Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

happy birthday in advance
and the update is superb
I really can't wait for kunj's re-entry now after reading everyone's reactions after knowing Kunj is alright...
I request just don't change his face like the show I just can't imagine anyone else in the place of Sid
plzzz update soon


Thank you love! Yeah yeah don't worry I won't be showing any plastic surgery drama 😆 lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainakhalil

A very very happy bithday to u in advance

The update was as always mind blowing was a silent reader but u made me majbur to comment
Waiting to see twinkles reaction and kunjs entry


aw thank you darling,I'm glad you commented 😳 thanks for the wishes too
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay guys so a lot of people have asked me this and I just wanted to clear it that yes in my story,kunj is played by Sid only. For me no matter who comes next to play Kunj's character,Sid is always going to remain my kunj.Happy reading x

Chapter 7

Everybody had woken up earlier then usual. They all wanted to finish of their morning activities as soon as they could so they could go and see kunj.

Manohar had cancelled all his meetings. And before they knew it was already 10.

Taneja house:

Leela had sent manvi to check if twinkle was ready.

When manvi entered the room,she saw twinkle sitting lazily on the bed,her eyes fixed on the floor,her blue dress which she was supposedly going to wear was lying on the bed.

Manvi - "Twinkle di,aap theekh Toh hai na."

Twinkle didn't reply. Fearing if something had gone wrong,manvi went to call leela.

Leela rushed upstairs. Seeing twinkle in that state,she signalled manvi to leave them alone and close the door as she left.

Leela - "Twinkle putar?"

Leela kept a hand on her shoulder,that's when twinkle snapped out of her thoughts.

Twinkle - "Ji maa,aapne kuch kaha?"

Leela - "Kya baat hai putar tu inni Khoi Khoi kyun hai?"

Twinkle - "Maa mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai. Mein Bohot confused Hun. Maa mein Bohot Bohot Khush Hun ki kunj Wapas aagaya hai.i mean meine iss din ka kitne time se intezaar kiya hai. Lekin maa mein tension mein Hun. Pata nahi mein kunj ko kaise face karungi. Uske jaane ka bad meine uska ghar chodh diya,uska naam drop Kar diya aur aapni life mein bad rahi thi. Jab usse yeh pata chalega tab woh kitna dukhi Hoga. Mein nahi Janti ki mein jab usse milungi tab kya Hoga. Mein usse deserve nahi karti,5 saal ho chuke hai,shayad aab uske dil mein mere liye koi Jagah na ho. Kitna kuch ho chuka hai inn 5 saalon mein,ki aab aisa lag raha hai Jaise kunj aur main Ek saath nahi reh paenge."

Twinkle poured her heart out. After yuvi took an exit from their lives,twinkle thought they finally could be together but her insecurities were killing her.

Leela - "Putar tu kyun inni chinta Kar rahi hai? Wahe guru par bharosa rakh,woh Sab theekh kardenge. Putar Teri aur kunj ki Jodi par babaji di Mehr hai. Tu chinta mat Kar Sab theekh ho jayega. Dekhna,Bohot jald tu aur kunj Ek saath hoge aur phir se lad rahe hogay."

Maybe her mom was right. Maybe she was just scared because of these Insecurities. She knew how much kunj loved her. Maybe she was just over thinking after all.

Leela - "Accha chal ab yeh Sab chodh aur jaldi se tayar ho ja. 10:30 ho chuke hai,hospital jaana hai na. Waise tu yeh pehna rahi hai kya?",Leela asked pointing her finger at the blue dress.

Twinkle - "Ji maa,blue kunj ka favourite colour hai."

Leela smiled. "Khush reh putar."
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The whole taneja and Sarna family arrived at the hospital. Twinkle called up Pallavi who told her to meet her in room 21.

Pallavi - "Hi twinkle"

Twinkle - "Hi Pallavi,yeh meri family hai."

Pallavi - "Sasriyakal aap Sab ko. Aap sabke barre mein Bohot suna hai."

Bebe - "Khush raho putar. Putar kunj Kahan hai?"

Pallavi - "Ji kunj Ander hai. Woh so rahe hai Lekin aap unhe dekh sakte hai Aayiye."

And she guided them inside the room.

The room was huge with a big bed in the middle of the room. At the side of the bed was a picture of their whole family. The picture that was clicked when leela and RT had got re married.

Finally twinkle's eyes fell on the kunj.
Her love,her life was lying down right in front of her.

He still looked the same.

Though he looked a little paler than before,he still looked as handsome as ever. His soft hair touching his head,his now fully grown beard covering half of his face. He looked so weak,he must have lost a lot of weight,thought twinkle. He was still the same,he still slept like a baby,his innocence was his charm.

Twinkle suddenly remembered all the memories she had spent with kunj. She prayed and prayed to see and have him and here today she finally saw him.

She didn't care who was around,all she knew was that she just wanted to run to him,hug him as tight as she could,pour her heart out to him. She wanted to kiss him,she wanted him to call her 'his siyaapa queen',she wanted the time to stand still.

The same feelings were going on in the other family member's hearts too. They silently cried to see kunj in that state.

Unable to stop herself anymore,twinkle ran towards kunj and sat down in front of him.

She slowly touched his hand with her trembling fingers. His skin was still cold,just the way she liked it. Hers was warm so when they held hands,it was a perfect combination of hot and cold you see.

While ruffling his hair slowly,twinkle bend down to kiss his head ever so lightly. She saw kunj start to have a smile on his face. A smile that indicated that he knew she was here.

Seeing twinkle so close to him made Pallavi's heart contented. She waited for so long for them to be together. She knew how much kunj loved twinkle.

Knowing she had to give an explanation to his family members,she began.
Pallavi - "Kunj pichle 5 saal se Coma me the"

Manohar - "Kya? Kunj pichle 5 saal se Coma mein tha?"

Pallavi - "Ji uncle,mein aapko Sab theekh se samjhati Hun,please mere saath Bahar chaliye."

Twinkle remained rooted in her seat. She was feeing so dizzy,she chose to ignore whatever Pallavi was saying. Her eyes were stuck on Kunj.

How much kunj had to suffer because of her. It's because of her that yuvi and Anita ruined Kunj's life. She felt even more ashamed of herself. She wanted to kill herself seeing kunj is that state.

Usha - "Twinkle putar chal bahar chal"
Twinkle - "Nahi maa,mein kunj ko chodh kar kahi nahi jaa rahi Hun"

Usha - "Lekin putar kya tujhe nahi jaana kunj ke saath inn 5 saalon mein kya hua?"

Twinkle knew her mummyji was right. She slowly left Kunj's hand and walked till the door,gave one last look to kunj before walking out.
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Precap - Pallavi tells everyone how Kunj was saved and Kunj wakes up from his sleep.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Woah kiara our handsome hero kunj sarna is back. Yay feeling happy. Continue soon and want twinj reunion soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...its sooo amazing...
Had tears in my eyes while reading the hospital scene..
U wrote in sooo nicely...
Its sooo interesting..
Wanna know Wats gonna happen next..
Thx for pm frnd.. (Sid is the one and only kunj for all if us no one can take that place)..
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aha!Poor Twinky.
Her guilt is so visible in ur writing.👏
And of course our hero is back and now they become their strengths.
Love it Kiara.


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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww its just superb
you wrote everything so perfectly be it twinkle's guilt or her insecurities
and when twinkle kissed Kunj on his head and he smiled ...in that you portrayed their love sooo good
at the end when twinkle just want to take a last look at him is also so cute
waiting for to know more about the precap
so plzzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I m spellbound...😳
U have written everything so nicely...
Twinkle's insecurities...
The hospital scene...Wow...
& Ur declaration before starting. ...🤣
Thank God no plastic surgery...
It's getting intersting ...
Update sooonnn...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very Well Written
Loved it
I can't wait for Kunjs entry
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Posted: 9 years ago
@tikit @amlavs @sa86 @twinjlover9 @shaveerkti @harshi2000
Thank you so much cuties,a big hug from my side to all of you'll,you guys mean a lot to me..your kind words make me wanna update fast,I'll be updating the next part by today evening.Love you all 🤗 ❤️

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