Ficlet 2/50: Look into my eyes, what do you see? - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tikit

Mehwish this was really sweet.👏.

Its true eyes r mirror for soul.
I loved it when twinkle said i dont need mirror when i can see myself in kunjs eyes.
Loved kunjs reply u r my soul.
Of mehvish this was so adorbs.

Mehvish i want to read all ur ficlets asap.
Also update ur ff.
Ik i m greedy to read all ur ficlets now.
Thanks for pm.

Thanks a ton buddy!!
Really happy you liked it!😃
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Yups, I will update my other fics soonish too!
No worries on the PM things, you will receive them always😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow...

Wonderful wonderful..
Luv u buddy...
It was cute..
S twinkle is kunjs soul..
U r an amazingly writer...
Eagerly waiting for next..

Thank you so much Lavanya di!!
Love you too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Honestly I held my breadth when she was looking into his eyes and thinking to herself all that she sees in his eyes and saying to herself she don't need a mirror.
Dude you took my breadth away with this beautiful piece of story.
I LOVE IT!!
This 50 days of summer is going to be awesome.
Can't wait to read the next 48
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sa86

Really NVL.

Your Ficlet is simply rocking all the way.
Admire the two beautiful emotion here,at first the masti in front of mirror and then the soul answer.
Actually they are truely SOULMATES.
Love u.I am also as greedy as Riya.😃

Thank you so so much buddy!😃
Super glad you are liking these fics.

PS: I didn't get your name...
Oh and I love you too!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

amazing its so amazing ...👏
their cute antics in front of mirror was superb ...
and at last he got his answer he found his soul in his eyes and that's Twinkle so sweet naa 😃

Aww...Thank you so much buddy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

What a beautiful piece is writing 👏 Loved it dear 😳 Waiting for the next one

Thanks Anisha!😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Jambread3

Oh my god,you have no idea how hard I was blushing while I was reading this!
I could actually imagine this happening
It was beautiful babe!
You're indeed an amazing amazing writer,in fact one of the best for me!
I really wanted to read more ya!
Personally I don't have any requests for any ficklets,I just wanna read all of them,so post soon 🤗

OMG! Thank you so much Kiara!
Honestly you are making me blush!
Thank you!
🤗

Lolzy! I know you all wanna read them all but post a number so I can write according to that order!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Ur stories r magic...So is ur writing skill & style...

Ppl.will srsly think something else seeing me smile like this...
Second one Great one...
48 more to come...

Aww buddy!! Thank you so much!!
Hayye Allah! Log kya sochegey?? Jawan ladki aise computer ko dekh kar has kyu rahi hai!?😆😆

Thanks again buddy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: kardooks

Honestly I held my breadth when she was looking into his eyes and thinking to herself all that she sees in his eyes and saying to herself she don't need a mirror.

Dude you took my breadth away with this beautiful piece of story.
I LOVE IT!!
This 50 days of summer is going to be awesome.
Can't wait to read the next 48

Karen!! Thank you so much!
It puts me over the moon that I could elicit such emotions out of you guys. Thank you
🤗
Lol! U guys are like 48 more

While I am like 48 more!!
Just kidding!
I love writing these as much as you all like reading it!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
"because you are my soul" ❤️
uff loved this one! i loved how you incorporated being able to see someone's soul in their eyes and i loved how you wrote that twinkle saw herself in him - because it is so true!
amazing fic, can't wait for tomorrows!

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