Ficlet 3/50: I wish this moment could last forever

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Sammy

@Sdea

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This sounded more like a scene from some romantic movie. So simple yet so beautiful. And you know i love it when you describe the surrounding, one can actually imagine all this happening.

I am in love with this one too.

lol I wish the numbers could last forever😆

Edited by Sdea - 9 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

THE BBYS ARE SO ADORABLE OMG I CANNOT!

Twinkle playing around with bubbles and him adopting her favorite on him. This gave me so many warm feels that Jay's sad VMs took away from me.

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

hayeee

i wish this moment could last forever as well! such a wonderful fic!

i loved every bit of it! i loved loved loved loved the ending the most ❤️

can't wait for tomm's fic!

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SweetSau
Hi
Loved it
As usual wonderful
Sok cute and light-hearted.
Iam sorry that I couldn't comment on your previous parts i am going through a trauma as j lost my grandmother when it least expected so still haven't gotten ober the shock
Love all your writing pieces gives a different joy to read them.
And sorry for not commentkng earlier.
Keep writing juat like this as I love your stories
Will try to comment on the emaining soon bit even if I dont i am reading them for sure
Love
Sayli

Oh, I am sorry to hear about your Grandmother. My deepest condolence.

Please, you don't ever need to apologize for not commenting. You are going through a tough time.

My stories will always be on this site so you can comment whenever its most convenient for you😊

And Thank you so much!

I am so glad you are liking these stories.😃

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti
Unress
The story is sooo CUTE...
The TUTTA TARA scene reflected their purity of heart & love...

Why did it End so soon...
I want to read more. ...
47 more to come...

Nvl. ..my one should be lengthy,very very lovey dovey & happy ending with no hanging mystery...🤣
#my lengthy wish list

Thank you so much buddy!😃😃

Glad you are liking it!

PS: Your lengthy wishlist😆😆. I'll try my best to give you a happy ending but on the length I make no promises

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: twinjlover9
Again an amazing Ficlet
Aweee ...was the only feeling I had while reading it
and the reason behind his smile and his favorite season all because of Twinkle so sweet ...and you described everything in a very elegant way their positions n all in the park under sky... imagining all of that 😃
and the last bit Twinj are really made for each other ... same wishes you know 😃
excited for the next one
And thnx for the PM dear

Stop making me blush!!😆😆

But seriously Thank you so much!!

I cannot express how much all your comments and encouragements mean to me.

Thanks😃

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wow..it was really cuteee..
Luved it vvvmuch..
Spring season was amazing..
"TUTTA THARA" scene was beautiful..
Lovely story...
Waiting for next..

Thank you so much Di!

🤗

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tikit
Mehvish cute ficlet.
I liked their picnic scene.
But tutta tara was best scene i wish this moment could last forever.
Mehvish nd i wish ur ficlets to last forever and ever in my heart.
Beautiful update.
Yay 47 more to go.
Update those fast pleasr.
Thanks for pm.

Aww...I wish I can make you all happy with my fics forever too!!

Thanks you so so much buddy!

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sa86
Buddy,Many Many Thanks for this Ficlet.
I am amazed by your craft.
By the way do u have any idea that I am kind of nature freak person?
I tell you because nature takes a big part in this ficlet.I also love spring but this season is missing nowadays.
The spirit of this story is awesome.
A dayout with two lovebirds.
And I loveee "Tutta Tara"since K2h2 days & u finished with this one,is so cool.
U know i adore Twinj most bcause they always stood for them either in mind or in fact knowingly or also unknowingly.

No,no, no, It's all thanks to you lovely people that I am inspired and motivated to write!

Trust me you guys play a huge role in motivation me!

Lol...I LOVE nature too😃😃

I know this piece was smaller than the others, and I apologize for it. Hope you don't mind

Thanks again

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Jambread3
Another amazing shot 👏
I'm falling in love with your writing more and more each day
loved it
Though It's short,you give full justice to what you write..
Great Job buddy 🤗

And I am falling in love with your comments too!😆😆

Thanks a ton buddy!

Yea I know it was on the shorter side but I really could do only so much in the time I allotted myself!😆

Thanks again

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