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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is dedicated to shaktišŸ¤—
Pati,Pani Aur Woh!
PART 1-Woh Aaa Gaya
Twinkle was sitting on her chair in the office and kunj was on the couch working on a latest project,thats when they heard some sounds coming from the living room.
Getting up kunj went outside and saw a guy in the house and cherry was asking the guy what he is doing here.
"Arrey bhai teri jaan yahan nahi hai,tujhe pata hogi kahan hai woh" said cherry.
Kunj went to them and asked what happened to which cherry replied,"Dekh na kunj kabse yeh ladhka bol raha hai iski jaan yahan tehti haj ab tu hi samjh aisse iske jaan toh iske andar hogi naa"
Bebe,mahi,yuvi also came there and yuvi very well knew who the person was and he was not happy to see him.
Kunj was about to say something when they heard a flower vase crashing on the ground and twinkle was standing there shocked,tears welled up in her eyes and she ran towards the guy who was standing in the middle of kunj and cherry,and thud,she hugged him tightly her body weight on his and he wrapped his arms around her waist and hugged her tightly.
"Rishi" she said and hugged him even more tighter,the guy was so excited to see her that her nearly picked her up from the ground and twirled her around,twinkle's cries were mixed with laughter now,and kunj stood there shocked and jealous,his fists were literally clenched at the scene infront of him,finally after few minutes they broke the hug and twinkle started crying again,Seeing tears in her eyes kunj felt bad,he can never stand her tears no matter what.
"Oye pagal hai kya tu roo kyu rahi hai jaan" said the unknown guy who was named rishi.
"Tum Tum na mujhse baat hi mat karo" she said punching her fists on his chest and he was making fake noises as if he was getting hurt.
Finally he held her hands and stopped her from hitting him and then he said in a stern voice "Bas twinkle bahut hogya,Let me say something naa I am soo soo sorry that I left without telling you and that too for soo many years but kya karo situations hi aisi thi yaar,I am soo soo soo sorry jaan"he said holding his ears and that melted twinkle's heart she smiled and pulling his cheeks said,
"Tum toh aur bhi cute ho gaye ho rishi,pehle se bhi zyada aur was kya body banali hai tumne waise don't think mai tumse naraz nahi hun,I am angry with you but for the time bieng I am forgiving you I need soo many answers and I need to tell you soo many things".
Everyone was just looking at them clueless.
Twinkle was about to tell them who he was when they heard another sound from behind.
"Rishi bhaiyya" it was bubbly who came running to him and hugged him.
"Woohoo meri princess itni badi ho gayi hao" said rishi hugging her back.
"I am so soo happy to see you back"she said.
And then rishi saw leela standing at the door he went to her and touched her feet,leela blessed him but she looked upset.
Rishi held his ears again and said"Mogamboo aunty please maaf kardo ,I am soo soo sorry" he said and in turn leela pulled his ears.
"Ooaaa Mogamboo aunty dard ho raha hai aaooaa" he said.
"Maa mat chodna iske kaan,isko toh jitn kaam maar pite utna kam hai" said twinkle clapping her hands.
"Beta ji apse toh hum kabhi naraz hi nahi the leking toh bina kuch kahe hi gayab ho gaya toh gussa toh ahut aya tha"leela said leaving his ears and entering the house.
"I know aunty I will tell you everything,but app apni beti ko bol dijiye ki mai bhi usse baat nahi karunga, mean she got married and that too without me Apne dulhe ke bina I mean twinkle toh meri sautan le hi ayi,chalo mere sath na nahi mujhe shadi mai bulaya bhi nahi"he said.
Kunj was fuming hearing him call himself Twinkle's Dulha.
And then rishi saw yuvi and he said "Oh my god aunty how come you agreed to get twinkle to him"he said making leela and twinkle confused.
Rishi went to yuvi and hugged him "Aur bhai mere sautan kaisa hai tu" he asked him.
"Mai theek hun "yuvi said faking a smile.
"I mean aunty I thought and I told twinkle too that you will never agree to get yuvi and twinkle married but yeh toh kamal ho gaya Twinkle ne apko mana liya" he said and then it struck twinkle,when rishi left he knew that twinkle was in love with yuvi.
Twinkle went to him and held his hand taking him a little away from yuvi in the center of room she said "I havnt married yuvi rishi".
Whaaattt was his reply.
Yes whats so shocking in that I mean its a long story I will tell you later she said in his ears.
"Chalo let me introduce you to my family rishi" she said and took him to bebe and said "Rishi yeh hai bebe the eldest member of our family and she s a rockstar" rishi touched her feets and took her blessings.
Then twinkle took him to mahi and introduced him to her and also told him she is Yuvi's wife.
"Wah yuvi wah I mean ek behen nahi toh dusri ko pata liya" manna padega🤣.
And then she introduced him to cherry.
Finally reaching to kunj twinkle entwined her hands with kunj and said proudly "Rishi yeh hai mere husband Kunj sarna".
Rishi smiled at kunj and shook hands with him,"So finally I met my real sautan" said rishi jookingly.
Twinkle slapped his arm and said "Bas karo ab yeh drama rishi".
Twinkle waise tune mera dil tod diya,uske tokde rokde kar diye said rishi placing his hand on his chest and leela was laughing seeing him doing so.

"Bas kar dramebaaz" said twinkle.
"I am with you rishi bhaiyya,Di ne apka dil toda hai toh uski saza toh milne chahiye" said bubbly coming towards twinkle with her hands moving in the air and damn she started tickling her,making her laugh and running around the house,"bubbly bas kar bahut ho gaya" twinkle said inbetween her laughs,finally twinkle hid behind kunj and said "Kunj please save me ab aur nahi hota" kunj glared at bubbly and she stopped still laughing.
Bubby gave a Hi-five to rishi and both of them had the victory smile on thier faces.
"Bus bhi karo ab tum sab aur rishi puttar tu ghar chal" said leela.
"Yes yes aunty but only on one condition that you will make aloo parantha for me and uske sath sath twinkle ke hath ki amazing chai"he said clapping his hands.
"Sure puttar,chal twinkle tu bhi aa jaa" said leela.
"Yes yes maa I am coming"Twinkle said.
Rishi,bubbly and leela left.
"Kunj chalo tum bhi chalo bahut maza ayega you will like rishi alot Bahut acha hai woh" said twinkle.
"Mujhe kaam hai tu hi jaa mere pass faltu time nahi hai"said kunj quite rudely.
"Ok" she said and left thinking pata nahi isse kya ho gya hai sadu kahin kaa.
Leela,bubbly,rishi were sitting on the dinning table having delicious aloo paranthas and twinkle cane there with tea.
Serving the tea to everyone she stood beside rishi,Taking a sip from the tea his expressions were like of that he is in esctacy,"twinkle tere hatho mai toh jadu hai" he said taking her hands and kissing them On the same moment kunj came there saw it,his fists clenched and he was boiling in anger,How could He I mean seriously he is kissing my wife's hands he thought.
"Arrey jiju is also here,come here jiju have parantha's with us" said bubbly coming out of his thoughts he said,
"Nahi nahi woh actually ek client aya hai so twinkle ka unse milna important hai so usse hi bulana aya tha,twinkle ka phone bhi ghar par hai" he said.
"Ohh yeh mr.singhania honge,chalo kunj mai chalti ho tumhare sath"said twinkle she was just about to leave when rishi held her wrist and stopped her.
"Abhi na jao chod kar ke dil abhi bhara nahi" he sang making kunj more angry and to his reply twinkle said,
"Dil ka kya hai dil toh bacha hai ji".
"Twinkle woh wait kar rahe hai" said an irritated kunj,"oh yeah rishi mera hath chod mai tujhse baad mai milti hun" said twinkle rishi left her hand and she went with kunj.
After the meeting was done twinkle went to her room and kunj was in the office when he heard yuvi talking to mahi.
"You know what mahi,yeh jo rishi hai na,twinkle ko bahut bada deewana hai twinkle and rishi were in a relationship earlier and from childhood they have been inseperable,dono har kaam sath sath karte the kitne bari toh ek hi room mai bhi sote the,twinkle waise bhi akele room mai rehti hai mujhe toh shaq hai kahin yeh rishi wahan bhi na pahunch jaye,twinkle ko rishi ke agge kuch nahi dikhta uski maa bhi".
This made kunj insecure and a scene flashed in his mind twinkle and rishi on the same bed no ways,he got up and went to guest room,placing the suitcase roughly on the bed he started stuffing her clothes in the suitcase twinkle came out of washroom and saw kunj doing that and she was shocked,he zipped the suitcase held it in his one hand and held her another hand in his and started taking her somewhere "Kunj kya kar rahe ho kahan le jaa rahe ho mujhe" asked twinkle but he kept quite,finally entering thier room he placed the suitcase near couch and made her stand in the center of the room "Tune kaha tha na ki tu iss room mai wapas nahi ayegu jab tak mai tujhe nahi lata so mai le ayan ho tujhe wapas abse tu yahin rahegi" he said to her Stressing on the words Tu Yahin Rahegi.
"Par kunj achanak se?"she asked him bieng confused.
"Mai tera pati hun aur tujhe meribaat manni hogi end of discussion" saying this he left.
She made some faces and started unpacking her stuff then she got rishi's message.
-message-
Twinkle ajj raat ko dinner par chale mai aur tum? Akele??
-Message-
-Reply-
I am ready Rishi
-Reply-

8:00PM Evening Sarna mansion.

Twinkle got ready in a beautifull red and black saree.

Okay so here is rishi:
She went down and everyone was seated in the living room,kunj saw her and was surprised where is she going all dressed up.
Bebe:Twinkle puttar tu kahin jaa rahi hai?
Twinkle:Ohh yeah bebe ,mai apko aur kunj ko batana bhul gayi I am going out on dinner with rishi,woh itne time baad aya hai naa so isliye,I will be late app log mera wait mat karna.
Bebe:Puttar kunj tujhe chod atta hai,akele kyu jaa rahi hai.
Twinkle:Woh bebe Rishi will pick me up and he will drop me,Dont worry I'll be back on time,bye kunj said said and he gave a her a look.
She left.
"Matlab pati ki koi izzat hi nahi hai,bina puche bina permission liye chali gayi" he thought in his mind.

-In the car-
They were in the car,rishi was driving and twinkle was looking outside the window,confused and tensed.
Rishi:Waise twinkle from the time I came back,you havnt called me what you used to call before.
Twinkle:Ohho Golo,ab happy.
Rishi:Mai toh happy hun but tum happy nahi ho,twinkle tell me what is going on,I can see that you are in some trouble.
Twinkle:Lets first eat something then We will talk on our special place like we did before you left rishi.
They had dinner in a resturant and then they went to a open place where they always went when they were friends,It was nothing but a secluded piece of land,with few trees and a spectacular view of the Sky with stars visible.
Twinkle and rishi sat on the bonut of the car like they always did before and then Twinkle rested her upper body on the glass,"So ab toh kuch bolegi bhi"said rishi.
"It all started when kunj entered my life,our families decided to get us married but we dindnt wanted it to happen,I thought I loved yuvi and he loved alish but our bad both of them were cheaters,Alisha was only behind kunj and she wanted to seperate him from his family and Yuvi was just pretending to be in love with me to take his mother's revenge,alisha left bjt yuvi stayed,he was there uske upat junoon sawas tha mujhe apna bananeka,he tried every possible way blackmailing,kidnapping and what not,and then came the turning point,yuvi came to rape me in our farmhouse,but kunj came there and saved me he covered me with his shirt bt everyone including me thought it was kunj then media started question our families so we decided to get married,usmai bhi yuvi tried to get married to me by burrying kunj in a coffin but atlast we were married,and then we started out life it was not perfect but we were like a couple with lots of tashan between them,and then she continued,and told him everything about the yuvu child drama,yuvi coming with mahi and then she took a pause,uske baad yeh ab hua,Me and kunj were soo happy we were about to confess our love for each other,but tabhi MMS
of my father in law got leaked and he got an heart attack,I knew that MMS existed but I got the Blackmailer arrested and deleted the pictures but yuvi was behind all this he framed me in this so that Me and kunj will part ways,aur aisa hi hoa kunj got very angry on me for hiding the truth and mummyji ne mujhe ghar se bahar nikal diya,next day kunj came and said to me that we need a break but woh yeh nahi samjh paya that I cannot live without him,and tears started coming out of her eyes,and then she told him about the buisness stuff and all".
"Seee twinkle first of all stop crying I know you were wrong in hiding the truth but I know you did it for a reason so you should be given a chance but I guess kunj is way to much angry and hurt maybe because he thought that you will always trust him but everything said and done He should not be so angry atleast he should listen to your point of view he is trying to isolate himself from you making makking him immune to his feelings for you so that you does not hurt him again,But thats not right dont worry,I will make everything right"said rishi.
Twinkle wipped her tears and was just staring at the stars,"Yeh stars bhi kitne beautifull hote hai naa rishi always shining"she said.
Yes I agree my jaan he said teasing her,so ghar chale he asked her.
Hmm abhi thodi der mai chalte hai ok was her reply.
Ajj yahin sone ka irada hai kya?he asked.

Nahin nahin I know kunj won't sleep Until I reach back no matter what He cares for me alot said twinkle.
It was matter of view minutes that the soathing atmosphere took over her and she slept.
Rishi tried to wake her up by he didnt wanted to break her sleep.
He picked her up in his arms and carefully placed her on the passenger seat,getting into drivers seat he drove to sarna house.
Stopping outside the main gate rishi called kunj from twinkle's phone.
Kunj:Hello twinkle where are you time dekha hai?
Rishi:Hi kunj its rishi here,actually kunj can you come to your house's enterence I am standing there twinkle is with me please take her.
Kunj:What happened to her?is she fine?
Rishi:Yes she is fine,but come fast.

Rishi picked up twinkle in his arms,her head was resting on his shoulder for support and he was standing at the door of sarna mansion,kunj slided the door open and saw twinkle in his arms,and he was in rage how dare he.
Kunj:Kya hua isse? He asked worriedly.
Rishi:Nothing she is just skeeping I thought not to wake her up actually ajj tak puri zindagi mai mujhse twinkle ki neend todi nahi gayi(I never broke her sleep) because its the most beautifull thing ever,khair Take you wife now she is so heavy damnit,he said carefully handing twinkle in kunj's arms even her sleeping for knew it was kunj who held her,she instictively wrapped her hands around his neck and rested her head on his chest.
Rishi:Waise I thought I should take her to my place,kahan itni raat ko tumhe pareshan karo but then I remeber twinkle said that you won't sleep until she comes back so thats why I brought her here.
Kunj:Thank you rishi and good night.
Kunj turned and rishi closed the door,smiling he said "Something is burning very badly".
Kunj took twinkle to uptairs and made her lay comfortably in the middle of the bed,twinkle refused to let go of his hand and he was forced to sleep beside her,he so missed her wramth,twinkle turned and hugged him in sleep and he hugged her back,and slept peacefully in her arms.
-Morning-
The morning sun rays fell on thier sleeping form,twinkle was the first one to open her eyes,she tried to get up but she was clucthed in his strong hold,she turned her head and saw kunj sleeping beside her peacefully,carefully she removed his hands from her waist and got up from the bed,getting ready she went downstairs,she thought of not waking him up because today was sunday so he should rest.
Kunj was still sleeping,but his sleep was broken when he heard some chatters outside his room,he got down from bed rubbing his eyes he went to the door and opened it,and he saw twinkle chattering with rishi,andhe was holding her hand his morning started with such a bad view.
Twinkle turned and saw kunj there,she left rishi's hand,and said,
Twinkle:Kunj tum uth gaye,mai wahin aa rahi thi tumhe uthane,Tum jao fresh ho jao mai coffe leke atti hun.
She left and rishi followed her.
Kunj:Jab dekho twinkle ki punch(tail) banke uske piche piche ghumta rehta hai.
He said getting irritated.
Rishi(Sitting on the slab):Waise twinkle can you sense something burning?
Twinkle looked around,and said nahi toh kyu?,gas par toh kuch nahi jal raha.
Rishi:Arrey twinkle tu samjh nahi rahi,acha roko do As I say,roz kunj ko tum hi coffe deti ho?
Twinkle:Yes,why?
Rishi:Today as a servent to take coffe to him and then see what happens,I can bet He will call you and you will find the coffee mug on the floor.
Twinkle:Kunj would not do that.
Rishi:Try karo.
Twinkle poured the coffee in a cup and asked a servent to give it to kunj,
Rishi:Acha sun choto,bhaiyya agar puche na ki twinkle kyu nahi ayi,toh bolna woh rishi sir se baatein kar rahi hai.
Servent:Theek hai sir.

Kunj was sitting on the couch waiting for the coffe when he saw choto coming in with coffe,he placed the coffee on the table and kunj asked:Where is twinkle,woh kyu nahi ayi?
Choto:Woh sir twinkle maam toh rishi sor ke sath hai.
That irriated him,after choto left kunj threw the coffe mug on the floor and shouted her name "Twinkle Twinkle Twinkle",twinkle was surprised to hear it and she looked at rishi.
Roshi:Dekha maine kaha tha naa,aur tune meri baat mani hi nahi jaa ab warna woh kissi ka sar phod dega.

Twinkle ran to her room and saw the coffee mug on floor and kunj in anger,
Twinkle:Kya hua kunj,yeh coffe kyu gira di air chilla kyu rahe the?
Kunj:Who made this coffe and why you didnt bring it to me?
Twinkle thought of lying
Twinkle:Kunj rishi made the coffe,woh he was making for me and him so I asked him to make for you too.
Kunj:Tum nahi bana sakti thi you know Ki mujhe tumhare hath ki coffe ki hi adat hai!
Twinkle:Itna gussa mat karo mai dubara bana ke le atti hun and she called chotu to clean up the mess.
She was in kitchen and though Soo Mr.Sadu sarna is getting jealous mai bhi dekhti hun kab tak mujhse naraz rehte hoo thank you rishi for Coming here and showing me this path,Thank you babaji.
Kahin tere dimaag mai wohi toh nahi jo mere dimaag mai hai asked rishi and twinkle winked at him.
Edited by .FlightOfEagle. - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey hrideyy
I really loved it
Jealous kunj awww... loved it
do continue soon
Can't wait !!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvtwinj

Hey hrideyy

I really loved it
Jealous kunj awww... loved it
do continue soon
Can't wait !!!!!!

Thank you soo muchšŸ˜³šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update 😳
Jealous Kunj was a treat to read
Waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update loved it.
Cintinue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg Omg Omg Omg hrideyy!!!!! Thank you so so so so so so so much!!!! It was perfect, more than just perfect!!
Abhi ki liye Res exam deke aati hoon!! Loll this was the perfect thing to read before going in to take my exam!

unres
hrideyy first a big šŸ¤— for the dedication! thank you soo much!!! i'm honored!!
and this first part was AMAZING!! i loved everything!!
it was so perfect! kunj's initial reaction to twinks hugging rishi, the way he got sooo jealous ! and uff kunj's anger with the coffee šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† made me LOL so hard!! the ending was the best part!! loved how he didn't sleep without her home!

you have to update soon hrideyy!!! thank you so much for this!! loved it!!
Edited by ...Shakti... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tooo good Hridey...
I love jealous Kunj...
Waiting for part 2..
Kya plan hoga Rishi and Twinkle ka.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jealous Kunj is my favorite
I loved it
Wow look at that anger
Rishi seems so sweet
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so nice Hrideyy Bhai...
I mean the jealous Kunj is ā¤ļø
Do update soon.. Can't wait to read further... Twinkle has her plan ready na šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing start Hridey. pls continue <3

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