OS: Submission

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wufff...this was pure perfection dude!!!

Loved every single thing about it, from the title 9which I especially loved) to their feelings, their tension and finally their consummation.

It was beautiful!!!!

Quote

-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: teddyyy
RESSS! I literally have not read a word of this but I just knew what it was as soon as I saw your name 😆 Working on a paper right now, this will be my prize once I'm done LOL. I am hoping for a shirtless Kunj 😉 Will be back later, you'll prolly see my comment in the morning haha.

^ I just realized how stupid I am, OFC Kunj is gonna be shirtless. Okay I need to go finish so I can come back LOL.
----------------------------
Omg Inayah, holy cannoli. I don't mind being fooled that badly every month if this is the prize! It's nearing 3am here and I am like just omg. Honestly your writing skills and ability to pen your ideas down so beautifully never fails to impress me, you truly are a gifted writer! I adored the way you showed these two with the growing sexual tension and the extreme hesitancy. Hayeee Kunj ONLY cared about her feelings, her being comfortable, just everything was so pure and beautiful. I love these two and I love how you depicted the moment they become one. I would say more but you basically just deserve all types of praise haha. So so beautifully written, loved it!

And good luck with all your exams and omg enjoy your brother's wedding! <3

Your too kind love..I'm glad you enjoyed the read..thank you so much for the much needed luck x

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Good Lord that was so tastefully written and so wonderfully sketched out. I have literally no words! Really worth the wait!

Overjoyed that you enjoyed the read..thank you :)

Quote

-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Y dnt u kill me once and for all..

This ws perfection.. Whenever i see ur name below the OS..

A smile make its way on my face... And i knw tht i am in for a treat...

I jus Love ur writings!!!

Keep writing babe... I am ur Fan..

[/QUOTE]

I'm still learning..comments like these motivate me to write more, so thank you

Quote

-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
I.. Umm. Uhh i don't know what to say. I'm a mess right now. Struggling to form a coherent sentence.
This was hawt and cute at the same time.
Tee-hee i saw your name and broke into a giddy laugh cus i knew we are getting a hawt hawt story.
Jumping-jellybeans this was so beautifully written. I can't even tell ya how i feel.
Your stories are simply amazing.

Awh your so cute..I'm glad you enjoyed it..oh man!..am I labelled as the girl who writes hot stories 😆

Thank you so much though..your comment plastered a huge smile onto my face

Quote

-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Wufff...this was pure perfection dude!!!
Loved every single thing about it, from the title 9which I especially loved) to their feelings, their tension and finally their consummation.
It was beautiful!!!!

Thank you so much..I'm overwhelmed that you enjoyed the read :)

Quote

Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Inayah this was just ☺️

Another beautiful piece

I hope you get punishments more often more cruel pranks 😆

Quote

dksamma

@dksamma

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Okay wow! I loved it. To write something this well for this genre (which my friends who write along these lines tell me is very tricky to not make it trashy) shows how incredibly talented you are! Bravo!