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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: tikit
Sanju nice os.
Twinkle's views nd breakdown awesome.
Were they twinj im the end who died in the sea?

ty eshu..😳

yes..they were twinj😔

sad ending hai...

but i prefer this now...idk y..

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel
Sanju i'm a puddle of emotions now
This was everything i ever wanted Twinkle to do. You wrote it beautifully. I can't say more without crying a river
This was just amazing
Let me go grab some tissues now

sry to make u cry..

ty athira..😳

yes...i just want it to end this way now...

not death may b...but parting away..😔

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: tricksters
😭😭 U made me cry.
But I loved it..it was just amazing...U wrote it very beautifully..
Bebe, thanks for that thappad 😆
This is not our kunj...its Rocky..our Kunj will never hurt twinkle.

ty Aiesha...😳

sry for making u cry dear..

thanks for the comment

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Mjwinslet
did twinj die in the end???😭
lovely os 👏

ty so much for this comment..

yup..they were twinj..

😳😳

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct
Meri Pyaari Bhukkar Buddy;
What's happened to you???😕
It seems anyone messed up with your food.😆
But seriously Sanju,I am crying like never before.😭
Sanju;I don't know what will be the actual end but if this will happen then I definitively will be in mess through passing in emotional turmoil.
What will be the Trajic End of our one time darling show.
By the way The writing is amazing though heart wrenching.👏

😆even i don't knw aditi...

kabhi kabhi aise dhore padte hai..

get used to it..😳😆

ty aditi.😃..i'm sry to make u cry ..😳

i don't want death in real...but i want them to part away...don't ask me y

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Sanju...😳😳
You didn't tell me you write stories. And so good ones at that!
This was so tear jerking. Goa..the place where it ended and ended again.
Liked how you showed Twinkle to be unforgiving and how she considered the new Kunj as Rocky. He is indeed Rocky.

Great Job buddy!👏

ty meh..😳

yup i do write few(and i don't know they are good or bad)😳...and all are like this only...gloomy gloomy..

i actually have 3 stories ...which i didn't complete...i started it long back...and now i don't know how to end them..😳

yup...end to end..

ty again meh..

now u tell me...it's mehwish or mehvish?...i'm asking u this for the 6th time..😆😳

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Shrutikryan, Mjwinslet, Komal1298, tricksters, SweetSau, anshvi, adi_FMT_ct, Shaveerkti,

tikit, Duumps,

ty for the likes girls...i didn't really expect ...ty😃

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Aditi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

😆even i don't knw aditi...
kabhi kabhi aise dhore padte hai..
get used to it..😳😆
ty aditi.😃..i'm sry to make u cry ..😳
i don't want death in real...but i want them to part away...don't ask me y

Maybe I know the why

& Ok.from now i will take care about the dohra.😊

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996203

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Maybe I know the why
& Ok.from now i will take care about the dohra.😊

😆😳ok

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Blissfullife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

this is the first story i've read on this track...
and I just loved it...
u totally nailed it.. 👏 👏
twinkle's outburst...kunj's pleading... everything was just perfect
the way u penned down her emotions ...hatsoff
loved it ❤️

and thanks for the PM

Edited by shreya098 - 9 years ago

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