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SweetSau thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely!
Love the way the story is getting unfolded!
Ohhh soo arnav is twinkle's brother. Nice.
Continue soon
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 8 years ago
ohh my God... this is just amazing .. read all parts in one go!!
plz continue soon.
😊 😊
Seesha thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing!!!!
Just loved it...
It was fantabulous...
Thank god leela know everything...hmm arnav is twinkle's bro.
Seens interesting..
Now its gonna b more fun reading the story...
Post soon..

And m sorry for late comment...actually i got bzy with eid and all

Love uh
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 58
The Talk after yuvraj and kunj about marriage of twinj in part 55
Ku..Aunty apse milna hai.
Lee..kunj iss waqt... Raat ki baara bajrehai.
Ku.. Aunty twinkle ki baremein apse bath karni hai.
Lee.tk putar mein atihoon.kahan milna hai.
Ku..aunty mein apki ghar ki bhagal mein kada hoon.
Lee..tu vahi rukh mein ati hoon.
Ku.. Ji.
Leela came outside.
Leela..batao puttar kya bath hai.
Ku..a..un.ty mein aapse kese batao yeh kudh samaj nehi arahai.
Lee..kya hua beta sab ache haina.koi ghabrane wale bath nehi haina. Twinkle ko..
Ku..aunty aesa kuch bhi nehi hai. Twinkle Ko mein kuch bhi hone nehi doonga. Mujpe yakin kijiye.mein yeh sab twinkle ki surakhsha keliye karaha hoon.
Lee..toh kya karna chaiye beta.
Ku..aunty perso mein london jaarahoon.
Lee..isswaqt tum yahan twinkle ko chodke london kese? . Tumhe pata haina twinkle ki jaan ka sawal hai.
Ku.. Haan aunty pata hai.lekin london mein mere sabse important kaam ageya hai aunty.voh mein aap se abhi bata nehi sakta. Lekin mein London jaane se pehle twinkle ko surakhsha karkehi jaonga..
Lee..kese
Ku..matlab. He told everything about his plan of marrying twinkle to save her from her orginal name
Lee...toh agar tere aur twinkle ka shadi hojaygi toh twinkle Surekha rahegi.
Ku..ek aur bath hai aunty. Aapko twinkle ko chodke iss shehar se door jaana hoga joh mujhe bhi na pata chale. Aunty mujhe pata hai ki aap apki beti keliye shadi ka sapne lagahai. Lekin mein aapse vadha karte hoon jesehi yeh kaam katam hojay mein twinkle ko asadh kardoonga.apko koi pareshan nehi karoonga.
Lee..pata hai kunj shayid Tujhe pata nehi hai Ki mein kya hoon.
Tujhe kya lagha mein apni kudi ki shadi aesi kisi ladke ke hath mein Sopdoongi.
Ku..aunty
Lee..tu kal se mere damad bannewala hai. Toh maa bulaiga tu mujhse.Sasuma toh bilkul nehi.
Ku..tk. maa.
Lee...haan. Aur ek aur bath ,Mujhe yeh bhi dikhai deraha ki tu aur twinkle ek dusre se kitna pyar karte hain. Kya tujhe lagra hai mein tum dono ki beech mein aaongi.
Ku..aesi bath nehi hai maa.per
Lee..pata hai kunj ,tujhse acha jeevansathi meri twinkle aur tujhse best damad mujhko milinehi sakta,yeh mein dhawe ke sath keh saktihoon. Toh issiliye tujhe mereliye Aur twinkle keliye vapus anahi hoga.
Ku..lekin ek shart par
Lee..kya hai mere damaji.
Ku..aap mujhe beta kahenge nahi damad.
Lee..tk.betaji.Kal jab tum twinkle ko tere shadi keliye propose karega na toh Usse mat batana ki mujhe sab pata hai.
Ku..per kyu maa.
Lee..kyunki jab twinkle ko yeh bath pata chalegi . Toh voh chup nehi betegi. Usko sari bath bataneki naubat ajaygi..mein abhi twinkle kO sab kuch batakar usse pareshan nehi karna chata . usse abhi apne career mein focus hona hai.
Ku..tk maa.aap fikar mat kejiye mein twinkle ko kuch bhi nehi bataonga.
Lee..tere induzar sirf twinkle ki nehi balki pure desh ki hai.Jao aur jeetkar aao. Kunj gets his blessings and left.
I hope you guys are catching with the revealation.

Edited by Sosan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
excited to read nxt part
leela is so understanding
Do continue soon .. thnku for the PM
Seesha thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy sosan!
This was fantastic..
I lovedd it totally..

I like the bond betwewn kunj and leela...
Story is turning beautiful now ahead..

Post soon..
Love ya😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 59
Ku pov
In flight.
Twinkle ne apne shadi mein apni maa ko bohth miss kithi.lekin voh sirf mereliye kuch nehi keh payi.
Per usko yeh nehi pata ki leela ma humere shadi mein mohjut hai. Unnone chupkese humari shadi dekhi. Mujhe voh bilkul pasand infact meine leela maa ko bulaya ta, lekin unnone manna ki.unnone mujhse promise bhi leli ki vmein iss baremin twinkle kuch na kaho. Mujhe uss vaqt kya tk laga meine vahi kiya.
End of pov
Flight landed in london.Thre was a Lady with a board kunj sarna. Kunj went up to her.
Ash... Hello kunj Iam ashna.
Ku...hello.
As...iss mission Ko pura karne mein humera team apke pure sath denge.
Ku..thanku.
They went to an office.
There ashna introduced lara ,raghav and jhanvi.
Ash... Toh Kunj kya plan hai aapka.
Ku..look My plan is certainly odd.Iam gonna behave as an ordinary man. Aur Mein yahan sirf apne kaam karne aya hoon.
Ashna.. Per sir aap yeh sab kese karenge
Ku..mein yahn apne pure parivar ke sath rahunga. Mere papa ka london mein ek badi deal sign hone wali hai. Issliye mere parivar london ajayge. Unki deal sign katam karne se pehle hume kam ko katam karne padega.
Lara...meine uss project ke baremein sunna hai.voh mr bakira nehi organise kI hai. Aur mr bakira ek bohth bda business man hai.
Ragh..voh sirf business man nehi voh ek underworld mafia hai.
Uske pass bohth kuch terrorists connection hai.
Ku..hum aaj se apna kaam shuru karna chaiye.Mujhe pehle london ki saari businessmen ki kabhar lana hai.hume kaam aaji shuru karna chaiye.
Jhanvi... Per sir. AajI kese.
Ku..haan mujhe yeh kaam jal se jal pura karna hai. Ek aur bath hum sab public space jab rahege toh hum sab anjaan aadmi ki tara rahenge.
Rag..lekin kunj ek problem. Agar hume uss meeting ko atted karna hai humare pure bio data dene padege.. Agar unko
tere bio data pata chalgya toh.
Ku..nehi uski naubat nehi ayegi.Kyunki mere Profession abhibhi ek photographer hi hai.
Ku..koi sawal
Jhanv...sir mere ek sawal hai sir. Kyu hum businessman ko dondra hain. I mean koi aur bhi yeh kam karskta haina.
Ku..haan. Humere sir ko ek hafte pehle ek call ayata iss london std both sei. Hume zyada uske baremein nehi pata chala lekin usne bath karte vaqt kisi aur se bath karahata, iska matlab koi aur ta uske pass joh usse sikha rahta kya bath karna hai. Vahi insan ne ek ajeeb word use kiya
Raghav...kya word ta.
Ku...Art hai. Meine yeh word tab sunna ta jab meine uss tellephone recording ko dusri bar sunne ke koshish ki. Meine phir ek baar try ki aur uss dusre admy ne yehi word bataya. Mujhe nehi pata voh kya hai.shayid unlogoka passcode ,ya phir unlogoka company ka naam. Yah unka naam hosakti hai... Ismese hum pehle hum pehle company ka naam ata pata karenge.
Raghav...tk. Hum abhse kaam karna hai. Lekin ek sawal hai apse puchna hai... Aap iss mission ko antim tak lekar janne keleiye koi vaja.
Ku...matlab.
Rag...mere matlab yeh ki meine sunna hai, iss mission ko aap pichle 4 sal se kam karte ayehain. Agar koi bhi insan apke jaga ho toh voh iss mission ko tabke drop karchuka hota, lekin aap iss mission ko complete karnekliye itna thule hua kyu hai.
Ku..yeh mere pehla mission. Aur joh koi bhi apna pehle kam tang se karta hai vahi uska bakki sarra kaam karnekeliye like hoga. Toh mein ismese peeche kese hosakti hai.
Rag...sirf yehi vaja hai.yah phir aur koi vaja
Ku..aur koi vaj hai.per mein aap sab se jab bataonga tab time ayega.
Ashna getting impressed by his words.so she she started liking kunj .
Ashna pov
Yeh kya kehre hai.koi aur hai kya kunj sir ke man mein. Nehi aesa nehi hosakta. Pata nehi mujhe kunj se pyar hogya aur voh bhi pehle bhi baar milse sehi.. Ashna tu zyada soch rahi hai. Abhi apna kaam mein focus karo.
Pov ends.
Jhan.. Sir aap thodi der aram kijiye. Yeh lijiye Aapka ghar ki chabi. Ashna
Ashna was still in her thoughts.
Jhan..ASHNA
AS..haan kya hai.
Jhan...kahan koi hua ho yaar.
As...kahi bhi nehi.
Jha..toh chalo.
As..ha...an...haaan chalo.

Kunj came to his house in london.
Ku pov..
Mein london ponch chuka hun twinkle. Bus mein tujhe hi humesha yaad karaha hoon.I hope tum tk hoo.
He suddenly went to his time spend with twinkle.
Fb
Ku..twinkle sunn na. Tum mujhse naraz hai..
Tw...haan ab tum mujhse manao.
Ku..kamal hai zindagi mein pehli baar aese sunrahahu. Wah Bhai wah kudh rut thi hai aur kudhi manane ko kehti hai.
Tw..haan aesi hu mein. Agar manana nehi aata Toh jaa yahan se.
Ku..acha meri maa. Batao mein tumhe kese manao.
Tw..voh toh tumhe kudh soch na hoga. Kya zaroot thi tum us chipkali keerti ke sath atakjaana ki . Sharam nehi ayi tumhe.
KuNj ..sharam? flirting karne mein sharam kyu hai meri jaan.
Aur jab tum jealous hoti ho na toh bade cute lagti ho.
She turned her towards him, she landed on hIs chest. He made his way to her waist and pulled her closer slightly lifted her and she stepped on his feet.
Tw..yeh kya...kare...ho Kunj.
Ku..tumne joh kaha tujhe manna hai.toh mein vahi joh karaha ho.
Tw..hum beech raste mein hain.koi aajayga.
Ku..shh.. Mujhe kise se bhi dar nehi.Ek sawal puchu?
Tw.. Pucho na
Ku..agar mein tumhe chont poncha, agar tumhe chod ke chala gaya, agar humere beech ladai hogai kya tum mujhe bool jaogi.
Tw..aachanak yeh sawl kyu puchre ho.
Ku..batao na.
Tw..pehli bath yeh ki tum mujhe kabhi bhi chont nehi poncha sakte. Aur dusri baar yeh hai, agar humere beech ladai hogai toh galti chaye koi bbhi ka ho mein tumhe aesahi pyar karoongi jitna mein karti ayi hoon. Aur thesri bath yeh ki kabardaar tumne mujhe chodne ki bath ki toh,
Kunj smiling listening to everything.
Ku..toh..
Tw..toh mein...toh mein Marjauga before she could complete he pecked her lips. and nodded in no.Twinkle pulled him And hugged him tight.
Tw..doobara mujhe chodne ki bath mat karo.
Fb ends.
Kunj pov
Mujhe pata hai twinkle aaj bhi tum vahi umedh ke sath rehre ho ki mein vapus aaonga. Mein tumareliye zaroor vapus aaonga twinkle.





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Posted: 8 years ago
loving the way this story is progressing .. Eager to read the next part .. Post the soonest
Seesha thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Hmm ashna has feelings for kunj.
Wud b amazing reading the next parts.

Post soon..
And thanks for the pm..

Love ya
SweetSau thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dear
Lovely update
Really loved it a lot!
Leela knew everything all along that's nice to know.
Please update soon
Don't make us wait longer
Lots of love
Sayli

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