TEI OS: Raat Ke Nakhre - Page 4

Originally posted by: shreeyoshree

It was so romantic...
Loved the dialogs

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Hey it ws very nyc..

Twinj's bedroom dynamics r always a treat...

Loved it.

Originally posted by: kardooks

This was so nice and warm, Areeba I love it.

Love how Twinkle shows attitude when she's not getiing attention, and even more so loves how he pacifies her. He knows his wife too well and that's what I love about them, the way they both understands each other without having to say much.

Wish we could get such scenes.

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

So simple yet such a beautiful read..the characteristics of Kunj and Twinkle are so relatable to that of the show, the way you weave your words to create admirable sentences which explodes with so much cuteness is such a treat, I couldn't help but imagine this story whilst reading it..it was captivating from beginning to end

Did you have to go ahead and make the void in my heart greater than it already is..I was already missing their bedroom scenes and you just added to that with your story..I guess your punishment is to write more to rebuild the puncture I have 😊

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

cvs need to hire you as a writer! this is my demand now!

gosh areeba this was PERFECT!!!

the way you catch every small emotion and place it together uff

i really am missing their bedroom romance on the show and honestly you could not have picked a better time to write this than now!

kunj was sooo cute in this! and twinkle 😆 such a dramabaz!

we need this back in the show!

Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is just so adorable loved it
Very well written Areeba

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Inayah, this is payback for not updating your OS Series. I'll post nice romantic piece when you decide to update! 😈

Thank you though for such kind words! I'm glad you liked it and it means a lot that you appreciated my writing style!