You are mine twinj ff part 63 pg 24updated - Page 18

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry guys.this week I couldn't give you an update. I tried writing but couldnt finish, Will post the next soon. Thank you for those who commented , liked and read my stories.without you guys Iam nothing. I hope you all are getting along with the hidden Stories. Thank you once again guys
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Posted: 8 years ago
So sorry guys. Its been a month that i didn't post an update. But I promise I wont leave the story in the middle. I will post the next soon. Due to heavy portions couldn't write one. So sorry again
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Posted: 8 years ago
No problem dear. Take your time.
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 60 ( final revelation Part 1)
Kunj attended the party and got many information And he had a keen eye on mr bakira
They made
Kunj searched every nook and corner of london to find information about rt.
Ku..guys kuch pata chala.
Raghav... Yes sir meine uss tellephone boot ko pechanliya jiss tellephone boot se co ko call aye
Ku..kuch aur pata chala
As...yes sir, joh bhi aadmi uss din co(chief officer) call kiya voh issi london mein hi hai. Meine uss area cctv footage cover kiya. Tk uss din jis din uss aadmy call aya. Apka sahk sehi nkla sir Uss din do insan te. uss booth se kade ahokar apne shakal chupakar bath ki hai undono ne. Mujhe lagra hai ki yeh vahi log hai. Jisse hum dondra hai.
Ku..aapko kyu aesa laga miss ashna
As..sir jis din co ko call aya uss din ka time aur uss CCTV footage london wale time match hai, aur voh unlogo ne apne shakal bhi chuparahe te , toh Iam sur they should be
Ku..well done miss ashna.
Ashna felt goose bumps
Jhanvi..aur sir ek aur bath. Uss sab janeke bath hume iss unlogo ka pata chalne koshish ki hai, voh kya karrte kahan rrhta, uss sab pata karne ke bath hume kuch address mila hai. She handovered some address.
Ku..well done, from here I will take the lead, And iske bath mujhe aapki madat nehi chaiye.
Raghavi..what are you saying. We cant move back, we need to help you.
As..yes sir aap aese kese iske bath nikal sakte hai. Hum sab ka mehnat hai ispar.
Ku...guys listen listen, I know you all must be angry. Aap log yehi mere baremein sochre honge ki mein saari kabr lene ke bath credit apne aap lene chata hoon, lekin sach toh yeh hai mein aap sap ki jaan se kehlna nehi chata,
As..per sir
Ku..meine apni bath pura nehi ki hai. Agar mere shak sehi hai, toh mujhe lagra hai ki voh log mujhse milna chata hai, aur voh bhi akele.
Ragh..aap Sure ho iss bath se.
Ku.. Ji, pehli bath unlogo ko pata hai koi na koi london ayega usse doondne, Issiliye usne call ki hai.
Jhanvi..aap kese yekin ke sath bolrehai.
KU..unlogone ne itne sal bath call kiya hai toh iska matlab yehi hua uss admi ko pata chalgaya hai hum uss pen ki duri password ka insan ko pakadliya.
Voh log jaan booch ke call kiya taki hum usse donnde. Issliye usne abhi cctv footage ko delete nehi ki. Aaj kal cctv footage delete karna kitna aasan kaam hogaya , aur voh humse milna chata hai,taki voh humare sath koi deal aur koi bath jeet karke mere muh kulvane keliye
Jhan..wow sir you are brillaiant.
Ku..tq for the compliment.issiliye mein kehrahoon aap logone mereliye bohth amdat ki,issiliye mein aap sb ke jaan ke sath kelne nehi chata hoon.
As..lekin..
Ku..lekin vekin kuch nehi mujhe iss mission ko complete Karna hai, toh plz aap log mere sath co-operate kijiye.
Everyone nodded except ashna because she was worried. Twinkle side.
Twinkle really studied hard and both leela and twinkle wet to amritsar along with raman pinni and bubbly who stayed in delhi.
Raman needed help in his business, inorder to help him leela joined hands with raman and extended their business in amritsar. Leela chosed this place as she got to know that kunj family are staying here.( in order not to reveal their identity leela said evryone that we came from delhi.and convinced twinkle to say so.initially twinkle didnt understand why leela is saying,but she understood there is big reason behind this step and hence kept quite for the sake of her mother.)
Twinkle who met his childhood friend rohan .rohan got to know about twinkle past.and he got really angry on kunj.
There rohan and chinki love story started.
Twinkle used to write diary over her past happenings(remember chinki once read it) And twinkle extended her fashion class in amritsar.

Sorry really sorry guys, hidden secrets will be soon revealed.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi dear
Really loved the update.
Nice to know that everything will be now revealed slowly.
Happy that you finally updated.
Do continue.
Keep writing and keeping our twinj alive.
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 61
final revelation part 2
Kunj went to the address and find the place To be very isolated.
Suddenly a call came to him
Kunj waited for sometime before attending it. Because it was from an unknown number.
Ku...Hello,
No reply...
Ku...hello kon
Speaker... Mujhe pata ta ki tum zaroor aaogi mujhse milne lekin itni jaldi yeh nehi socha ta meine
Ku.. Kon hai aap.
The speaker... Mein kon hoon yeh batane se pehle mein yeh pochti hoon, tum kon ho bhai. Tum iss case ko dur se bhi nehi jante toh phir Tum iss case ko solve karne keliye itna tadpana yeh tk nehi hai
Ku.. Mein kya hoon yeh poochne se pehle yeh batao tum ne mujhe bulaya kyu
The speaker... Yeh batane keliye agar tumko zinda rehna hai toh Yahn se chale ja..
Ku..mujhe zinda rehna hai toh mein yahan nehi ata. Mujhe apni jaan ki parvah nehi hai.
Spe..toh phir tk toh apna jaan denekeliye tayar hoja
Kunj entered into a building and heared some noises coming from it. He went inside and slid the door to open, he was invited with a heavy smokes and fumes.. He was literally shocked to see someone tied in a rope.. He went near to the person and find some old man in his late fourtees was tied up in a chair, he lifted his face and as gussed he find rt there.
Kunj said the name Rt uncle he gently moved him and find his pulse rate was still on and sighed in relief. Rt lightly lifted his face to see the person when someone hit kunj behind his head and he turned to see the person and fall unconsious
(Not now, I will reveal the person later.It can be a men or a women guess it.).
3 years later.
Kunj slightly lifted his eyes and to see ashna, raghav and jhanvi there.
Ku..Mein kahan hoon..
As..Sir aap yehi hai london mein ashna touched his shoulder
Ragh..Sir aap tk haina sir. pata nehi hum vahan tk se nehi poncha toh kya hojata aap ke sath
Ku.. Yah Iam fine.
Ash..doctor yeh tk hojayge na?
The doctor is non other than Jiya
Jiya..Hi kunj Iam doctor Jiya biswas
Kunj..you can call me jiya
Ku..vese aap sab log kon ho..
As..doctor sir humko nehi pechana
Jiy...as gussed.kunj aap ko taklif utane ke koi zaroot nehi hai
Ku..lekin mujhe hua kya hai.
Ji..kunj you are suffering from temporary amnesia
Ku..What..
Ji..aap jiss chees ko itne sal karne keliye tadaprahe te uss chese ko apne bhoolgaye.
Ku..lekin mein kya karna chata ta.
There was a silence in the room.
Ku..aaj kon se din hai.
Ji.. Aaj 2017 hai
Ku..mein apni pichle sath sal ko bulgaya. Per kese
Ji..shayid aap pichle7 salso se ek cheese karna chate ho lekin voh cheese apke pass ane se hi door hogai.
Ku..kya?
Ji..Haan kunj.
Ashna explained him about everything about her known details.
Ku..kya haan
As..haan apko yahan reHte hua 3 een sal hogay
Ku..aur mere parivar unki baremein kya
As..ji apki parivar ko aapki accident mein baremein pata hai lekin aapki kaam ke baremein nehi pata lekin aapki bhai yuvrai ko sab pata hai.
Ku...mein itna bada hogay hoon.
Jii..kunj aap panick mat hoye. Yeh normal hai sab keliye.aap pichle teen sal se coma mein te aut ab apko temporary amnesia hai.yeh sab sunke aapko panik nehi himat se kaam lene hai.
Ku..mein coma mein ta..aur voh bhi teen sal tak.
As..haan sir.
His full family came and kissed.
Usha's eyes filled with tears.kese hai mere beta
Ku..mein tk hoon maa. Yuvi hugged him tight
Then his eyes wnt to his whole family and spotted some new characters
Understanding yuvi Introduced niki as anand 's wife and merry as cherry's wife
Yu..kunj yeh niki bhabhi hai aur yeh unka beta aur beti ishan( 3yrs)aur ishana(2yrs) inthe arms of her father anand And Mother niki
Soon niki and merry got together with kunj and ishana the lovely girl laided in the arms of kunj with a smiling face.
Kunj wiped his tears When all hsi family members retired
Yu..bhai sab tk hojayga.
Kunj just nodded.
Yu..bhai family ko nehi pata ki tum ek army officer ho. Aur tumko temporary amnesia hai toh unko mat batana tk.
Ku..lekin kyu
Yuvi explained his part of story and kunj 's head was spinning and taking a toll
When finally yuvi concluded with twinkle
Ku..twinkle yeh kon hai...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg.
Kunj suffered from temporary amnesia and he forgot twinkle.
Can't wait for the next update!
Please update next part asap.
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey its nice
ptaa nahi ab kya yoga .. U r seriously keeping me glued to this

Thnkiu for PM
lots of love
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 62
Yu..kunj tu kya kehra hai tu such mein twinkle ko nehi jaanta
Ku... Nehi bhai kon hai voh
Yu.. Twinkle... Before he could say
Ji... Dekiye inhe rest karne ke zaroorat stress karne ki nehi aur kunj mein apka surf doctor nehi hoon apka dost bhi hoon . Issiliye mein apki sath hi rahongi apki ko jobhi problems hai apko mujhse share karna padega.
Kunj just nodded.
6 months passed Jiya and kunj became very good friends. (final year in London)
Jiya is completely treating kunj
Ashna ... Jiya kuch Badlav hai kya?
Ji.. Nehi yaar.
Raghav...hum abb kya karsakte
Jhanvi... Haan bolona Hume kissi bhi haal mein sir ki yadash vapus ana hai.
Ji.. Iski eki upai hai
Ash.. Kya
Ji... Isko India jaana hai vapus Isne jaane anjane se twinkle ka naam baar baar apne Neendh mein kehra hai lekin utne ke bath isse kuch Yaad nehi hai.
Yuvi also listened to this.
Ji.. Yuvraj sarna aapko toh Patahi hona ki twinkle kon hai
Yu..ji twinkle uski patni hai
Everyone together... Kya Ashna is heart broken by hearing this she composed herself before anyone could notice.
Yu.. Ji haan
Jiya.. Abhi voh kahan hai
Yu.. Mujhe nehi Pata. Usko meine aakri baar Mumbai mein dekha
Ji.. Ohh no.
Yu.. Kya hua hai doctor.
Ji.. Agar twinkle nehi mili Isko yadash aana muskil hai. Hume twinkle ko dondna hai.
Yu.. Ji to. Aap bus kunj ko tk kejiye mein twinkle kahan bhi hai use dondtha hon.
Ashna went from there.and cried a lot.
Jh.. Ashu
Ashna composed herself
Jh.. Tujhe kya lagha Mujhe kuch nehi pata
As.. Tu kya kehri hai
Jh.. Mein sab janti hoon ki tu kunj sir ko kitna chati hai.
Listening this Ashna burst out crying and hugged her
Jhnvi... Bus.. Bus.. Ab rona bandh Karo yaar
As.. Mein kitni galat thi na. Aur pagal bhi hoon. Mein kese itna bada baap karskti
Jh.. Tu pagal hai mein tujhe nehi pta yaar. Agar pata hota toh tum yeh save nehi karti na.
As.. Per phir bhi
Jh.. Chup ek dumb
As.. Kunj sir kabhi meri thi hi nehi. Mujhe unke kushi keliye twinkle ko dondna hoga
Jh.. Tu Kunj sir Ko iss teen sal Kese Kese unka dyan raka yeh mehi janta hoon. Tabhi Mujhe samaj agyata . Tu unne kitna pyar karti hai.
As.. Zaroori toh nehi har pyar success rahe agar aesa hogya toh life itna Aasan hojaygana. Issiliye yeh mere padav hai. Agar Kunj sir ki kushi twinkle hai toh unne twinkle hi milna chaiye. Aur uskleiye twinkle ko pehle dondna hoga.
Jh.. Tujhe pata hai tu kitni badi bath batayi ki. Sacha pyar sirf kehne ya phir hasil karne se nehi balki apne pyar ki kushikeliye use sacrifice karnese hota.
(Guys it's important to show that not every love which is true is successful but life takes us tests, if we pass it, we will definitely get our love mate which is more best and bliss than first.)
Sry if I hurt someone but it's just my assumption.

Edited by Sosan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I completely agree with ur Views .. loved Ashna's character .. the way she accepted that Kunj belongs to Twinkle and then even thought of making an effort to reunite them .. Also I love Yuvi's character here ... Proceed soon

lots of love

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