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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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lavanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Luved it athira...

Maya cherry ki biwi bangayi..

All back to normal except twinkle..

Okieee..so Kunj lost his memory..but he got some ajeeb feelings..

Poor TWINJ...

Want them together soon..

Plz update soon..

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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs
Luved it athira...
Maya cherry ki biwi bangayi..
All back to normal except twinkle..
Okieee..so Kunj lost his memory..but he got some ajeeb feelings..
Poor TWINJ...
Want them together soon..
Plz update soon..

Thank you di

I needed someone to play his wife and only Maya came to mind 😆

Actually idk what's wrong with him. I just wrote it for the fun of it

I'll update when i have this figured out

Thank you for liking this though. I was afraid that this would suck 😆

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Krishi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Athira, the story is quite interesting...
Definitely the clich way of Indian Soaps, but interesting...
I actually loved the Sarna Family enjoying! How they had fun and all.. The three Daughters in Law having the sisterly relationship... Twinkle caring about all of them... But then when she called out for Kunj❤️ It broke my heart... How her day will be anyways incomplete without him...
And then Kunj's thoughts!! Excellent!
I am excited for future updates! Continue soon..

P.S. I would love to get PMs if possible 😆

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Eshita

@tikit

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow athira this is good. Plz do continue fast. Kunj has memory loss.

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Aditi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely FF Athira.

Please Update Soon.

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Lubana

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Posted: 9 years ago

Maya married to Cherry n expecting..that was unexpected😆

But seriously lovedd the happy family wala scene with Cherry's childlike antics

Twinkle missing Kunj awwn...hope their paths cross soon

Please continue Athira. Waiting for the next!

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Cobra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Athira, the story is quite interesting...
Definitely the clich way of Indian Soaps, but interesting...
I actually loved the Sarna Family enjoying! How they had fun and all.. The three Daughters in Law having the sisterly relationship... Twinkle caring about all of them... But then when she called out for Kunj❤️ It broke my heart... How her day will be anyways incomplete without him...
And then Kunj's thoughts!! Excellent!
I am excited for future updates! Continue soon..

P.S. I would love to get PMs if possible 😆

Thank you Krishi. Lol i was in a very cheesy mood when this idea occured to me so i thought why not try out the old clich ways 😆

Twinkle now feels extremely protective of them since Kunj gave his family utmost importance and she somehow feels that had she been a bit more careful with Kunj, he would still be around.

She may put up a happy front for all to see but we all know that her life is at a standstill without Kunj around.

I actually had fun writing that part. Sadist in me awakens 🤣

Glad you liked this. Trust me, i thought this sucked inside out

Will send u a pm when i update. Which seems like a far cry now cos idk what to do with this story 😆