Twinj Dark SS - Immortal Love updated Chapter 5 - Pg 13 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Here
Yay! I'm clean bowled over the dedication so you're off the hook dearie

RES

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K, this was so so so amazing! And this so makes the wait worthwhile 😆
Manohar Sarna should rot in the depths of hell, he really should, I mean killing his own damn son and that too when his son is Kunj and is so freakin' hawt?! That to me, is what killing curse is in Harry Potter's world. I'm serious 😡
Right now, he's worse than the one-who-shall-not-be-named, at par if not worse. Also, he'd look the part in a long black robe with no hair and no nose and a snake over his shoulders 😆
But seriously bruh, can I use the killing curse on him? Or we can leave him alone with that nun demon from The Conjuring 2, but I wonder if the demonic nun would survive this blow.
Anyhow, I hate that sorry excuse of a man for doing what he has done. Also I just watched Harry Potter and the half blood Prince again, and I am shattered by Dumbledore's death, it's like rewatching Titanic, you know all of them are gonna die yet you cry buckets and rivers when Jack dies. And I am generalising it because I can't be the only one who does this, I refuse to be the only one, to be precise 😆
Anyhow, coming to this chapter, I am so so so happy that you updated, you'd know this because I was constantly on your case for an update 😃
Persistence is my only move 🤣. I'm like a female version of Raj from big bang theory 😆
I loved how you've woven the story together and I want some serious Ass kicking of Alisha and Manohar done. How about an acid bath? I sound borderline psychotic and like a serial killer in the making, you know a work-in-progress.
Remember that serial killer I looked up online on Mevs' suggestion?( The things she makes me sign up for 😆). He has some very nice innovative ways of killing people 😆
On a side note, Thanks Mevs for that, it gave me quite a many sleepless nights

Also I realised I just rambled on and on about Monu and forgot to praise you over how nicely you have written about Kunj's breakdown and Twinkle calming his nerves. If that's not true love, I don't know what is.
Little signs of jealous Kunj and flirty Kunj were a treat! Especially him asking if his flirting was working, that was so cute! Bae knows how to tug at my heartstrings
Edited by MaliciousAngel - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Ress!

I'm first!
Yippie!


Hi Kiara
How are you? I missed you sooo much! Missing our old days on the forum! Hope you come back soon!

Anyways back to the main topic the update! It was mind-blowing! Heart touching! Heart-wrenching!

God I'm clean bowled!

The you portrayed Twinkle's emotions and feelings when she got to know about Manohar soo beautifully written! The dialogues given to her by you were bang on and perfectly written!

Kunj getting worried for her when she didn't return was lovely! Miss tei and twinj!

Kunj ka breakdown when he got to know about his neech and ghatiya father was perfect! The way Twinkle soothed him touched my heart! #TrueLove!!

Kunj revealing Manohar's dirty deals! Bete Kunj pehele hi bolna tha naa bacha!

Kunj tadaping for a kiss! Lovely! Last few eps ki yaad aa gayi!(before sid left!)

Chalo ab woh stupid Vishal bhi aa gaya Jaal mai hope he doesn't back out and back stab my babies! Next I think will be that yucky alisha ki bachhi!

Kiara can I ask something either give Kunj another chance ya phir Twinkle ko bhi maar ke uske paas bhej do so that true love will be able to stay together! Kyunki sabke naseeb mai true love nahi hota!

Loved the chapter!
Hope you update soon.
Please do come to the forum regularly as I miss all of you very very much! Aisa lagta raha hai jaise meri family mujh se door chali gayi hai!

Lots and lots of love
Sayli
Edited by SweetSau - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
At last A made it.
I mean you give the update.
Congo A.
OK,
This part is started at right there where you left.
So Kunj's dad kill his son for his mischief in professional life.😡
Is he actually deserve to call Dad?
I don't think so;Twinkle is absolutely right.
And yes after this listening Kunj turn pale;it's obvious.😕
And this ghost is special,feels like human...
Who can feel pain & similarly can became nervous & jealous too.
Love him.😳
So as per Twinj 1 is down..
2 is still;And these two are most dangerous.
Little worried about Twinj;who know what is coming up?
I will wait for next part K.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
O la la la superb update is here for us i m been waiting for so long for u n ur update how r u dear missed u lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow k this update simply awesome. I never knew kunj can be so sweet.
I love hot nd emotional kunj nd I want twinj to unite in the end. K update next part fast
I hate manohar he is not a father😡 nd alisha the b**** she used kunj nd killed him.
I m more in love with twinj now.
It reminded me the twinj of TEI serial nd imagined Sidmin performing it.
Thank u k for updating it K😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally Agent K after so long!
I was waitimg for your update from so long!
This was amazing! and that kiss part though! loved it overall
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi kaira loved the epi it was fab. Iam a new member but read all you writings when iam a silent reader. Continue the story soon cant wait to read it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Firstly,Sorry for not commenting on this Story ever...kunj is dead & twinkle is alive...& my Senti side...
Even though I read all the updates I couldn't get myself to comment...

The name "Immortal love" every chapter makes you realize that Love is Immortal...

The way you wrote their feelings & care...

Let's not forget the Kiss between a human & Hot Ghost...😳😆

The hugging style & twinkle's try to somehow soothe him was wow...👏

Manohar killed his own son for business issues...is he a father or something else..

And Vishal...bechara...Mr.Lovestruck +Dumbstruck. ...

I absolutely enjoyed kunj saying-You look better when I have my lips on yours...& about his trust on twinkle..

And possessive kunj is always good to read...

Finally,Commented...Bear this lenghty comment k...

Love you & Miss you a lot...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited by shreya098 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
K ...finally u updated.
.I am soo happy... Yaaay [:D/] 🥳

Ur initial lines about father and child... were just wow ❤️ ❤️
And manohar sarna... Seriously how could one stoop soo low
Just because kunj got to know about all his black deeds ...he killed his own son...
DISGUSTING... is the word for him...

.. k... this black money idea was on ur mind from before or this is the effect of the decision of our PM...hehehe 😃 (just joking)

For me the highlight of the epi was him asking "is it working"...
ya I know there was this superb emotional scene and their great plan too...
u may call me naughty head...but I loooved the flirtatious scene more...
such a cute flirt he is... How can someone be soo hot ,cute,sweet ...and what not..
I just looove kunj...whether it be human or a ghost.. 😉 ..

Loooved the epi... ❤️ ❤️

🤗 🤗 for u ...

(Now I'll be greedy) ...continue soon

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