TEI OS: Raat Ke Nakhre

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

So simple yet such a beautiful read..the characteristics of Kunj and Twinkle are so relatable to that of the show, the way you weave your words to create admirable sentences which explodes with so much cuteness is such a treat, I couldn't help but imagine this story whilst reading it..it was captivating from beginning to end

Did you have to go ahead and make the void in my heart greater than it already is..I was already missing their bedroom scenes and you just added to that with your story..I guess your punishment is to write more to rebuild the puncture I have 😊

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

cvs need to hire you as a writer! this is my demand now!

gosh areeba this was PERFECT!!!

the way you catch every small emotion and place it together uff

i really am missing their bedroom romance on the show and honestly you could not have picked a better time to write this than now!

kunj was sooo cute in this! and twinkle 😆 such a dramabaz!

we need this back in the show!

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Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

This is just so adorable loved it
Very well written Areeba

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
RESERVED😎

OMG!I did not know the extent to which I was missing their bedroom romance until I read this OS!When will we have such scenes in the show.Kunj has not stepped into the bedroom since the crappy marriage:'(

You wrote a purely Twinkle and Kunj OS after so long and I enjoyed every bit of it.

"Tujh pe dhiyan deta hoon tou duniya mein kiya ho raha hai, kyun ho raha hai, saab dimag se nikal jata hai. Issi leye tou duniya ke saare kam pehle khataam kar raha tha take tujh pe baad mein jee bhar ke dhiyaan de sakoon."

This dialogue!Im still digesting it!How simply he admitted to her!This was the highlight for me in this piece.

And the little details in the OS,their feelings,gestures and the dialogues everything was beautifully penned Areeba!

I want this in the show now!:)

Thank you Natasha!

I terribly miss their romance as well. Kunj and Twinkle on their own have such an amazing equation and chemistry!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.
This was damn adorable Areeba!
I soo loved it can't we get such a scene in the show it would be soo soo amazing!
But kta kare hamare CVs hai hi itbw besharam kuch dikhate hi nahi🤣..

But seriously this was amazing.
Waise amazing toh hona hi tha mere liye joo likha hai!😎😎

Awe I' glad you like it! I was so nervous whether it'll be good or not but i'm glad it lived up to your expectations!!

I would die to see a scene like this on-screen. It would be so amazing if we could get some romantic scenes like such after this track ends.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Aww this was so adorable 😳
Loved the OS Areeba
well written 👏
Thanks for the PM

Thank you Anisha!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: SweetSau
Hi
This was sooo amazing and cute!!
So like a typical couple jo hamare twinj hai!
Loved it!
Mujhe aur chahiye stories padhne ke liye. Woh kya hai naa I'm greedy for twinj!
Haayee I really loved it! Twinkle ke nakhre and then kunj manofying her was ultra cute!

Awe OMG you know I do have more OS lying around on my laptop. whenever time permits, i'll post more.

Thank you so much!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wow...amazing.. It is so nice areeba🤗
S I agree with teddy...the way u wrote everything was superb.
While reading I can easily picturize them in my mind and I can play it in front if my eyes..
Kunj and his dialogues and he knows how to manofy his twinkle..
Badly missing twinj bedroom scenes..
Actually don't know how to write my exact feel but this is what I felt...
Superb...
Will be waiting for your stories more...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked reading it!