||Nafee's Notes|| No one to Someone Pg 16 29/11 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Keanufan

Now you have given me a warning...but I still have my moments...in this one too... (Ah, I like who mentions the favourite parts 😊)
#Moon was the only thing that wrapped me, pampered me, and gave me warmth whenever I felt lonely and miserable.
That is so applicable on me....i ldo the same (me too.. I just lie down in my swing and watch the moon. I always see Harshad in that! 😳)
#That owner of those coolest eyes would be engaged to someone.
Lovely...Lovely....Lovely....Reminds me of Harshad as well as Devarsh (That was the best compliment I could ever have! 😆)
#I controlled myself from seeing his eyes and I knew how much power it has to make me feel weak.
Ahhh...you will make me obssessed with Harshu's eyes it seems...by the way...you have used the power of his eyes tactfully...especially in this scene (Thanks, who could have admired Harshad without his eyes?)
#"One day you'll definitely feel like me, Taani. You don't know what you're missing. That time we both will be unable to do anything".
So glad Anurag said that..Brave one... (I'm glad you liked it😊)
#That look, a mixture of frown, pain, love, hate, etc. ate me up and I myself found hard to be normal
Yes so many looks all in one is what makes some actors and characters eternal.Harshad Chopra is one.His silent look speaks a zillion times louder than his dialogues (You're right. I saw his eyes to the fullest in Kis Desh's rain scene 😳. and I was like 'aweeee'.)
#Anurag is a perfect guy and Neha is certainly not made for him.
Agree with you on that.Anurag Ganguly may seem naive..but he is a really emotional man and boy i have ever come across (then how else could we degrade her? I really felt bad for blaming but couldn't help! 😆)
#You were so dumb that you didn't realize what Neha is to me", he teased.
I agree infact Taani n Anurag are the dumbest lovers I have ever known..they just don't interpret their love..and keep shoving their feelings as friendship or something else... (they are just young right, when they get mature, they'll defo get it! 😃)
Loved the romantic angle between Anu n Taani..literally drooling........ (were you? bad that I didn't see it)
Okay so you call this logicless???? If this is logicless then what on earth is your definition of logic?? (Hehehe, 😆 i thought this sounds dramatic and not practical, that's all. But happy now! 😊)
I find it perfectly logical...and lovable as well.... (If you did, I'm glad then 😊)
This was a real treat and as long as you keep writing such OS...I can console my heart for the leap not taking place so soon... (wow, you kept my OSs that high?It is my pleasure and I'm thanking you for it... I'm just a beginner and just because of you guys, I'm trying to improve more... 😊)
10 on 10 for a perfect teen romance....😉 (10? 😲 isn't that too much? 😆 But thank you so much for spending your time on this and I really did missed you these days!)

Originally posted by: azfee

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I averted my eyes from him and turned to the window again. "I'm not coming."

"Then I'm not going too", he lay on my bed and that made me mad even more.

"Just get out of my room, Anurag", I pointed to the door and said sternly.

He shook his head and turned to his side and closed his eyes, "not without you".

"I'm not coming, and I'm of no importance as it is your engagement and not our—", I cut myself off and tried to gulp down that damn lump on my throat. "Just go" that was all I managed to say after that.

He woke up and walked towards me. I stood there where I was standing but he continued to walk and that made me step back. I walked back not wanting to fall for him. But I know I'd fail.

I moved back to be bumped on the wall and that stopped me from moving further. He stood very close to me that the breath from his nose made contact with my eyelashes.

He cornered me by keeping his one hand on the wall and the other hand shoved in his pocket.

I controlled myself from seeing his eyes and I knew how much power it has to make me feel weak. But from my corner of the eyes, I noticed his every movement.

He took his hand from his pocket, trailed it from my forehead and brought his face closer to mine, which made me turn the other side ignoring his hand.

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He cupped my face and my heart slammed the rib, when I thought of what is going to happen next.

My physique started to rise and fall in fear and I kept my hands on his chest and tried to move him away gently. But he was too strong and I couldn't able to move him an inch.

He continued to lean down and I forcefully pushed him and released myself.

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"… my son will bring his girl to the stage now!" Uncle finished announcing.

Without having anymore air to breath I turned around to climb the stairs before he could see me.

I felt a tug in my arm and I turned to say Ananya that I'm leaving because I'm not feeling well.

But the sight left me totally dead.

Anurag was holding my arm and his hand sloped down to hold my hand. The smirking smile was stuck in his face and people around was cheering in loud voice.

Before I could realize what was going on, he took me to the stage and slipped the engagement band in my fingers and waited for me to slip the other in his finger.

I looked at him unbelievably and he blinked slowly that assured me everything was going fine. I slipped the band and my poor pale face failed to pull out a smile.

Originally posted by: indupriya2008

Superb, Nafee di!
It just amazing and contains most those parts which are loved by me.
(Thank you so much... 😊 you know how much I like comments, that includes fav. parts... 😆)

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You are truly a fantastic writer and don't worry it is so excellent one that it doesn't needs any logic. It is again a rocking, wonderful and awesome story by you. (Wow, that was super convincing. I thought it might turn out to be Ekta's heroes' dramas... But I'm glad it didn't! 😳 😊)

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God blesses on you with a shower of such a quality that it appears as we are living the whole scene. (Thanks a lot specially for this. I'm a big believer of God 😳 and I'm thanking you for your prayers... 😊)

Eagerly waiting for next creativity of yours... (Please stay tuned... I'll try to make one as soon as possible! Thanks for your time... 😊)

Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

amazing os!

loved Anuraag in here....waiting for more!

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Originally posted by: KaShBaarish..xx

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Brilliant post. Each word had such deep meaning to it. I cannot express how much I am in love with your writing. So much creativity. Loved the way you ended it. Mindblowing masterpiece. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: NIMMY

plz update soon