TEI OS: Pyar Ka Izhaar, Dekha Na Jaye - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Areeba this was funny, hilarious. Romance khullam khulla in front of family was👏 and uv😆. Hopefully something like this is shown in the show. Love❤️ u areeba for this os. People like uv need the jolt. Sun na achcha was funny. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
that was the best thing ive ever read !!!
suberb , you rocked this one so well
hayee, Im smiling big right now
it was brilliant
I am prayin that this happens now
dude, you are just awesomeee
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

res

so excited to read this!! and omg you wrote this soo quick!!
i'm heading out to my PT session, will read it as soon as i get back :)


unres
this was even better than i imagined 😆😆
omg you really had me cracking up at everything!!
"she's my gf" and then kunj's response to yuvi saying she's his wife
and omgg the khullam khulla romance in front of yuvi's face 🤣
i loved it areeba!!! (i read it twice already!)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so great for so many reasons I really really hope the CVs take this route! We see the family bonding of the Sarna's as they all come together to protect their bahu, we get so much adorable Twinkle-Kunj moments and desperate Yuvi! We'll get to see Sidhant's comic timing which is deffo one of his strongest points damn! I think they'll make it more emosh and sad tho!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajna_fc

THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!😃

i loved it.Hope that this happens in the show yaar. Saachi mein.



I tried! Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshi2000

OMG! this is just amazing

Lol loved Twinkles answers they were bang on.
Thanks for writing this OS it actually gives me more hopes.
I really hope something like this happens in the show
then it would be awesome



Thank you Harshi! Definitely wrote it to lighten the mood and glad it worked that way.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: teddyyy

OH MY GOD AREEBA IM CRYING FROM LAUGHTER RIGHT NOW. This was epic! You're such an amazing writer, I loved this so much. Oh how I wish Twinj would shut Yuvi up like this! Khulam khula romance! It's so absolutely beautiful how precious these two are. Lmfao @ how Cherry shut him up too and the Anita scene was hilarious. The dialogues were amazing and I loved loved how you set up every scene. So good buddy! <3



Thanks a bunch Teddyyy!! Not amazing, it's super abrupt and the ending is a little over the place. You guys are too kind to accept it as it is.

LOL Cheery wanted the pack of unopened popcorn 😆

But i wish I could'v come up with something more insulting for Anita! Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dksamma

Areeba that was simply brilliant! And I loved the Acha sun na feels lol
I need to see something like this on the show! The fans are owed that much! Thank you for this ray of sunshine on this dark day :)



The "Acha sun na" gives so many feels omg I cannot. I love the track on-air but i'm so romance deprived as well!!

Glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni101

Omg! This was hilarious 🤣 🤣
Lovely os. It was amazing.
Truly loved it to the core.
Haayee the "acha sun na" gives me soo many feels 😳
Twinj surely showed Yuvraj his place.
I really liked how they were openly having romance with each other 😊
I can actually imagine Yuvi's face 😆
I hope something like this happens in the show.
Great work!



I know, the dialogues were really fun to write!

I too hope they have something similar to go on-screen.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

This was AWESOME Areeba 👏
I absolutely loved it! 👍🏼
I really hope something like this happens in the show


Thanks Anisha! I tried! 😊

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