sorry.
Anurag: (upset) 🤢
Doc: Himat mat haro.Isi waqt tumhe mazboot hona chahiye.
Anurag: Aur merey paas kitna time hai doctor?
Doc:Maximum 3 to 4 years.
Anurag: Oh my god!
Doc: Don't lose hope.America mein ispey abhi research shuru hua hai.We ll find some solution.
Anurag: Merey saath hi aisa kyun hota hai?
Doc: Anurag,hairfall kafi common problem hai. 😆 😆 😆
Anurag: Mera toh abhi tak shaadi bhi nahi hua.
Doc: Tum jangey kyu tumhara hair fall ho raha hai?
Anurag: Tension ki wajah sey.
Doc: Tension kyu?
Anuarg: Hair fall ki wajah sey. 😆
Doc: Oh(totally lost).
__________________________________________________________________
Location: Taskforce
Anurag,Karan,Taani are present
Taani,Karan: (laughing their heads off)
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Location: Akhil Walecha's House

Sandeep(Akhil's dad): Aaj tera interview hai na?
Akhil: Haan dad.
Sandeep: All the best beta!
Akhil: Thanks,dad!
Sandeep:I just hope ki aaj tu reject ho gaye.
Akhil: Kya dad?
Sandeep: Ye police ki naukri kyu karna chahta hai? Meri tarah business kar na.
Akhil: How boring,dad!
Sandeep: Ajju,agar aaj tujhe ye naukri nahi milega na,you will meet me in the office tomorrow!
Akhil: Kya dad,otherwise also I ll meet you in the dad,bhul gaye? Twenty thousand for vacation.
Sandeep: Idiot! Mera kehna ka matlab tha,ye job nahi milega toh merey office mey tu kaam karega.
Akhil: Sandy daddy 😆..job miljayegi.See ya in the evening.Bye!
Sandeep: Bye!
Akhil: Kami(Kameshwar,his housekeeper) Bike keys?
(Kami gives the keys)
Sandeep: Aaj toh car mey chaley jao.
Akhil: Dad..jo bhi karo..style sey karo! 😆
Sandeep: (smiles)
Location: Taskforce, waiting hall
Ayan,suha and shaina are present.
Receptionist: Mr.Walecha?
Akhil: Yeah,it's me.
Re: Aap andar jaa saktey hai.
(Akhil enters the interview hall)
Akhil: Good morning!
Suha: (smiles) sit!
Akhil: (smiles)
Shaina: Before we start,why do you want to work here?
Akhil: I always wanted to make public feel safe and I also worked in Scotland's crime detection bureau and I liked the job.
Shaina: What made you leave that job?
Akhil: I was just a trainee there and I worked there as long as I studied.
Suha: Aapkey portfolio bahut acha hai.Very impressive..
Ayan: Tell us,why should we hire you.
Akhil: Main ye kaam mehnat sey nahi,apna mann laga key karunga.
Suha: (smiles) Hmm..I hope you really meant that.
Akhil: I did(smiles).
Ayan: I am done.Shaina,tu kuch puchna chahti ho?
Shaina: Define an ideal job.
Akhil: "I'll tell you what I don't want to be doing - sitting in boring meetings, doing grunt work and having to be nice to people all day long.
Shaina: Okay.You can go.
Ayan: If you are selected we will call you.
Akhil: Thank you.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, i liked it !!!!!!! 😊
plz continue....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Additi_sjfan

love the concept... pls continue


Thanks 😃
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Originally posted by: R_Dutta

Hey, i liked it !!!!!!! 😊

plz continue....😃


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