Twinj FF- The Perfect Couple Ch43 Pg57 27/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Amazing updates Shriti. Loved the update. Both kunj and Twinkle are right in their sense. Waiting to see how the next morning is going to be. We can visualize every bit you write and feels so good to see Kunj and Twinkle in that as sidmin. The hand raise part is just the way when he raised in the RT incident. Eagerly waiting for their patch up and intense romance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Shriti,
I always cry when Twinj behave like this.
U know i have no problem with little cute nokjhokes.but this is a serious one though nobody was solely responsible of it.
In this situation only love and understanding is needed from both.
I am now looking forward to this thing.
And no they will not fight again.They will go for patch up.
P.S.-Why Twinkle don't find a valuable work?
As a result she can consume her free time in it also her work will be helpful to many person.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Such an intense one..but plz make them patch up..
But I know the story should have some twist and turns..
Do write these kind of stories😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Shriti m a fan of u these days😊.
This was one intense scene.
Twinkle just needed time from kunj but kunj is also right.
Work and wife both r imp.
He should not have raised his hand.
Feeling bad for twinj.
Hope kunj is able to patch up with twinkle.

This ff is nice.
Thanks for writing it.🤗
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Hey everyone, I m really overwhelmed that u guys are liking my ff. As I m quite busy today, so I am uploading the next chptr in morning itself. Keep reading and commenting.
Chapter 15:

Kunj woke up next morning in balcony and saw his hand swollen and covered with dried blood. His hand ached. He remembered their fight.
He immediately rushed in to check on Twinkle. There she was still sleeping on sofa curled up.His heart ached to see her like this. He went to her and touched her cheek. Then he realised that she was burning with fever. He picked her up and took her to their room. He laid her down and covered her with duvet and sat by her side stroking her hair. He was crying and blamed himself for this.
Twinkle slightly opened her heavy eyes. Her head was aching badly. She remembered everythng that happened last night and saw Kunj beside her. She immediately pushed him away and stood up.
Tw: Kunj... What r u doing here ? U shud be in office right now. And how did I come to room.I was sleeping outside. Aahhh.. Why is my head paining so much ! She held her head in her hands.
Kunj came to her and held her by shoulders.
Ku: Baby u have very high fever. How can I just leave u and go. Come on lie down and rest.
Tw: Just leave me.. Go away..
Twinkle started hitting him on his chest. Kunj let her do it. Then she went to the bed and threw all the pillows and cushions on him. Kunj was happy as she was venting out her frustation and anger. It was needed the most.She was continuously shouting go away Kunj.
Soon Twinkle started feeling dizzy and became unconcious. Kunj rushed to her and saved her from falling. He laid her down on bed. And immediately called a doctor.
Doctor told him that Twinkle was not eating properly from 2-3 Days nd she was stressed. Doctor gave her mild sedative and left.
Kunj went to the kitchen and made soup for her by following recipe from internet.
He came back to room and saw Twinkle sitting with support of bedrest holding her head.
Ku: Thank god Twinkle tujhe hosh aagya. Tujhe nhi pata main kitna tension mein aa gya tha. See maine tere liye soup bnaya hai.. Drink it and tell me kaisa hai.
Tw: Just go away Kunj. Mujhe kuch nhi chahiye. I want to go back to Amritsar.
Kunj sat infront of her and took a spoonful of soup infront of her mouth. She jerked it away and looked away.and it fell on his injured hand. He cried in pain.
Ku: Aaahhh ouch ! He moved his hand up nd down rapidly.
As soon as he cried in pain, Twinkle immediately looked at him with concern and at his hand. She took his hand and blew air on it. Her own eyes were teary to see this.
Tw: Kunj yeh cut kaise laga tumhe ? nd u dint even do first aid. I m sorry meri vajah se it got burnt.
Ku: u dont have to say sorry Twinkle. Yeh toh punishment hai tumhe hurt krne ki. He pulled back his hand and again offered her soup.
Ku: Plzz twinkle have it. Mera gussa soup pr mt nikaal. Plzz have it. Aur mujhe jo bhi saza degi, I will happily accept it. But plzz abh yeh gussa chod de.
She had already melted seeing his hand and was crying nw But was still somewhat angry. She needed to vent it out. She bent towards Kunj and again started hitting him on his chest. She was already very weak so it hardly hurted Kunj, but he let her do it. She did it for around 5 Mins and then She leaned in and hugged him. Kunj was very happy. He hugged her back tightly. Twinkle cried for a long time in his embrace and he let her do it. She needed to vent it out all. He rubbed her back and hair.
After a long time she stopped crying and pulled back.
Ku: I m sorry Twinkle for yesterday. Plzz ho sake toh mujhe maaf krde. He joined his hands infront of her and head lowered down.
Twinkle took his hands in hers and spoke.
Tw: Thoda time lagega mujhe yeh sabh bhulane mein. But I have a perfect punishment for u.
Ku: Haan haan baby bolo. I agree to whateva it is.
Tw: Firstly, tum apne office hours fixed rakhoge.. Aur shaam ko ghar jldi aaoge. Ghar par apne saath office ka koi kaam nhi laoge.. Aur weekends pr u wont go to office. Secondly, this weekend that is tommorow u wud take me for a date. Do u agree ?
Ku: Yes baby. I agree..Aur kuch ? And he smiled.
Tw: Aur haan abhi tum mere saath sone wale ho. I noe tum bhi thik se nhi soye raat ko. Lekin pehle mere se apne haath pr first aid krao.
Kunj smiled and nodded. He made twinkle drink the soup and den Twinkle did his first aid. They both settled in bed and twinkle put her head on Kunj's chest. Kunj tightly wrapped his hands around her waist. She still had high fever.
Tw: Kunj tumhara bnaya hua soup bilkul acha nhi tha. Never make it again.
Kunj chuckled. He was happy Twinkle waa back to her normal self.
Tw: Kunj tumne apni T-shirt kyun nhi utaari. I need ur body heat. Fir dekhna main kitni jldi thik ho jaongi ! Kunj sat up and removed his tshirt. He laid down back and pulled Twinkle all over himself and covered them with duvet. He smiled at how perfectly she fitted on his body.
Ku: I m glad my Twinkle is back. Acha now jaldi se so jao. U need to get well soon ! And I love u.
Tw: I love u 2 Kunj !
Twinkle was very tired. She immediately slept on his chest. His chest was her perfect pillow.
Kunj messaged his PA that he wud not come to office today as Twinkle was not well and ordered him to keep the weekend off for all the employees. He too slept then by wrapping his hands around twinkle's back. Finally everything was back into place.

----precap: Surprise for Twinkle-------

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
nice update shriti
so now their patch up is done
everything is so perfect in it Twinkle vent out all the anger and frustration n Kunj easily let her do that awwweee its so sweet of him ...and soup part is so cute Twinkle had tears in her eyes😭 seeing his cut they are really made for each other couple loved the way you showed it ...
and Twinkle's demands is so good ...waiting for the surprise
update soonish
thanx for the PM
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
I am glad to see that they cleared all nasty environment between them.
If you are angry or frustrate about something then you throw it from yourself rather keep in.
And that exactly happened here.
Again Twinj proved it why they are perfect to each other.They're cared for each other.
At last Twinkle's demand is so right and Kunj agree with her.
Good job Shriti;
Waiting for next.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Amazing update..
Twinj are love..
Kunj got cut in his hand..twinkle in fever..
All mess got cleared..thank god..
Babies are goals.
Surprise for twinkle..
Excited..update soon..
Thx for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Hey shriti,
So glad that their fight got over.. Eagerly waiting for the surprise
TWINJ is just amazing.⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all I am so sorry for commenting late as I was out of station so I couldnt reply ... and secondly I read all you parts In one go and I loved it !!!!!!!!!👏 please continue soon and once again sorry for commenting late
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