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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice...😊😊
pls continue..
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Hi all here is the second and last part of this ts! Sorry for the delay it is quite an emotionally charged chapter so had to take breaks in between. Hope you understand my Hindi. This isn't as good as the stories posted on the forum by our very talented and experienced writers! Hope you like it. Thanks everybody for your love and comments gave me confidence to complete the story! Sorry if I missed replying to anybody's comments. Enough of my blabbering. Here goes the last part!

Part 2: Found

Hospital
Manohar gained complete consciousness and the first thing he uttered was Twinkle's name. The nurse rushed outside.
Nurse- Patient ko hosh aa gaya hai aur woh kisi Twinkle ko baar baar bula rahe hai please aap mai se jo bhi Twinkle ho woh andar aa jaye.
Usha- Us manhoos ko ye kyu bula rahe hai? Aur to aur woh manhoos yaha hai bhi nahi koi baat nahi hum hi jayenge aur unhe samjha denge.
Usha, Kunj and Bebe head inside.
Manohar- Twinkle, Twinkle kaha hai? Woh nahi ayi mujhse milne?
Bebe- Monu woh ghar pe hai. Ghar bhi kisi na kisi ko sambhalna hoga naa.

After two days
Sarna Mansion
Manohar is brought home. Everybody welcomes him but he doesn't pay any attention to all of it he just walks in and starts calling out for Twinkle. This gets on Usha's nerves and she yells
Usha- Kyu bula rahe ho ap us manhoos aur apshaguni ko! Aaj usiki vajah se aapki ye halat ho gayi hai! To kyun bula rahe ho aap usse?!
Manohar (hell angry, shouts)- USHA!!(raises his hand to slap her then takes it down on realising what he is doing) Tum aisa keh bhi kaise sakti ho?!
Usha - Waah to aap uss ladki ke liye mujh pe apni patni pe haath uthaenge?
Manohar- Bas karo Usha tumne Twinkle ko bahut bhala bura bol liya! Batoa woh kaha hai?
Bebe- Manohar, she tells everything that happened that faithful day at the hospital.
Manohar in shock sits on the sofa.
Manohar- Kunj ye kya kardiya tumne uss bechari ko ghar se nikal diya! Uski koi galti nahi thi usne to iss ghar ki aur meri izzat bachane keliye uss Mrs. Amritsar competition mai bhag liya. Hamari izzat bachane ke liye usne khud ki izzat daav pe laga di tumhe to pata hi hai naa uss logde mai uske saath kya hone wala tha, ya bhool gaye usse. Usne mere kehne par tumse jhoot bola aur kaha ki woh apni behen ke liye competition mai part le rahi hai jab ki woh uss Purvi ko pakadne ke liye hissa le rahi thi! Usne usse pakadva bhi liya aur saare saaboot bhi naashat karva diye!
Mahi- uncle aap sahi hai woh saab picture aur mms uss Yuvi ne leak karva diye hai!
Everybody is shocked then mahi shows a video in which Yuvi is confessing everything

Flashback
Yuvi is in his room and is speaking to Anita.
Yuvi - Dekha Mom in sab stupid logon ko lag raha hai ki he saab kuch Twinkle ne leak karwa diya hai inhe kya pata ki ye saab mene kiya hai.
Mahi had started to get suspicious over his behavior so when she hears him talking she uses her presence of mind and starts to record the conversation.
Yuvi- Ab bas mai mere logon ko Twinkle ko dhondne bhej dunga aur phir woh hamesha hamesha ke liye meri ho jayegi!! And he laughs his evil laugh.
Flashback ends

Mahi- Inspector please Mr. Yuvraaj Lutra aur Mrs. Anita Lutra Sarna ko yaha se le kar jaiye. Aur ye raha unke khilaf saboot.
Manohar- Thank you Mahi puttar. Dekha Kunj isse bhi akal aa gayi aur usne Twinkle ka saath diya lekin tumne uska saath chod diya! Mujhe aaj sharam aaj rahi hai tujhe aapna beta kehte hue mujhe laga ke tumhare aur Twinkle ke bich finally saab thikh ho gaya jab tumne usse manna ke liye woh antakshari rakvai lekin mai galat tha! Twinkle ki zindagi mene tumhare saath rishta jodh kar barbad karva di!
Kunj- Papa mujhe please maaf kar do.
Manohar- Kunj mujhse maat maafi mango maafi Twinkle se mango.
Kunj- Maa kya aapko pata hai Twinkle kaha gai hai?
Leela shows him the message so je calls all of her friends but she's with nobody! He decides to search in all of the Gurudwara's in and around Amritsar.

Many days pass by Kunj is getting desperate and now only a few Gurudwara's are remaining. Kunj decides to choose the farthest of them ie the one where Twinkle is staying.

Gurudwara
Twinkle is not eating much any more its like she has lost the will to live. She now doesn't even wear warm clothes as the cold has started setting. She has become like a living morgue.

Kunj reaches that Gurudwara and spots Twinkle reaching the children but doesn't confront her. He sees that she now no longer takes care of herself and how frail she has become his heart is crushed into pieces seeing her in such a condition and becomes very ashamed of his behavior. He talks to the priest there and learns how she no longer takes care of herself and rarely eats.

Later he sits to eat lungar. Twinkle sees him but doesn't give any reaction to him and serves him food and moves further. Kunj grabs her hand and stops her.
Kunj- Twinkle kaisi hai?
Twinkle- (in a cold and tired voice) Thikh hoon. Tumhe kuch chahiye to mujhe bata dena mai chalti hoon.
And she leaves.

Later that night
Twinkle had gone for a stroll as does everyday, without wearing anything warm watching the stars above in her own thoughts when suddenly Kunj comes infront of her.
At first she is startled later when she tries to leave he keeps blocking her path making her angry. Finally she got angry and all the pent up feelings and emotions from the past few days finally came out.
Twinkle- Kunj kya chahiye tumhe?! Kyun aaye ho yaha?! Jo kuch tum tab bole the vo bohat nahi tha ya ab bhi kuch bolna hai tumhe mujhe?!
Kunj(was happy that she is finally expressing herself)- Twinkle mujhe maaf kar do mai galat tha! Ab mujhe saab sach pata chal gaya hai Papa ne hum sab ko sab sach bata diya hai aur vo jo MMS aur picture leak hue the woh bhi uss Yuvi ne karwa diye the Mahi ne sab sach hum sab ko bata diya hai aur to aur ab Yuvi aur Anita Aunty ko bhi police ne arrest karwa diya hai. Please ab ghar chalo naa!
Twinkle- Waah Kunj jab Papaji aur Mahi ne tumhe saach bataya tab tumne un par bharosha karke mujh pe bharosha kiya lekin jab mai tumhare samne haath jodh kar khadi thi aur meri baat sunne ko keh rahi thi tab tumne meri baat tak nahi sunni!! Aur mujhe kaha ki hamme break lena chahiye. Kya hamara pyaar itna kamzor hai? Haan bolo na? Kya mera pyaar tumhare liye kaafi nahi tha mujh pe bharosha karne ke liye ya phir tum mujh pe pyaar hi nahi karte?! Haan mai manti hoon ki meri bhi galti thi ki maine tumhe saach nahi baataya lekin kya tumne yeh soccha ki mene tumhe saach kyun nahi bataya? Nahi! Tum to mujh par ilzam lagate rahe! Maine vo sab nahi bataya kyunki tumhare aur Papaji ke bich ka rishta pehele se hi kamzhor tha aur ye sab sunn kar tumhare aur Papaji ke rishte mai aur darar pad jatti. Tum aur Mummyji aur hurt ho jaate aur mai tumhe hurt hue nahi dekh sakti kyunki tum jab dard aur taklif mai hote ho tab mujhe bhi dard aur taklif hoti. Aur uss din jab Papaji hospital mai the uske kuch ganto pehle jo kuch bhi maine kaha vo sab sach tha lekin tum sab kuch bhool gaye aur mujhe kosne lage mujhe woh bhi manjoor tha kyunki ham sirf un logo par aapna dukh aur dard nikalte hai jisse hum aapna mante ho lekin jab tumne ye kaha ki hame ek dusre se dur rehna chahiye tab tum sab kuch bhool gaye the aur tab jo dard mujhe hua hai woh tum kabhi bhi samaj nahi sakte. Tumhe kya pata mai pichle kuch din kin halato mai jee rahi hoon! Tumhe to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki mai jinda hu ya maar gayi! Iss liye ab mujhe mere haal par chod do.
Both of them had tears running down their eyes. Twinkle turned around and started walking away when suddenly
Kunj- Twinkle please mujhe maaf kardo mujhe se bohot badi galti ho gayi hai! Twinkle please mai bhi tumse beinteha mohabat karta hoon! Twinkle I really love you please mujhe chod kar mat jao.
But it was too late Twinkle after hearing that he loves her stopped in her tracks but couldn't turn back as she felt as if the world had started spinning. She held her head and fell down Kunj saw this and rushed to her and took her head on his his lap she was smiling and
Twinkle- Kunj I love you too!

Saying this she became unconscious. Kunj quickly picked her up and put her in his car.
Their family member had already started their way to the Gurudwara as Kunj had called them after lunch stating he had found Twinkle and they had nearly reached when they again got his call stating that he was taking Twinkle to the nearby hospital and told them about her condition and requested them to directly come to the hospital.

After 3 hours
Everybody was waiting outside the hospital room. The doctor had stated that Twinkle had become unconscious due to stress and weakness due to not eating for many days!
When Twinkle finally gained consciousness she felt someone caressing her head it was Usha while Kunj was sitting on the other side of the bed. Manohar, Bebe and Leela were also present. Twinkle at first didn't recognize her surroundings then she realized that she was in the hospital.
Usha- Beta ab tumhe kaisa lag raha hai?
Twinkle - Mummyji aap? (she tried to get up but was held down by Usha's loving touch.)
Usha- Beta mujhe maaf kar de mujh se bohot badi galti hui hai jo maine tum jaise heere ko nahi pehchana!
Twinkle- Nahi Mummyji aap please maafi mang ke mujhe sharminda mat kijeye. Aap mujh se badi ho aur mujhse aise maafi mange ye acha nahi hai.
Usha- Thike puttar par ab please ghar chalo ghar tumhare bina sunna sunna sa ho gaya hai.
Bebe- Ha puttar ab tu ghar chal mujhe tumhari class bhi leni hai aise ghar chod kar janne ke liye.
Manohar- Thank you beta ab bas tum ghar chalo phir mai tumhare is nalyak pati ko accha sabak sikhaunga!
Kunj- Papa! (pouting in a cute manner making everybody laugh)
Leela- Puttar tum hamare ghar kyun nahi ayi khair chado in sab bato ko aur ab hum sab chalte hai.
Everybody left giving Kunj and Twinkle some much needed privacy.
Kunj- Twinkle ab tumhe kaisa lag raha hai? Tumne kyu nahi khaana khaya? Twinkle kya tumhe kuch chahiye? Twinkle please mujhe maaf kardo aur mujhe phirse kabhi bhi chod kar maat jao. Kyunki mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakta I love you a lot!
Twinkle- Bas Kunj mai thik hu aur ab sabhi purani bate bhool jao. Mai ab tumhe phirse chod kar kabhi bhi nahi jaungi. I love you too!!
Kunj- Waise agar tumhe yaad hai to maine kaha tha ki jab bhi tum apne aap ko koi bhi nuksan puhchaogi mai tumhe punishment ke taor pe kiss karunga! Saying this he placed a loving and soft kiss on her on her lips which she too reciprocated. After parting So ab tum jaldi acchi ho jao taaki mai tumhe punishment de saku and winked at her and placing a kiss on her forehead left to talk to the doctor.

They had finally found each other and love had found them

THE END
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome story dear

just loved it
plzzz do continue soon


Thank you di have updated please check it out.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: munaz08

I love the concept please continue


Thanks. Have updated the last part please check out and telle how it is!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zenia

very nice...😊😊

pls continue..


Thanks. The story is complete do check it out.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...they confessed everything was fine between them ...lovely updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent ending Sayli. very well written. loved it a lot <3

Please write more 😳 hope to read more from u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Wow...they confessed everything was fine between them ...lovely updates


Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

Excellent ending Sayli. very well written. loved it a lot <3

Please write more 😳 hope to read more from u


I really hope that it stood up to your expectations.
Hope my Hindi was readable being a maharashtrian it's not my first language so am a bit doubtful if you all could understand it or not.
If I get good response may post more stories as I have lots of them cooking in my mind.
Thank so much.glad you liked the ending it was very hard for me to write it as it was full of emotions.
Thanks once again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved the ending 😳

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