OS: Submission - Page 2

Originally posted by: teddyyy

RESSS! I literally have not read a word of this but I just knew what it was as soon as I saw your name 😆 Working on a paper right now, this will be my prize once I'm done LOL. I am hoping for a shirtless Kunj 😉 Will be back later, you'll prolly see my comment in the morning haha.

^ I just realized how stupid I am, OFC Kunj is gonna be shirtless. Okay I need to go finish so I can come back LOL.
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Omg Inayah, holy cannoli. I don't mind being fooled that badly every month if this is the prize! It's nearing 3am here and I am like just omg. Honestly your writing skills and ability to pen your ideas down so beautifully never fails to impress me, you truly are a gifted writer! I adored the way you showed these two with the growing sexual tension and the extreme hesitancy. Hayeee Kunj ONLY cared about her feelings, her being comfortable, just everything was so pure and beautiful. I love these two and I love how you depicted the moment they become one. I would say more but you basically just deserve all types of praise haha. So so beautifully written, loved it!

And good luck with all your exams and omg enjoy your brother's wedding! <3

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Good Lord that was so tastefully written and so wonderfully sketched out. I have literally no words! Really worth the wait!

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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

I.. Umm. Uhh i don't know what to say. I'm a mess right now. Struggling to form a coherent sentence.

This was hawt and cute at the same time.

Tee-hee i saw your name and broke into a giddy laugh cus i knew we are getting a hawt hawt story.

Jumping-jellybeans this was so beautifully written. I can't even tell ya how i feel.

Your stories are simply amazing.

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Wufff...this was pure perfection dude!!!

Loved every single thing about it, from the title 9which I especially loved) to their feelings, their tension and finally their consummation.

It was beautiful!!!!

Inayah this was just ☺️

Okay wow! I loved it. To write something this well for this genre (which my friends who write along these lines tell me is very tricky to not make it trashy) shows how incredibly talented you are! Bravo!

So passionate and hot. Loved it☺️