Ficlet 2/50: Look into my eyes, what do you see?

neverlandspirit thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
~For Riya (Docritu99) and ~
~Eshita (Tikit)~
!Happy Reading!

#12: Look into my eyes, what do you see?

Kunj always wondered on the saying Eyes are the gateway to the soul'. How would eyes possibly be the entrance on one's soul? What is a soul anyway?

He was standing by the mirror, peering deep into the black abyss of his eyes, trying to get a glimpse of his soul. Instead, all he got back was his own reflection. He tilted his head up, bent it down, dropped it at an angle and yet all remained the same. There was no soul to be seen! Stupid sayings!

"Oho ho! Dekho aaj kaun khada hai aaine ke saamne! Mr. Kunj Sarna, aaine ko aise aakhe phaad-phaad kar dekhogey toh aaina bhi darr ke maare toot jayega, samjhe? Chal abhi hatho, mujhe apne baal banane hai." Twinkle says, giving her husband a slight shove away from the mirror. She grabs her hairbrush fully intend on running it through the wet strands of her hair, when Kunj grabs her by the elbows and turns her towards him.

She lets out a yelp in utter surprise. And then her eyes popped wide as Kunj drew his face closer to hers. "K-Kunj-yeh hum-yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?" She manages to speak despite her knotted tongue.

"Look in to my eyes, what do you see?" his eyes are boring into hers and it makes it all the more difficult for her to form coherent sentences. His eyes, they were of the richest chocolaty hue and had depths that could drown her forever.

"Kya?"

"Tujhe meri aakhon mein kya nazar aa raha hai?"

"Kunj yeh tum kya bol rahe ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai." She tells him lowly, confident that an octave higher and her voice would betray her. He is so close to her, so close. And she is finding it difficult to breathe and yet she sucks in a deep breath, trying to get as much of the cologne of his, permanently lodged in her lungs.

"Log kehte hai, that eyes are the gateway to the soul', tujhe mere aakhon mein kya nazar aa raha hai?"

So she dares a look into those whirlpool eyes. And maybe what the people say is true, maybe eyes do reflect the soul because all she can see in those beautiful eyes of her husband is purity, love, devotion and just a sprinkling of mischief.
But she was being too philosophical. What she actually and literally could see in his eyes was herself staring at him. His eyes are the perfect mirrors' she thinks and wonders why she ever stood in front of that useless silver piece of glass over their dressing table to get ready when she could be looking into Kunj's eyes.

"Bol na." he asks her again.

She replies without another thought. "Main."

"Kya?"

"Tumhari aakhon mein, mujhe main khud nazar aa rahi hoon."

Verbal conversation ceases, time stops and the world around them makes no sense. All that made sense, all that mattered was her and him and them together.

"Toh phir log, sach hi bol rahe the." He tells her after a while.

"Kaise?" She wonders. She is sure he couldn't and wouldn't see what she sees in him.

"Because, you are my soul. Kyuki tu hi toh hai, meri rooh mai, meri dhadkano mein, mere dil mein."

And wasn't it true?

THE END.
Well guys that day 2/50. Hope you all liked it. Please drop down a comment and let me know.
Also a big Big Big Thanks to all of you for your lovely words on my previous. I love you guys!
Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

27

Views

1.5k

Users

15

Likes

62

Frequent Posters

docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
👏 👏
This was a brilliant piece of ficlet..
I m.wondering if such a small ficlet can struck those chords then why do we need to write those long everlasting stories..😆
But it doesn't mean u'l get an excuse for not updating them..
I have become more greedy now..

Dude I fell in love with ur writing all over again..
Twinj were perfect..
All the while I had that dreamy smile on my face and aww on my lips while reading this..
Splendid..!!
I was sad tat it ended but then 48 are more to go.. So looking forward..
Thanks for this great summer surprises..

P.S. m yet to read yesterday's one.. Will read it soon..
Edited by docritu99 - 9 years ago
tikit thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Mehwish this was really sweet.👏.
Its true eyes r mirror for soul.
I loved it when twinkle said i dont need mirror when i can see myself in kunjs eyes.
Loved kunjs reply u r my soul.
Of mehvish this was so adorbs.

Mehvish i want to read all ur ficlets asap.
Also update ur ff.
Ik i m greedy to read all ur ficlets now.
Thanks for pm.

Edited by tikit - 9 years ago
amlavs thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Wow...
Wonderful wonderful..
Luv u buddy...
It was cute..
S twinkle is kunjs soul..
U r an amazingly writer...
Eagerly waiting for next..
adi_FMT_ct thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Really NVL.
Your Ficlet is simply rocking all the way.
Admire the two beautiful emotion here,at first the masti in front of mirror and then the soul answer.
Actually they are truely SOULMATES.
Love u.I am also as greedy as Riya.😃
20160990159 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
amazing its so amazing ...👏
their cute antics in front of mirror was superb ...
and at last he got his answer he found his soul in his eyes and that's Twinkle so sweet naa 😃
Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago
-Aniisha- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
What a beautiful piece is writing 👏 Loved it dear 😳 Waiting for the next one
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Oh my god,you have no idea how hard I was blushing while I was reading this!
I could actually imagine this happening
It was beautiful babe!
You're indeed an amazing amazing writer,in fact one of the best for me!
I really wanted to read more ya!
Personally I don't have any requests for any ficklets,I just wanna read all of them,so post soon 🤗
Shaveerkti thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Ur stories r magic...So is ur writing skill & style...
Ppl.will srsly think something else seeing me smile like this...
Second one Great one...
48 more to come...
neverlandspirit thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: docritu99

👏 👏
This was a brilliant piece of ficlet..
I m.wondering if such a small ficlet can struck those chords then why do we need to write those long everlasting stories..😆
But it doesn't mean u'l get an excuse for not updating them..
I have become more greedy now..

Dude I fell in love with ur writing all over again..
Twinj were perfect..
All the while I had that dreamy smile on my face and aww on my lips while reading this..
Splendid..!!
I was sad tat it ended but then 48 are more to go.. So looking forward..
Thanks for this great summer surprises..

P.S. m yet to read yesterday's one.. Will read it soon..

Thank you so much Riya!!😃
Lol! My stories make you smile, while you and your comments make me smile!
I was wondering the same thing...why do we write those realllyy long fics?!😆😆 But jokes apart, yeah I will update my other fics soonish too!

Thank again love
🤗

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".