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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

RESSS! I literally have not read a word of this but I just knew what it was as soon as I saw your name 😆 Working on a paper right now, this will be my prize once I'm done LOL. I am hoping for a shirtless Kunj 😉 Will be back later, you'll prolly see my comment in the morning haha.

^ I just realized how stupid I am, OFC Kunj is gonna be shirtless. Okay I need to go finish so I can come back LOL.
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Omg Inayah, holy cannoli. I don't mind being fooled that badly every month if this is the prize! It's nearing 3am here and I am like just omg. Honestly your writing skills and ability to pen your ideas down so beautifully never fails to impress me, you truly are a gifted writer! I adored the way you showed these two with the growing sexual tension and the extreme hesitancy. Hayeee Kunj ONLY cared about her feelings, her being comfortable, just everything was so pure and beautiful. I love these two and I love how you depicted the moment they become one. I would say more but you basically just deserve all types of praise haha. So so beautifully written, loved it!

And good luck with all your exams and omg enjoy your brother's wedding! <3

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Good Lord that was so tastefully written and so wonderfully sketched out. I have literally no words! Really worth the wait!

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: teddyyy
RESSS! I literally have not read a word of this but I just knew what it was as soon as I saw your name 😆 Working on a paper right now, this will be my prize once I'm done LOL. I am hoping for a shirtless Kunj 😉 Will be back later, you'll prolly see my comment in the morning haha.

^ I just realized how stupid I am, OFC Kunj is gonna be shirtless. Okay I need to go finish so I can come back LOL.

You know me too well 😆

I hope is suffices enough as a gift..it may not be the best but I hope it pleases you to a certain extent

Well..I haven't emphasised on a shirtless Kunj but just imagine him shitless when you reach the mature content 😆

I look forward to reading your view and input x

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Y dnt u kill me once and for all..

This ws perfection.. Whenever i see ur name below the OS..

A smile make its way on my face... And i knw tht i am in for a treat...

I jus Love ur writings!!!

Keep writing babe... I am ur Fan..

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

This is beautifully penned.
Loved it.

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zaara610

@zaara610

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

beautifully written..hot os..😳

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

I.. Umm. Uhh i don't know what to say. I'm a mess right now. Struggling to form a coherent sentence.

This was hawt and cute at the same time.

Tee-hee i saw your name and broke into a giddy laugh cus i knew we are getting a hawt hawt story.

Jumping-jellybeans this was so beautifully written. I can't even tell ya how i feel.

Your stories are simply amazing.

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

You know me too well😆

I hope is suffices enough as a gift..it may not be the best but I hope it pleases you to a certain extent

Well..I haven't emphasised on a shirtless Kunj but just imagine him shitless when you reach the mature content😆

I look forward to reading your view and input x

You were wrong :P it was the best and it pleased me to a huuuge extent haye!

Updated my spot hehe :D