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livelovelaughh

@livelovelaughh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#221

What an amazing end !! Loved it ! It was perfect 😊

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Auritrika Ashraf

@Bobsysprincess

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Shakti ,shakti, shakti
Tht was super cool...
I ve bcme ur jabra fan yaar...
U penned it wndrfully...
Keep wrtng lyk ths

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sue1o1

@sue1o1

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#223

It's done! And I loved every single word of it!! <3 And this last chapter have me all sorts of feels and sent me on an emotional high because damn Kunj and Twinkle are love and you have written this so epicly well and Kunj and Twinkle are so like the Kunj and Twinkle in the show I am crying here. I miss them. And I won't be able to see them but reading your pieces always gives me the feeling like I'm watching them and especially right now with everything going on in the show this was extremely good for my emotions 😆 thanks!!

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Oh...this so very lovely!!

I definitely loved reading it as much as you loved writing it. Everything was done at such a lovely pace, the characterisation and dialogues were amazing!!

I loved the friendship you portrayed between Twinkle and Kunj. Also may I mention that proposal was utter cute!!! *my heart is sighing in utter happiness*

Twinkle calling Kunj tum because it gave her shadi wali feeling!! I CANNOT!!!!

Lovely story!!!!

👏

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

RESS

because i'm lazy to read too. 😆

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naaz.samreen

@naaz.samreen

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Shakti Shakti Shakti!! What was this man? I'm literally blown away. I'm stuggling to choose the right words for this update. To be honest i read this update of yours in almost half an hour. No no um not at all a slow reader. I swear it literally took me almost half an hour to read this update. You wanna know why? Well while i was reading your update i was so busy blushing, grinning, stopping reading and then smiling like an idiot, re-reading the dialogues. I was literally doing this while reading your update😆 It was that good.

The proposal was so unique, definitely a TwiNj kind of proposal. I loved loved loved it.

And that tu and tum part was so cute i swear. Tbh i really wanted you to add this part in your story and surprisingly you did😃 Kunj teasing her while she addressed him as tum instead of tu was super cute. Romantic Sarna and the shy Taneja. Just perfect. These small small things mean so much to me. :')

And omg i absolutely loved this dialogue "puri duniya ek taraf aur teri smile ek taraf" read this line like 10 times and i still doesn't seem to get over it.

Even after reading the whole update i'm smiling like an idiot.

I absolutely loved this story. I really adore the way you maintained the innocence, the purity in their relationship which actually true love is all about.

Sorry for the blabbering but what to do i couldn't stop myself from writing all this😳

I would love to read more of your works. Please do start another story soon please. I'd be waiting.😊

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

This is beautiful.

Loved it so much.

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Sristi Malhotra

@20160990159

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

this is really a very unique and special proposal
when saw the notification of this update I was having a mixed feeling somehow sad that this is the last chapter of this beautifully written ss and happy for reading it
the proposal was so so so good
when Kunj was styling his hairs it was so cute that he wants everything to be perfect for his siyappa queen but twinkle being twinkle can't wait 😆
the speech by Kunj was so adorable
and their park scene ... I really don't have any words to say its super duper good
all in all everything is perfect in it as your every writing
thanks for writing this wonderful ss and sending it to me
plzzz do write more things like this
I'll be waiting for a new one