Twinj OS: Twinzies! - Page 8

Originally posted by: UncrownedQueen

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That is so sweet of you!❤️

Well i will definitely be waiting for more stories from you❤️😳

Gosh I know! 😆I love writing Twinj banter too😆🤣

I see you put something up, I'm gonna read it in a bit hehe :)) My brain is already trying to think of a new story LOL, this is fun work for once.

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

AHHH...BRUH YOU JUST DID NOT

I AM SOOO PUMPED!

Unres!!

Hayooo rabba! Itna pyaara pyaara likha hai!

It was super duper uber cute!

I loved how you managed to keep Kunj and Twinkle in character with their bickering and flirting and SO CUTE!!

And I don't really have to mention this, but Raman Mama and Cherry were such a treat!

Twinkle bab, you are in labor! I think Mahi will understand the situation and forgive you for missing the graduation party!😆😆

Overall, really cute and well written.

kAUN KEHTA HAI TU LIKH NAHI SAKTI?!

Omg I just saw this buddy! Thank you sooo much, I have the BIGGEST smile on my face hehe. I really truly love you, so sweet dude. And I know I feel like Twinkle would be slow to realize LOL so I decided to add that.

And me hehe *hides behind bear* it was my first time so I guess I surprised myself too haha? But seriously thank you, everyone's response made me explode with happiness!

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Hehe I'm a mole?? Jk, Inayah you have blown me away with your words and I am so so happy that I pleased you with this piece! Haha so many people keep telling me to write more and I think I may have to agree LOL.

I've been seeing so many pregnancy stories lately so I decided to write my own hah. Omg you're too kind yaar, thank you so much! I love when I can visualize stories so the fact that you were able to with mine is just omg 😆

Thank you thank you thank you! <3

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

A metaphorical mole😆

Your story has exhilarated so many people..story telling is definitely your forte..one talent of many and I hope to see all types of genres written by you..can I look forward to an angst filled story next?..or is that being a bit too greedy!

Trust me if I can't visualise the story when reading it then it's not worth my time..thats the whole point of reading, to be in the feel of the moment and connect with the story..your story did just that whilst reading it

Always welcome love x

Oh thank god :P I prefer being a bear LOL.

Oh my goodness stop I'm blushing LOL. Okay so angsty stories are my absolute favorite so I shall try to build my way up to one so you might have to endure a cheesy or a middle one before I can get there haha, but I shall try!

Again, I love you hehe, your words are truly encouraging!

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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

I'm here 😎

Sorry i took so long!!! *hands over cookies and a couple of hugs thrown in*😳😆

OMG!!! Eeek!! I can't belive you!!! you say you cant write and yet this is what you throw our way? Holy moly this is all kinds of cuteness overloaded! 👏

This was just the thing to give me a Coke-like energy boost after studying like a maniac! (Which wasn't too bad today!) Except that I've been on my laptop for like 20 minutes and I still haven't started watching the Criminal Minds episode like I planned to. -_-" Thanks, Teds😆

No, really. Thanks!

On a side note at this rate, I'm a Sheldon Cooper under development lol. Imma die studying

I have to say though, I laughed at the 'nok jhok' part. I seriously just laughed [silently, though, so V(lol we are using code words now) wouldn't think I was completely off my rocker!], pretty much because I knew where this was going. 😛

Lemme try to comment on this objectively though.

The premise was just so sweet. Pregnancy stories are the cutest and my babies are adorbs like always.

Lol cherry sarna is hilarious. I'm impressed, no worries Zaw, I'm impressed in a harmless kinda way. 😆😃

Can I just squeal in joy? cause I'm legit doing that reading the cute bedroom scene.

(oh now I realise that this aint very objective so scratch the objective part lol)

Although I read 'tranquility' in one of the sentences and I went like Naz is here.. 🤣

(I have lost it, havent I?)

And just when I thought you forgot your BAE, you brought him right in!

Cherry and Maamu fighting over food, this is something I can visualize without any aid! 😉

it was again hilarious

Kunj darling your family is so better than cable 😆😆😆

LOL cherry needs to patent his ideas I tell you. He'd be filthy rich and in a sense so will Zaw and we all could live off their money. God I can so be an evil genius and I'd totally rock that look now won't I?

But seriously, he suggested they tape the whole thing? Now thats sure signs of genius 😆

Teds, its like Rinni is etched into your mind lol

the reactions, were spot on bro! 😉

The whole shot made me so so happy

I'm gonna treat u with cookies

remember , COOKIES SHALL RULE THE WORLD 😆😆🤣

*lays out cookies and milk*

Lol I better stop before this comment gets bigger than the shot itself

on a quick note, I love you teds

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P.S I'm so gonna read this again 😉

teddy you wrote an OS!!!