Twinj + Family TS: Being Poisoned COMPLETED pg 6 - Page 3

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome Shakti. you are just brilliant. cant wait for next chapters

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Don't u dare to end that there 😆😆..Will go on strike 😆

But seriously u r an amazing writer. Love to read everything penning down by u. This is another beautiful fiction

Waiting for the second part

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow awesome update dear

i just loved it

u made me cry it is really emotional

i hate uv

good mahi hear uvs plan i want something like this to happen in the show

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear

Originally posted by: tikit

First of all thank you for dedicating this ts to me and am honoured. Coming to the ts as usual it was fantastic. Hopefully happy times are ahead. . Waiting eagerly for next part.

Omg update update update. If there's anything I love more than jealous / possessive Kunj, it's broken Kunj. Hope you write that soon!!

Originally posted by: dmgomg

Omg update update update. If there's anything I love more than jealous / possessive Kunj, it's broken Kunj. Hope you write that soon!!

Amazing part Shakti... I loved it! So perfectly written

Shakti every time I think you can't impress me more with your writing because I'm so in love, you prove me wrong! Honestly this was beautiful! I LOVE angsty, emotionally demanding stories haha and this surpassed any expectations I could ever have. Twinkle so desperately trying to save her hubby and then her saas. I was like Kunj pls listen you're gonna regret it later, trust her but he didn't. Twinkle made me so proud when she tried getting to the hospital and can I just say how much I loved Mahi in your story?! Like omg when will this version of her be shown on the show! She found out, went to go save Usha, helped with Twinkle and SLAPPED Yuvi. I was so proud! You broke me with Leela and Kunj and Kunj worrying and he's so broken and the last line omg. I'm hoping you're gonna give us a plot twist like she's in coma or something because imma die and this was so perfect and omg you're the best LOL. I would write so much more but I can't formulate my thoughts well right now I just wanna hug you 😆

Very well written.