TwiNj Dark FF 'Dangerous Love: JourneyThroughTheDark Part 4 pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Omg...nice update..remainded me of twilight series...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
I was really wishing to read something on twinj aur aapne update kar diya.
Thank you.
I loved it!
Haai so kunj and uvi vampire hai.
Am very excited to read how their love story will progress.
Update soon
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
just read part 1 it was amazing
they have powers...reminds me of like Damon and Stefan
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Part 2

Twinkle parked her car and marched directly to the cafeteria. She found Kunj with Yuvi as usual. She stood in front of them. Both of them looked at her confused. This time she didn't speak, just held Kunj's wrist and dragged him with her. He was so much shocked that was unable to say any thing. She went upstairs and pushed him inside an empty classroom.

"What the hell, Twinkle?" Kunj yelled after she locked the door.

"Exactly!" She yelled back. "What the hell, Kunj? What are you up to? Why are you doing all this? In one hand, you care for me, and on the other run away from me? Why?"

"Listen, I don't care about you, understand? To hell with you! Just stay away from me, OK?"

He moved to leave when she tugged his wrist and dragged him.

"Get back here!" She had a stern voice. "You don't care, is it? Then why did you came to my room last day?"

Kunj looked down to his feet as if suddenly finding something interesting with his shoes.

"Will you dare to speak?" Twinkle asked crossing her arms near her chest.

"Listen.. I..." Kunj stammered.

"Stop stammering, Kunj!" Twinkle said pissed off. "Why don't you just accept you like me?"

"Its nothing like that!" Kunj said without thinking for a moment.

"It's nothing like that?" Twinkle asked moving closer to him.

"No!" He whispered.

"Are you sure?" She asked caressing her fingers on his cheek.

"Stop it, Twinkle." Kunj said clenching his fist; controlling himself.

"I don't effect you?" She asked coming closer to his face.

She brought her lips closer to his but didn't kiss him. She wanted him to accept his feelings for her. Her hot breath filled his face. He closed his eyes to feel her. She moved her finger across his face, seducing him.

It was now out of tolerance. Kunj couldn't control himself. He tugged her wrist and pinned her tiny figure against the wall. Twinkle was taken aback by his sudden move. His finger trailed from her bare hand across her neck. His nose nuzzle at the crook of her neck. He pulled her thigh up to his hips and his hand moved thoroughly there. His nose moved from her neck to earlobes, nuzzling. Her fingers raked through his hair, pulling him closer. She threw her head back in a bliss enjoying his sweet torture.

Just then the bell rang and reality hit Kunj. He pushed her and pulled back. Twinkle looked at him confused.

"What happened?" She asked.

"I told you to stay away from me!" He burst out. "Why can't you just get such a little thing in your thick skull?"

"But I..."

"I am warning you, Twinkle. Stop doing this type of childish things of seducing me!"

He went to unlock the door.

"What the hell do you think of yourself?"

Twinkle's voice made him turn. She marched towards him and pulled his collar.

"I bet you, Mr. Kunj Sarna. You AREzg falling for me." She pushed him and he crashed the wall. "And I am not going to leave you so easily!"

She combed her messed hair with her fingers and resized her dress before leaving the room.

...

The batch drove on for a study tour meanwhile. Kunj, Twinkle along with Yuvraj joined in. They all took on their notepad and pencil with them. They reached a castle which seemed to be 100 years old. Everyone was excited. No one cared what others are doing. They went in their own world. Except Kunj, who was observing only Twinkle. Her each word, played in his eyes as a playing drum. All of a sudden, he lost her glimpse. She was nowhere to be seen.

Twinkle lost her way. She reached to a cave like place in the castle. Fear started taking over her. Tears searched way from her eyes to come out. Suddenly she felt someone behind and turned.

To be continued...

Phew! Long time guys.. How are you all? I know I made you wait long and sorry for that. My exams got over today and I couldn't control myself from writing this.

So,

#HOW WAS THE CHAPPY?

#DO YOU THINK TWINKLE WILL SUCCEED IN MAKING KUNJ ACCEPT HIS FEELINGS?

#WHAT WILL TWINKLE DO NOW?

#WHAT WILL KUNJ DO?

#WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?

KEEP GUESSING!

love,
Shirisha😊
Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Yaa your back
It was lovely.
Loved it.
Will comment later in detail as I'm a bit busy writing the update to my story and doing other preparations.
But I loved the update.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesomeee... Superbbb
Lvd it lot ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
wow its fascinating dear
i really loved it very much
kunj is trying hard to supress his feelings for twinkle
on side he is claiming twinkle is his soulmate on other he is pushing her away from him
twinkle is sherni she wonn't give up until she succeed in making kunj confess his feelings
kunj will definitely find her
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Wow...twinkle is kunj's soul mate nah...so he ll accept her..
Let's see...its getting interesting..she ll make him accept her...
Im loving it... Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
awesomw updates Shirisha. just loved it. pls continue soon. well done
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Loved thd update 😳
do continue soon

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