Twinj SS: I know you love me,pt 2 pg 2 ,teaser on page 4

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Hlooo Guys
This is the first time m writing anything so please forgive me if you find it boring and do tell me about it in your comments ,its just a idea that came in my mind so thought of giving it a try 😃
Please tell me where m lacking in this I'll try to improve if you will tell me about it
So let the story begin
Twinj SS: I know you love me

Kunj was waiting for Twinkle to come in a garden which was fully decorated and only he was there no one else as he reserved that place for his lady love and then Twinkle came as soon as he looked at her his heart started to beat very fast he was a little nervous and when she stood in front of him he cudnt utter a single word after few minutes of silence Twinkle spoke" kya huya Kunj tumne mujhe achaanak yaha pr Ku bulaya?? Kuch important tha ???" and then he came back to his senses and told her "haa Twinkle bhot important baat h"
Twinkle:haa toh bolo Kunj kya baat h or tum itne dare huye Ku ho sab thik toh h naa??
And then Kunj just bent on his knees and took his hand in front in which he was holding a red rose
Kunj: Twinkle bhot Dino se m tujhe batana chahta tha but samjh hi ni aa raha tha kaise kahu aaj bs bhot himmat krke tujhe apni dil ki baat bata raha hu (taking a deep breathe to calm himself)Twinkle you know what I don't even know when and how it happened but I m a truly and madly in love with you from past 2years I was thinking of it like a friend but on that day I realized that I am in love I am deeply in love with my best friend and I mean it Twinkle I know you must be having so many feelings in your heart this time but keep your hand on your heart and try to find what is it saying and then keep this rose if it says yesss" and with that Twinkle tears started to form in her eyes and placed her one hand on her heart
She then extends her hand to take that rose with utmost care and with tears in her eyes she spoke "I love..." And then something came in her mind and with that tears of joy converted in sadness ...
Kunj was so happy when she took that rose saying I love ...to him. But then seeing sudden change of expression on her face he tensed and was confused
Twinkle again started " I l...l...o...v e ...my parents a lot a lot ..." with saying it she just ran from that place with tears continuously flowing from the corner of her eyes
Kunj's heart broke seeing her going away from her. Tears started to come from his eyes he just sat there in thinking about what happened just a few moments ago
Kunj's pov-"what happened to her she is not like that she is the strongest girl I have ever met . I remember when she said to me that she never back of in any situation and I know she really mean it I know ki woh kabhi kisi situation se dur nahi bhaagti phir aaj kya huya woh aaj bina koi sahi jawab diye chali gayi and what she meant by she loves her parents I know she loves them more than anyone in this world and even they are her everything but why she said it to me at that time ...there is something that made her cry I know she loves me then why she went away like this denying my proposal , I m that much sure that she is not in any relation with somebody else ...and she loves me that much I love her I saw it in her eyes yesterday ...I remember everything that happened in the party"
Flashback starts
Kunj was standing in front of the mirror checking himself if he is looking perfect for the party or not. And after being satisfied he thought to call Twinkle his best friend from past two years.
Kunj's pov"kaise sab kuch badal gaya h na, kuch time phle jab sab hm dono k baare me rumors failate the ki hm sirf dost nahi h toh hme bhot gussa aata tha or phir hmne aise logo ko ignore krna shuru kr diya or dekhte hi dekhte mujhe khud bhi yahi feel hone lg gaya ki sab thik kh rahe h yeah sirf dosti nahi h ...mujhe ache se yaad h jab 2mahine phle Twinkle ne mujhe bataya tha ki woh uske parents k sath Australia shift hone jaa rahi h toh kya haal huya tha mera ,,,us din mujhe realize huya ki m Twinkle se pyaar krta hu hr jagah mujhe wahi dikhayi de rahi thi or chah kr bhi m apne aansu nahi rok paa raha tha pr thank goodness woh nahi gayi uski studies k karan uska jana cancel ho gaya ache se yaad h kitni khushi huyi thi mujhe kaise m sabke saamne pagalo ki tarah uchalne lg gaya same like my siyappa queen does when she is happy...Chlo ab yeah sab ek taraf or apne mission p focus kr Kunj tujhe jaana h naa ki woh bhi tujhse pyaar krti
h yaa nahi "
Then Kunj called Twinkle to check if she is ready to come in the party after being assured about it he went to her home and picked her up and drove to the party venue


-Sristi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems interesting.. Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sristi...superb start...😃
so y is she saying so?
interesting..
continue soonish😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piu22

Seems interesting.. Waiting for the next part

m glad to know that you are having interest in it
next part may take some time to come as I am so lazy to write anything
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">sristi...superb start...😃</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">so y is she saying so?</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">interesting..</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">continue soonish😳</font>

thanx Sanju
you will get to know about it in the next part
and I will try to post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Srish,I'm so so happy that you took interest in writing! 🤗
So Twinj as bestfriends haan
I loved Kunj's proposal 😳
And I'm very curious to know why Twinkle indirectly said no..
I'm sure there must be some suspense
Can't wait,pls continue soon
And ha I'm not going to let you be lazy,I'll keep pestering you till you don't update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

Srish,I'm so so happy that you took interest in writing! 🤗
So Twinj as bestfriends haan
I loved Kunj's proposal 😳
And I'm very curious to know why Twinkle indirectly said no..
I'm sure there must be some suspense
Can't wait,pls continue soon
And ha I'm not going to let you be lazy,I'll keep pestering you till you don't update 😆

m glad that you liked this
and yaa there is a suspense
but I know how lazy I am but I'll try to update soon
BTW Kiara I love that name you gave me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..sristi..
Amazing start..
Poor kunj..but y twinkle said like tat??
Curious to know..
Pl update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow..sristi..

Amazing start..
Poor kunj..but y twinkle said like tat??
Curious to know..
Pl update soon

thanks dear
you will get to know about it in 3rd update most probably
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sristi biggg res😃
Unres.
Your first story;
Awesome dear
Here is boggling tesion between lovers cause of surroundings.
Love itt.
Best Buddies became Lover;Nice.
Now eagerly waiting for Kunj's flashback .😃
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