Twinj SS: Just 'Friends' Cht 5 updated CMPL - Page 25

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Oh...this so very lovely!!

I definitely loved reading it as much as you loved writing it. Everything was done at such a lovely pace, the characterisation and dialogues were amazing!!

I loved the friendship you portrayed between Twinkle and Kunj. Also may I mention that proposal was utter cute!!! *my heart is sighing in utter happiness*

Twinkle calling Kunj tum because it gave her shadi wali feeling!! I CANNOT!!!!

Lovely story!!!!

👏

Originally posted by: naaz.samreen

Shakti Shakti Shakti!! What was this man? I'm literally blown away. I'm stuggling to choose the right words for this update. To be honest i read this update of yours in almost half an hour. No no um not at all a slow reader. I swear it literally took me almost half an hour to read this update. You wanna know why? Well while i was reading your update i was so busy blushing, grinning, stopping reading and then smiling like an idiot, re-reading the dialogues. I was literally doing this while reading your update😆 It was that good.

The proposal was so unique, definitely a TwiNj kind of proposal. I loved loved loved it.

And that tu and tum part was so cute i swear. Tbh i really wanted you to add this part in your story and surprisingly you did😃 Kunj teasing her while she addressed him as tum instead of tu was super cute. Romantic Sarna and the shy Taneja. Just perfect. These small small things mean so much to me. :')

And omg i absolutely loved this dialogue "puri duniya ek taraf aur teri smile ek taraf" read this line like 10 times and i still doesn't seem to get over it.

Even after reading the whole update i'm smiling like an idiot.

I absolutely loved this story. I really adore the way you maintained the innocence, the purity in their relationship which actually true love is all about.

Sorry for the blabbering but what to do i couldn't stop myself from writing all this😳

I would love to read more of your works. Please do start another story soon please. I'd be waiting.😊

Originally posted by: Duumps

This is beautiful.

Loved it so much.

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

this is really a very unique and special proposal
when saw the notification of this update I was having a mixed feeling somehow sad that this is the last chapter of this beautifully written ss and happy for reading it
the proposal was so so so good
when Kunj was styling his hairs it was so cute that he wants everything to be perfect for his siyappa queen but twinkle being twinkle can't wait 😆
the speech by Kunj was so adorable
and their park scene ... I really don't have any words to say its super duper good
all in all everything is perfect in it as your every writing
thanks for writing this wonderful ss and sending it to me
plzzz do write more things like this
I'll be waiting for a new one

Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow dear

it is just awesome the confession was amazing

loved it

do write more dear

Originally posted by: Zenab78

It's cute di...loved it to the core..twinkle is shreni how she made kunj realize his feeling...lovely SS ..thanks for PM 🤗

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

I forgot that this was Twinj story i was imagining you only with your woh🤣

On a serious note,the dialogues blew me over and im so happy that the proposal was like that,spontaneous propsoal was so much better than a planned one coz it completely threw Twinkle off.

The swings part was AWWW!😳

I loved this SS so so much!Come back soon with moreee!❤️

I am so sorry Shakti... I didn't want to be so late... I typed the whole comment and when I posted, the whole comment converted into thin air :P

Hey!!
Sakti, amazing yaar!!
Loved it so much..
Aur woh line "married wali feeling aati hai"...
I was like,,, kya bolu main..matlab..kamaal hai...
Ek request tha, epilogue milega?? Like twinj with baby bump or new born baby..
Chota ho to v chalega..
Actually i dont want 2 leave this ss..so its a request,,If u can...oky??

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

awww thanks so much sristi!! so very glad you liked it!😳😳😊

loll i had the same feelings, i was kinda sad it ended i had so much fun writing it!

so glad you liked the proposal and the ending as well😊

thanks so much!😊😊

if you are also sad that it ended then just pleassseee give one more part to this naaa
please if you can then please write an epilogue because I can't believe it ended