TwiNj2S:Tu Hi Mera rab Hai For Jenelle di 16.3.16 Pt1Pg1

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This was so disturbing. As much as these kind of ideas have entered my mind, I've never been able to put it down on paper so great job for taking such a bold step 👏

Coming to the story, my heart goes out to Twinkle. It's traumatising enough that she had to go through that but it's even more disgusting that the family had to view photographs of her. Yuvraj Luthra is one sick bast*ard.

looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

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--Jenelle--

@--Jenelle--

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

omg, Bhai... suberb writing😊 update soon...

Yuvi😡 How much more can this bas***d do?poor poor Twinkle. omg the photographs😲

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anisha

@Anisha-k.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

FANTASTIC BHAI!!! LOVED IT TO THE CORE!❤️

Yeh yuvi ko toh mein nahi chorunga...how i wish he was here i wud have strangled him to death!!!😡

I feel so sorry for Twinkle n kunj...i just want Yuvi to be beatewn BLANK N BLUE!!!😡

BTW thanks a lot for PM!🤗

And plzzz update the nxt part soonish😳

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Vaishali

@MeDHellsAngel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I didn't like it bcoz of the plot.

I hate such men. Cheapster. Bc log.

Nyways uh ignited anger in me so obviously uh wrote it in a convincing manner

Show yuvi his aukat.

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Very well written

Waiting for Kunj's revenge.

Edited by Duumps - 9 years ago

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Komal1298

@Komal1298

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Next part asap please hridey...!!😊

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1017333

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

I'm stunned... Hriddey that was really very intense.
UV has no bloody limits. He stooped so low?
This is one of the best pieces written by you.
Hats off my friend. I really really felt bad for twinkle, being a girl it hurted a lot more.
I hope kunj save her. And dumbo mahi proved her dumbness here also. If only mahi would have told kunj, this scenario would have never taken place.
But I totally love the way twinkle was trying to stay strong in front of UV although she was broken inside.
Hriddey seriously this story touched my heart.
Please update asap.