TWINJ OS - DILWALE DULHANIYA LE JAYENGE

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Hello all. Thanks for the wonderful response for my first os. So here is onother one. Hope you all liked it and if you don't then don't blame me its your fault only, Your positive response encourage me to write another story. Haha just kidding guys positive negative both feedbacks are always welcome.

This is unedited so pls bare with all the mistakes.

So this os is based on the ongoing track of tei.

TWINJ OS - DILWALE DULHANIYA LE JAYENGE

At taneja's house. Twinkle was in her room standing infront of mirror. She was blushing hard while looking at her mehandi of both hand.

Twinkle to herself - kal ka din mere aur kunj k liye bahot special hai. Kal hum dono finally firse shadi k bandhan me bandh jayenge. Kal ke din mere or kunj ke pyaar ke jeet hogi or us yuvi ki haar hogi.

Suddenly some one hold her by her waist from her back & twinkle recognize that it was none other than kunj. Kunj was snuggling on her neck when twinkle spoke

Twinkle - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho kunj?

Kunj - actually main yaha tumse ye kehne aaya tha ki.. he turns her around & takes both her hand in his & looking at her mehandi sing " mehandi laga k rakhna doli saja k rakhna, lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna yani ke main" & he pulled her closer to him

Twinkle was blusing so hard.

Twinkle - accha. While pushing him away she spoke "Mere shah rukh khan ye filmy baate band karo or jao yaha se tumhe pata hain na shadi k pehle dulha dulhan aise nahi mil sakte.

Kunj - twinkle tujhe nahi lagta tu ye sab kuch bahot seriously le rahi hai. Dekh hum dono ek dusre ko pati patni maante hain ye shaadi to hum sirf yuvi ko dikhane k liye kar rahe hai. To ye sab rule follow karne ki jarurat nahi hai.

Twinkle - kunj mujhe na bahot dar lag raha hai.

Kunj - dar ? kis baat ka dar

Twinkle - kal sab kuch jaise humne plan kiya hai vaise hi hoga na. agar yuvi ne firse kuch kar diya to. Tum jante ho na vo kaisa hai. Mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai agar usne firse tumhe kuch kar diya or tum kal mandap tak pahoch hi nahi paye to?

Kunj - twinkle aisa kuch nahi hoga. Tuna apne dimag me se sare negative thoughts nikal de. Sab viase hi hoga jaise humne plan kiya hain. Tu tension mat le.

Kunj noticed that twinkle was still worried so to cheer her up he started acting like srk from DDLJ.

Kunj - "are senorita mere jaise bade bade logo k sath rehkar bhi tum yuvi jaise chhote chhote logon se darti ho" dekhna kal us villain ka hamare lovestory me the end hoga.

Twinkle - while smiling but kunj tum shayad ye bhool rahe ho ki DDLJ k villain yani ki Amresh puri Kajol k father the isliye vo apni beti khooshi k liye maan jate hai or tab unki lovestory ka happy end hota hai,but hamari lovestory ka villain itni aasani se haar nahi manega.

Kunj - are senorita tum tension mat lo "main hoo na" he spoke while spreding his arms. Tum dekh na hamari story ka bhi happy ending hoga. Kal ye dilwala apni dulhaniya leke hi jayefa or vo younger version of Amresh puri vo sholay ke thakur ki tarah khada khada dekhta hi reh jayega par kuch kar nahi payega.

Twinkle couldn't control her laughter as kunj call yuvi younger version of Amresh puri.

Twinkle - hahahahaha kunj younger version of amresh puri tum na kuch bhi bolte rehto ho.

Kunj - are ha hum na ek kaam karenge. DDLJ me kaise amresh puri kabutaron ko daane daalke bulate hain hum na bahot sare daane yuvi ko gift me deke jayenge. Hum dono ki shadi k bad to vo fir se akela ho jayega to usk pas kuch kaam nahi rahega to vo terrace pe baith k kabutaro ko bulayega oo oo ooo oo karke (Kunj act like amresh puri did in DDLJ).

Twinkle now burst in to laughter. She had tears because of laughing.

Twinkle - kunj bas ho gaya. Aur kuch mat bolo varna mai has has k mar jaungi.

Kunj - aise kaise mar jayegi. Main tujhe marne nahi doonga. Abhi tak to hamare bacche bhi nahi huye.

Twinkle blushed after hearing this

Twinkle - kunj chalo ab tum jao mujhe sona hai agar main soungi nahi to mujhe dark circles aa jayenge or main kal shadi me acchi nahi dikhungi. Or mai nahi chahti log bole ki dukhan kitni kharab dikh rahi hai.

Kunj - oh hello tu mandap me mujhse shadi karne aane vali hai ki logon ko apana bridial look dikhane.

Twinkle - vaisa nahi hai kunj

Kunj - to kaisa hai twinkle. He pulled her closed to him & started caresessing her cheek.

Twinkle just kept staring at his eyes & she lost.

Kunj - twinkle mai kya keh raha tha ki hamari wedding to kal honehi vali hai or abhi night hai to kyu na hum apni wedding night kal k bajay aaj celebrate kare.

Twinkle - kya??? Kya kaha tumne?

Kunj - yahi ki kyu na hum apne suhagrat aaj manaye.

Twinkle - kunj tumhe nahi lagta ye kuch jyada ho raha hai

Kunj - jyada kaha abhi tak to kuch bhi nahi hua hai hum dono k bich.

Twinkle - kunj tum na bahot besharam ho gaye ho.

Kunj - are is me besharmi vali kya baat hai. Apne biwi se hi demand kar raha hu kisi or ki biwi se nahi.

Twinkle - aaj kal tumhari demands kuch jada hi badh gaye hain. nahi abhi kuch nahi jo demand karna hai kal kar lena. Abhi tum jao mujhe bahot nind aa rahi hai.

Kunj - with a poute "pls twinkle ek kiss to de sakti hai na"he begged

Twinkle - no maine kaha na nahi matlab nahi

Kunj started walking towards the door with sad expressions then suddenly twinkle grab his hand. She came close to kunj and kissed him on his forehead & then both cheek. Kunj thought that now she would kiss him on his lips so he closed his eyes. Twinkle goes near to kunj they were just inches apart. Twinkle then just pulled his nose and says

Twinkle - aaj k liye itna bas ho gaya, kuch kal k liye bhi chod dete hai, she said while smirking.

Kunj - thik hai lagta hai mujhe kal tak issi se kaam chalana padega. Lekin kal tujhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta. Dekh na kal jaise mai bolunga vaise hi hoga kyunki tujhe to mai kuch bolne hi nahi dunga.

Twinkle - thik hai kal ka kal dekhte hai. Abhi jao and she pushes him out of the room.


so thats it. hows it?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahah Yuvi younger version of Amrish Puri 😆
Beautiful OS 😳
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it
Well written 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so adorable
Loved it
Loved Kunjs dialogue-aise kaise mar jayegi. Main tujhe marne nahi doonga. Abhi tak to hamare bacche bhi nahi huye.
so cute very well written trupti
Pls do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww Kunj is a darling
and poor kunj every time someone interrupts their romantic track
but twinkle will pay soon :))
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Hahah Yuvi younger version of Amrish Puri 😆
Beautiful OS 😳
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it
Well written 👏


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Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is so adorable

Loved it
Loved Kunjs dialogue-aise kaise mar jayegi. Main tujhe marne nahi doonga. Abhi tak to hamare bacche bhi nahi huye.
so cute very well written trupti
Pls do write more


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