Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey kaira..!!

This was interesting.. M looking forward..

The healing phase of twinkle was well depicted..

M wondering what's the matter with kunj.. Do continue this..

A yuvraj free story is a bliss.. No offence..

Do update soon..


Thank you so much for appreciating it,means a lot 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm so overwhelmed with the response. Thank you,hope I'm able to live upto your expectations. Here is chapter 2. Happy reading,have a lazy Sunday ;) x

Chapter 2

The scene begins from when twinkle gets a call from an unknown number.

Twinkle - "hello?"

Unknown person - "hello,Kya mein Mrs.Twinkle Kunj Sarna se baat kar Rahi Hun?"

Twinkle -"ji aap kon?"

Unknown - "Mrs.Sarna,Kya mein aap se mil sakti Hun?"

Twinkle - "lekin aap hai kaun aur aapko mera number mila kaise?"

Unknown - "dekhiye mein janti Hun ke aapke maan mein hazaro sawaal hai but please meri baat maniye,yeh Bohot important baat hain"

Twinkle - "aisi bhi Kya important baat hai?"

Twinkle could hear the desperation in the woman's voice at the other end of the phone and it made her wonder what was so important.

Unknown - "mujhe aapse aapke pati ke baare mein baat karni hai"

Twinkle was now really tensed. First she was referred to as 'Mrs.Sarna' and now this woman claimed to know kunj too.

Twinkle - "theekh hai,bataiye kahan milna hai aapko?"

Unknown - "aap please mujhse main market wale coffee shop mein aaike milye kal dopahar 12 baje"

Twinkle - "okay I'll be there" and with that twinkle heard the line go dead.

Twinkle had kept herself very strong,she didn't let any painful memories reach her and her family too made sure that they never took kunj's name Infront of her. But when the woman took kunj's name,all the painful memories came rushing back to her. She remembered all the memories she had spent with kunj. She closed her eyes and reminisced all the memories that flowed through her eyes. She had to stay strong,she needed to know what this woman knew about kunj. And even if she did what made her call after so many years. Shooing all the thoughts aside,twinkle tried to sleep but she knew she was far from sleeping tonight. Tomorrow was going to be a long day,a day when she will be facing her past again.
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Twinkle had woken up earlier than usual. When she woke up she found herself curled up on her bed and a picture of her and kunj clutched near her heart. She didn't know when she took the picture and held it so close to her.It was a picture of them on their wedding day.how happy they looked together even if it was fake at that time.she didn't know when she started crying but she knew this was not the right time to be Weak. Looking at the picture on more time,she picked up her towel and straight went to the bathroom.

Twinkle had decided that she won't tell Leela and Mahi about the phone call. She didn't want them to unnecessarily take tension and she couldn't tell them anything until she wasn't sure herself.

At the dinning table.

Leela - "good morning putar,need theekh say mili?"

Twinkle - "ji maa".Only twinkle knew how tired she was.

"Good morning everyone" sang manvi as she made herself to the dinning room.

Mahi - "arre aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai? Mannu itni subhi kaise uth gayi?"

"Oho di,aap Aam (mango) khao na gutli kyun gin rahe ho" and with this all the 3 women shared a heartful laughter.

"Hey Bhagwan yeh kudi kuch bhi bolti hai" stated leela.

Mahi was the first one to notice that twinkle was lost in her thoughts and how she played with her food not even eating once.

"Di aap theekh toh hai na?" Mahi asked breaking twinkle's chain of thoughts.

Twinkle - "..Haan..Haan mei..n theekh hoon."

Mahi knew something was wrong but she didn't want to push twinkle any further.

Leela - "Accha putar tujhe yaad toh haina aaj 2 baje hamari meeting hai."

Twinkle - "Haan maa yaad hai."

Twinkle quickly finished her food before any of them tried to talk to her.

"Arre putar kahan jaa Rahi hai?" Asked leela as she saw twinkle getting up from her seat.

"Woh maa woh mein chinky ke saath Bahar jaa Rahi Hun,2 baje se pehle aa jaoungi" said twinkle as she mentally noted to call chinky and tell her about her excuse.

"Theekh hai putar aaram naal jaa par please time pe pahoch jaana" said leela

"Haan maa don't worry"with this twinkle took her purse and said bye to the ladies and rushed out of the house.

As soon as she moved out,her eyes instantly fell on the 'Sarna Mansion'. She noticed how isolated and dead it looked,as if there was no one who lived there. Suddenly a sense of guilt took over her. She realised how she didn't even meet Sarna's after kunj's death. Maybe she didn't have the guts to face them or the house. She didn't know how but after the phone call last night she felt a weird sense of strength in her,it took her about 2.5 seconds to decide that she needs to do this. She had to face them.

Gathering up all the courage in her,twinkle walked towards the Sarna Mansion.
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Precap - confrontation between Bebe,Usha and Twinkle.

P.S - I know I had given a different precap in the last part but I really wanted to show a showdown between the Sarna Ladies.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome Kiara.
I also want to know how is our Sarna Ladies.
Go for it.


Edited by sa86 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Lovely update kiara😳
Would deffo love to see a confrontation btw the sarnas n twinkle😃😳
Cont soon plz😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome update Kiara
Loved it

Cant wait for next part😊
Edited by harshi2000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Kiara it was awesome sarna ladies and twinkle confrontation would be lovely. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Niceee !!! pleaseee updat the next part ASAP :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Yeee...
Niceee update...
Loving it...
Jambread perfect...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome update..
Wanna know Wats next..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Kiara this is a really nice story. As usual i had to make a fashionably late entry 😆
But better late than never right? Anyhow, i loved the way you expressed everything

Looking forward to the next update

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