Originally posted by: asmaanixx
Meena - Let's not do the mystery element. Let's have big posters set up where people know where they can go to meet Jas.
Krishi - That's fine. Thank you. :)
Tried to redo it.1ST POST:Here's how I think it could begin:It is a warm afternoon & the crowd had gathered around in the park just to get a glimpse of someone special. They were told someone special was supposed to arrive but they had no idea who that person was. Kids were having fun at various recreation arenas such water rides, roller coaster, ferris wheel, bumper rides, Round Up. Many people were coming and leaving the food stalls with tons of food and they sat in the garden area which reminded them of how beautiful the nature looks during the summer time. Some of the food consists of sandwiches, samosas, pakodas, & various Indian delicacies. The main dish was butter chicken which many people relished by licking their fingers.Over to the stage, the crowd had gathered to meet up with special person. Many of them had left overs of butter chicken on their hands & faces. In the mean time, one of the organizers came out and started speaking with the crowd.**Person1** : I know that everyone has been waiting for this mysterious person. I'm pretty sure you all want to know who that gorgeous person is.----------------------This is only a draft. I suck. If anyone wants to expand onto this, feel free to do so.