TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Nemo i'm really sorry abour being this late. But finally here i am 😎

Dude, this part was so good. I dont even know where to start. At least Sarna is getting some action here, cvs hav cast a dry spell in the show. 😆

Lmao cherry did try to warn her but she paid no heed, given their last interaction that was bound to happen but she so should have listened to him. OMG she turned away. Kunj Sarna in that position is a sight to behold. But then again, she seems immune to his charm. But then i feel they are falling for each other, slowly that is.

Kunj Sarna in nothing but his sweatpants! OMG bro, I am mess after reading that. Scratch mess, i'm a big piece of goop.

I loved how he apologised and how twinkle didn't feel intimidated by the guys anymore. They are getting hsed to each other.

And seriously i'll be looking forward to the update. This is seriously my favorite fic here

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kardooks

@kardooks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Inkheart

I totally agree with everything you just said. Cherry's good for nothing one-liners is what stands out mostly for him😆. Its one of his best qualities. I too admire how quickly Twinkle and the guys are warming up to each other. I loke this new found sort of twisted friendship between. What will really make me happy is if Twinkle runs into a hot, wet and dripping half-naked Kunj just after his morning shower
I'm totally visualizing this right now. Anyways that was suberb and awesome. Please do continue.

Dude I like you already, I think I will get hot, half naked and dripping wet seeing him like that.

Nemo take note, although I could have totally pictured the scene of Twinkle seeing Kunj lying sexed out and partially covered on the bed.

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Ahhh...this was so amazing! It was short but beggars cant be choosers. And I am willing to take whatever I get!!!

I love this story, its just so catchy!

Cant wait for the next part👏👏

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: teddyyy
HA RES; got my next 5 minute break at a perfect time😆
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Nemo I seriously don't think I tell you enough how much I love you because every time you update this story, I get so happy no matter what's going on and I have to read the update at least twice before I can stop smiling like a buffoon and formulate a response! Like I think I'm slowly losing it because now instead of just fangirling over fictional characters I'm fangirling over real life people and their writing ahem cough cough, you and Areeba LOL. Legit you two blow me away so much I can't! And Shakti & Natasha HAYE my feels. But like I think this is officially my favorite story on the forum like I can't with all the feels it gives me!

Firstly the last name thing will never stop being cute. It reminds me of my bestie & I so much that I think that's why I love it LOL. I'm gonna start with the heart attack Twinkle had. She was mad, I would be blushing profusely at seeing a Kunj Sarna run after me in JUST sweatpants. Oh Lordy I can just imagine the beautiful sight. I find it hilarious how good for nothing Cherry tried to warn her but she waved him off because he's good for nothing lmfao but she should've listened :P Kunj was not in the best states omg I'm just so happy she didn't see a girl in there!

As much as that scene made me laugh and increased my heartbeat lmao, the scene with Yuvraj!!! Omg I love how you mentioned a mutual unsaid agreement but then he stalks up to her like they are old pals and all the girls be like vuuut. You made my heart so happy! Not even sad the update was short because the ending was perfect, I loveee how all the guys are becoming buddy buddy with her like awwwie! I was waiting for this haha.

I'm so freaking happy you're updating tomorrow, if you haven't guessed, this was a beautiful update! I love you :P

PS. So happy I got the first spot LOOOL.

First comment Teds, I'm not even surprised 😆

AWHHH TEDS! 🤗 Dude seriously you really know how to boost someone's ego 😆 You're giving me wayyy too much credit here bruh, but THANK YOU SO MUCH! Honestly your comments make the effort (especially for us lazy people) so worth it! You are officially at the top of my most amazing people list 😎

I was sooo tempted to make Twinkle walk in on Kunj IN action and then I thought I'd save myself the abuse so the aftermath was my next best shot 🤣 Glad you enjoyed it!

You have to befriend the bestie before you move onto your main target. Its protocol. That was the main intention behind that scene with Yuvi and Twinkle. I'm so shallow I know 😆

I'm so glad you liked it Teddy! I'm so terrified of disappointing you because I swear youre like the most ardent reader right now 😳 So I'm here telling myself no pressure at all, I got this 😆

Love you too bruh!

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: kardooks
Nemo I love this!!
Although I don't know why Twinkle turned around I surely would have watched.
Why do I get the feeling that they are starting to fall for each other, the change in Kunj's attitude even his roommates are noticing, love how Cherry have become such an important figure in everyone's story these days, just would not be the same if we don't acknowledge Cherry good for nothing.
Well Done, anxiously awaiting on the update👍🏼

Karen I swear when I was writing it, I knew you'd d say that! 😆

Are they starting to fall for each other? I think they still have a long way to go but they've begun to realise each is not as bad as the other thought 😳

Cherry is a must, just as KuVi are a necessity. My eternal Baes.

I had to incorporate Cherry's line because when I wrote the last part someone mentioned if I could make Cherry use it so I thought why not burh? 😆

Thank you so much dude!

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wow...awesome update...
Kunj behavior is changing...
It's nice...
Update next part soon...

Thank you so much!

I dont think its changing, its more that Twinkle is finally seeing that side of him 😳

Will do soon😳

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: adinats07
very nice updates... ahhh waiting for the next part... keep on writing... atleast good to read this then watch the show :)

Thank you so much!

Its such a different concept from the show so I guess its a change 😃

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Loved the update 😳
Continue soon

Thank you Anisha 😊

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Inkheart

I totally agree with everything you just said. Cherry's good for nothing one-liners is what stands out mostly for him😆. Its one of his best qualities. I too admire how quickly Twinkle and the guys are warming up to each other. I loke this new found sort of twisted friendship between. What will really make me happy is if Twinkle runs into a hot, wet and dripping half-naked Kunj just after his morning shower
I'm totally visualizing this right now. Anyways that was suberb and awesome. Please do continue.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 😆

Thank you so much for your lovely words! 😳

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: 17.sonal
Unres

Okay.. May i b in any cornor of the earth.. I am dead sure tht i am not gonna leave this story unread..
I read it in morning...i had jus woke up and i checked my mail,. Voila..!!! U had updated...i read it asap ... But my eyes wer still drowsy... So i res it...hehehe... But i had to read it again na..
Okay.. Lemme 1st giv u a hug...i did slightly pester u for the update.. I hope u remember...hehehe...and i finally had it. And the 3B is coming tonight.. So more happy...
Abt this piece of works... Dude it gives me a reality touch...
College life escapades r my favorite...and u very delightfully giving it...
Twinkle.. Uff.. Taneja.. Which boys call her is jus perfect... I use to call ppl the same way in college... 😆😆
The bonding of the boys is exactly like it shud b ...
Cherry being the funnu guy..and his patent " Good for nothing ",
The tutoring after all not a bad job.. And above all tutoring a hunk..
Twinkle's presence seemed taken very nycly by the boys..
May b later on..she my chill with thm as bro buddies...
Jus my Imagination... Having A Guy friends is kinda Fun..
I cn keep blabbering... I love this story and... i love. U...
😳

Waiting...
Waiting...
Waiting...

Sonal! Omg I'm so glad you decided to drop a comment buddy! Yes I remember our last convo about updates and I realised its about this got an update 😆

It makes me soo happy as a writer to know you read it whilst half asleep and then again afterwards. thank you so much dude! 😳

I love high school/college romances so I'll try my best to not disappoint in the updates to come. I've had plenty of guy friends, in fact I still have more guy friends than I do female so I know bro-buddy equations pretty well 😆

Thank you so much again for your kind words, lots of love right back at you! 😳

Tonight, watch this space 😆