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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Stories are so much effort you know, it's easier to write shots 😆 But I hope you stick by this! Otherwise I'm going to start that ship all over again 😈

Now you tell me 😆

Seriously Nemo, impeccable timing

Which one? Homo or hetro? 🤣

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Now you tell me 😆
Seriously Nemo, impeccable timing
Which one? Homo or hetro? 🤣

I WAS TALKING ABOUT #ATHINAND 🤣🤣🤣

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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

^ I can proudly say that I've seen worse, all thanks to you

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Aditi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Athira u take the thought from the ongoing track.

I am curious to know how the story unfolds.

Dont know how the story actually take place in the show but u can draw it as ur desire.

For my opinion it should be less dramatic and more emotional.

Else I like the bro bond.

Nice update.Carry on.👍🏼

Edited by sa86 - 9 years ago

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lavanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Nice update dear...

Luved twinkles confidence abt kunj being alive..

S at least in ur story Anandh had some role and dialogues to say..am happy abt it..

Hope soon kunj ll be back..

Upload next soon

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roshni101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

How did I miss this? I wasnt even aware of my bae writing an ff 😃
Coming to the update, it was amazing. You are such a beautiful writer. Both the updates were really good. You pen everything down so perfectly.
Love how you have portrayed the family.
Their bond is so nice.
Cherry and Maya 🤣 that cracked me up. I wonder how he impressed her 😆
Glad that Mahi is a part of your story.
Anyway, i truly loved the updates to the core. I never knew you were such a great writer. Continue soon.
Im eagerly waiting.

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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: roshni101
How did I miss this? I wasnt even aware of my bae writing an ff 😃
Coming to the update, it was amazing. You are such a beautiful writer. Both the updates were really good. You pen everything down so perfectly.
Love how you have portrayed the family.
Their bond is so nice.
Cherry and Maya 🤣 that cracked me up. I wonder how he impressed her 😆
Glad that Mahi is a part of your story.
Anyway, i truly loved the updates to the core. I never knew you were such a great writer. Continue soon.
Im eagerly waiting.

Rosh i was gonna hit you with a belan for being late. But you made it just in time 😆

Thank you so much doll 🤗

Don't flatter me so much now.

How cherry impressed maya is a different story altogether. will give you some insight to it in the coming updates

I love u for such a sweet comment rosh

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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: amlavs
Nice update dear...
Luved twinkles confidence abt kunj being alive..
S at least in ur story Anandh had some role and dialogues to say..am happy abt it..
Hope soon kunj ll be back..
Upload next soon

Thank you di

I'm glad u liked that part 😳

I honestly feel Anand can play a bigger part in the show but they have just made him a waste of space.

I'll try and get him back soon 😆

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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sa86
Athira u take the thought from the ongoing track.
I am curious to know how the story unfolds.
Dont know how the story actually take place in the show but u can draw it as ur desire.
For my opinion it should be less dramatic and more emotional.
Else I like the bro bond.
Nice update.Carry on.👍🏼

I wanted the family's reaction to be the same towards Yuvraj. Rest i don't think i'll draw more parallels between the present track and this story

I'll try and mould the next updates as per your desires

And thank you 😳