FF:: | Tere Naam | (Chap 30-PG17- 16th Feb!)

Hey everyone. This is my first fanfic on the TL forum. I've written alot of fics on other websites so I thought I'd try and write one on here.

I got the idea from reading many of Meg (IndigoBlue)'s amazing posts/poems so the credit of my inspiration goes solely to her. =]. (and TaAnu!)

I'm currently studying on a Creative Writing course at Uni and I've recently written a 10 page play (based on the TL story obviously).

FYI: some of this fanfic may sound very close to what we've already seen on TL and in hope of not getting done for copyright/plagarism I just thought I'd let you know that it's only because I've watched the first few scenes at least a hundred times and I can't get it out of my head! So I apologise in advance! Anyway, enough of that...I hope you enjoy it and do let me know what you think...



Tere Naam

Chapter One

"Chal, meh tere saath chalta hoon" Subodh said, about to get out of the car with Taani.
"Nahi Subodh" she stopped him "mujhe akele hi jaana paregha"
"Lekin Taani..."
"Subodh, please. Tumne jo mere liye kiya, main nahi bhoolsakti. Lekin abhi mujhe andar akele jaana paregha"
"Acha" he sighed "lekin milne ke baad mujhe zaroor phone karlena"
"Haan. Main karloonghi. Thanks"
"Arre Taani, itne saal se hum doni dost rahe lekin tu abhi bhi formalities karne lagi hai" he smiled, making her smile back. "ab tu jaa. Mil le"

She got out of the taxi and waved Subodh off before making her way into the gates, only to be stopped by a security guard.

"Madam, yeh aap kahaan jaarahi hain? Aapko pata hai is waqt kya time hai?"
"Mujhe pata hai lekin..."
"Lekin kuch nahi" he stopped her "aap abhi andar nahi aasakti. Jaaye yahaan se"
"Suniye, mera andar jaana bohat hi zaroori hai"
"Zaroori hai to subha aajayegha. Abhi meh aapko andar nahi jaane dehsakta"
"Dekhiye.." she tried oncemore
"Kya aapko meri baat samaj meh nahi aayi?" he began to get annoyed "Maine kaha aap yahaan se jaayen"
"Aap meri baat suniye" she refused to be defeated "Meh yahaan Dr. Prakash Mehta ke ijaazat se aayi hoon aur unno ne khud mujhse kaha ke meh andar jaoon" she told him, irritated. He looked at her for a second.
"Dr Mehta ne khud kaha?"
"Ji haan! Agar aap meri baaton par yakeen nahi karte to phir aap unse khud baat karsakte hain" she said holding her phone out to challenge him.
"Nahi nahi madam!" he relented "aapne to kaha to theek hi kaha hoga" he said "aaye na" he said stepping aside and she walked into the gates, past him.

"Aap seedha jaaye. Jo building aapko saamne nazar aayegha, vaheen aapko jaana hai"
"Theek hai. Shukriya" she said walking off.

P.S Apologies because my Hindi isn't great. Urdu is my mother tongue but I do want to try and perfect it so bear with me! =].

😲 😲 You got inspired by moiii?? 😲 😳 😳 That's really sweet..no one has ever actually credited me for inspiration..unbelievable...you're being a ⭐️

add me too lubz....its interesting...😳😳.... paagal anu story...😍

You're weeelcome Indigo =] and thaank you Deeps... I think it's gonna be a while til we see the actual Paagal Onu on our screens.😍

I'll be adding later on today =]

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love reading about taanu scenes

Lovely start Lubz! Add me to the PM list! 👏

very nice add me too 😃

Thank you girls. =]

I'm just figuring out this whole PM list thing lol. Bear with me. Just about to add another chapter anyway.

Here's the next chapter girls. I'm still trying to figure out the whole PM list thing so bear with me. Hope you enjoy it =].

Chapter Two.

"Suniye?" she said approaching a makeshift nurses table that consisted of a table and two chairs with two nurses gossiping at it. "excuse me?!" she was starting to get frustrated with the ignorance that the workers at this Asylum were showing towards her. As soon as she raised her voice, both of the nurses looked up at her in annoyance.

"Ji? Kya chaahiye aapko?" one of them asked
"Haan, itni raat ko aap yahaan kyun aayen?" the second nurse asked
"Mujhe patient number teen sau paanch se milna hai"
"Abhi?" the second nurse asked
"Ji haan, abhi, issi waqt" Taani insisted

"Dekhiye madam ji. Aap yahaan kisise nahi milsakte. Kal aahkar milna" The first told her
"Ji nahi" she told them, getting more irritated by the minute. "mujhe unse abhi milna hai aur agar aap mujhe unse nahi milvaaye na, to main Dr. Mehta se khud complaint likwaoonghi" she was deadly serious.
"Shilpa" the second nurse whispered
"Haan?"
"Milwaade."
"Lekin.." Shilpa seemed to relent
"Lekin kuch nahi. Mujhe is naukhri ki sakht zaroorat hai. Do bachche ko paalna hai mujhe"
"Haan, haan. Acha theek hai" she replied and got up "chaliye madam ji" she told Taani courteaously.
"Shukriya" she said before following Shilpa down the dark alleyway where all she could hear was the loud and racous laughter filling the asylum and frightening her to her very core.

"Aaye" Shilpa stopped in front of the last door in the corridor. Taani watched as Shilpa searched for the right key from the bunch in her hand then unlocked the door and opened the small wooden door that covered the window of the room. Shilpa turned to Taani, who slowly approached the window.

There he was. Stood sideways as he was sat on the floor with a piece of charcoal in his hand, writing "I love Mishti" on the wall. She smiled as her eyes began to water and blur her vision. She wiped her eyes quickly and saw that the whole room had the same writing all over it.

"Do saal se yeh yahaan hai. Aur yeh aisa hi karta hai. Deewar par bas yahi likhta hai" she sighed "Baghwan jaane yeh Mishti kaun hai, jiske liye yeh itna deewaana bana hai" she said as Taani watched him continue to write on the wall, happy in his own little world.
"Main hi Mishti hoon" she told the nurse.
"Aap?" she asked, confused
"Haan. Onu ke liye main sirf aur sirf Mishti hoon"
"Onu? Lekin yeh aapko kya lagte hain?"
"Pati hai yeh mera" she told her as she watched him stop to scratch his head as he looked for a space that was empty to continue to write on the wall.
"Pati?" Shilpa asked Taani.
"Ji" was all she could reply as her eyes were still fixated on her husband.
"Lekin aapko yahaan kabhi nahi dekha?"
"Mujhe aaj hi pata chala ke yeh yahaan hai to meh dori chali aayi"
"Ohh" was all that Shilpa could say.
"Kya hum andar jaasakte?" she asked turning to Shilpa.
"Ji. Aaye na" she opened the door and waited for Taani to walk into the room first.

Taani walked in slowly. She couldn't take her eyes off Anurag. He looked so different yet he still seemed the same to her.

"Jabse yeh aaya hai yahaan to na yeh bolta hai aur na kisiko sunta hai. Bas, apni duniya meh rehta hai" Shilpa said behind Taani as she slowly made her way over to him.

Shilpa was right. He hadn't even looked up to see who was walking into the room. Anuraag got up to write on the wall and Taani reached forward and put her hand over his, making him stop what he was doing and followed the arm to look up at Taani as she smiled down at him.

He studied her face carefully for a few minutes. She continued to smile warmly at him as he tried to work out in his head who she was. Who was this woman? Why did she so seem familiar to him? He didn't realise that a tear had fallen down his cheek until the woman wiped it away for him.

He shrugged her hand off and went back to writing on the wall.

"Onu?" she said and Anurag stopped writing. That voice. Again; the familiarity. The closeness. Alot of people called him that but it felt as if it was someone really close to him. But who? He looked up at the woman and she continued to smile at him. Why was she smiling when there were tears in her eyes? Why did he feel like wiping those tears away? He usually didn't care about anything but why, when this woman was crying right in front of him, did he feel the urge to stop the tears from falling from her eyes?

loved it